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NC Stokes replied to the topic Fairytale Reteling in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 6 months ago
@alia Well, why did she kidnap the princess in the first place? Was she the one who put the sleeping spell on the royal family?
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NC Stokes posted an update 6 years, 6 months ago
@ingridrd Hello! I finished reading Substitute Wednesday, but I’m just now giving you the critiques. Oops. Because I can’t make comments, I just typed up my critiques. Please forgive me if I sound harsh. I tried to critique it like a book I didn’t know the author of and didn’t know anything about.
Pg 22 –waist not waste
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Fairytale Reteling in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 6 months ago
@alia *sweeps in* Did someone say fairy tale retellings!!?? *maniacal grin* Hello, fellow Reteller! So, what has Gothel been doing in the years the royal family has been under the sleeping spell?
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Those are so neat! I especially like Destiny’s.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@kaya-young But- but my scarf… In my defense, I spend a lot more time here than SE. *waves kitting needles* Ya whippersnappers. ;P
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NC Stokes replied to the topic The Beast is Back! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel *launches self in through a window someone mistakenly left open* DEEEEEKREEEEEEEELLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
*hides behind scarf because I’m quite possibly a traitor too*
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NC Stokes replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 I’ll pray for you. I think a lot of people can relate to not being happy with how they look. :/ It definitely can get on one’s nerves. *cough*feelya*cough*
@seekjustice I’m glad to hear it!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 That makes sense how she would feel about her powers. Do you have any specific powers in mind?
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NC Stokes replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 *DISCLAIMER* I may not have been the one to call for this, because I’m not a big superhero person. I’ll try to be helpful though. *END OF DISCLAIMER. HAVE A NICE DAY*
My biggest advice would to work on all the villain’s motivations and make them human. I think you’ve got the opportunity to give Kaylee adversaries that will challenge…[Read more]
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NC Stokes replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you feel you should explain to your mom why she walked in on you downloading pictures of strangers off the internet. “He looks like my character. It’s for a collage… thing… it isn’t weird…”
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NC Stokes replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@alia I’ll pray for you guys. <3
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@ariel-ashira Heyo.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 *raises hand suddenly* *knocks over a lamp* (why was a lamp hanging in midair?) I’m intrigued.
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NC Stokes posted an update 6 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Heyo. Random fact of the day: my computer sometimes deletes random sites from my search history. (including KP, even though I’m on here like everyday) So, it deleted your goggle doc from my history and now I can’t find it. Could you give me the link again? I’m going to try to finish reading before summer break.
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That’s strange… Really strange.
Here you go. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fQ0k1esgfsGjaQYco4i5zt4Bhh27BEcdP0q8US_1ueg/edit
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It is quite weird. Thanks! Yay, I’m so excited you’re going to publish!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 6 months ago
@ingridrd Ok, this is the part where I’m honest and admit I’m behind the times. Until today, I didn’t notice that you had posted the chapters after 1 and 2. Soooo, I have some reading to catch up on. I’ll get that done by Wednesday.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@kaya-young *knits aggressively in the corner* I WILL finish this shawl before my laptop dies… 😀
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 TIL WE’RE OLD AND GRAY AND MISSING TEETH AND OUR DRIVER’S LICENCES GET REVOKED BECAUSE WE CAN’T SEE OVER THE DASHBOARD ANYMORE!!!! BUT WE’LL STILL BE WRITING BECAUSE WE’RE KAPEEFERS!!!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 6 years, 6 months ago
Aaand I forgot to post a question. Silly brain. 😉 Would your character rather not remember who they are or have awful memories they wish they could forget?
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 6 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Katie would rather be invisible, and she would probably only be visible to her mom. Brant doesn’t like anyone. 😛 Just kidding, but he would probably still rather be famous. Ogden would rather be invisible, and only visible to his niece, who went missing and he’s been trying to find, because then if someone saw him he would know it…[Read more]
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Sorry this is such a late response! I was in Tennessee for a week with limited internet access. Anyway, THANK YOU so very much for your comments and taking the time to read my story! And you were most definitely not too harsh. I needed some critical feedback. 🙂 Thanks again!
Glad to be of service! I enjoyed reading it.