freedom

@freed_and_redeemed

So a couple (by Southern definition) thoughts popped into my head as I read your plea.

1.  Exactly what @theducktator said about social status. Honestly, I’d find it kinda weird if the husband dumped not only the wife who commited the supposed crime but also the children. He has no reason. Why would he dump the kids for no…

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Hmm, that is a bit of a pickle.

Perhaps he was originally just afraid of (and a little bit for) Adinah. He didn’t hate them at first (that’s not something that happens overnight). He kept the boyd because, at the root, he did at first still love Adinah (and them) and vaguely wanted to keep them safe.

Also, he doesn’t have to…[Read more]

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*accepts tissues* His poor baby.

“The Bois?” I like it. Okay, for the plot hole. Since Felix divorced Adinah on false charges of infidelity, a good reason for a divorce if it weren’t false, instead of just kicking her out, I would assume he cares about what people think of him. A wife is decently easy to get rid of without…[Read more]

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He could have kept them because they are his biological kids and he couldn’t bear to give them up. 🤷‍♂️

By orthodox Jewish standards though they are like fully Jews because Orthodox Judaism is matrilineal.

@keilah-h @loopylin @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @ppl

Hi. I’d like to ask for everyone to pray for my Grandfather. He had a stroke Saturday night. He was released from the hospital today with thankfully what looks like no lasting effects except he can barely see. So, I just want to ask for you guys to keep him in mind. He’s had mostly minor…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed IDK who’s gonna die but I know for sure it’s gonna be tragic.

@freed_and_redeemed My reaction to Moishe talking about them shooting his wife was the same as Matthias’s lol. “like they WHAT NOW?!”

So they’re spies or something? That’s kinda cool. I also love all their names, they’re pretty unique.

And hey! We get to see Leo/Reuben and Riker! A little weird seeing them from the outside perspective of…[Read more]

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*Strangled noises*

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Please don’t kill Moishe. It may be a pretty amazing wrapup if Mathias is killed (not that you are planning to do that, I’m just a fellow writer{rather concerned btw over those choices[does he go to a camp?(If he does, is it the one Riker is stationed at?)]}), but please…that would just be…[Read more]

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I read the scene you just posted and teared up. Poor Moishe.

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I love this scene!

Welllll, you already know I like Matthias. 😛 But I think I have to agree with you—I like Moishe too. I get the vibe that he has a layered backstory, more than he might be willing to share… 🤔

@freed_and_redeemed This all sounds so cool!! I love all your new characters, I can’t choose my favorite.

@freed_and_redeemed lol how you said Riker and Leon “aren’t cooperating”

happens all the time with my characters.

oh and your new charries sound amazing

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*GASPETH*

I like this new story. A lot. Matthias sounds amazing. Charna sounds amazing.

I know it’s not a main WIP or anything, but I would like to hear more of this book whenever you have any other randomness to share. =)

@freed_and_redeemed

This is a book I’d totally read!! I’ve actually been reading too many books outside of the genre I write lately. XD Authors are always saying you should read lots of books in your genre, but I enjoy reading his-fic so much! lol! I really love this idea though! Be sure to tag me if you post any snippet of it. 😊

@trailblazer @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h

Thanks for the thoughts, y’all!! Your opinions are helping me figure this out a lot. I might just step back from it for a while, or try to write a little farther ahead in the story and see what happens.

I was gonna save this new WIP for NaNo this year buuuuut…. Yeah that ain’t gonna happen. 😂

@freed_and_redeemed ooooh I like it!!

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Um, both please!! 😁😂

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I’m liking this character! He’s interesting, despite the fact that I know nearly nothing about his backstory.

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Ok, so I love him already. XD Probably because I have a character similar to him in some ways.

I really got a feel for his personality… thoughtful, quiet, mature. Those are the things that first came to mind. I’m not sure what else to say, lol. XD But his voice is definitely different from your other characters, so tha…[Read more]