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Snapper replied to the topic Need a Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@alia
Maybe because the second book is called ‘The Choice’ (I’m guessing that in the book somebody has to choose something?) that the first book should be called ‘The Hunt’ (because they are hunting for the other organization.
Hope this helps!
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Snapper replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@bluejay
I think this is a beautiful poem. It’s like, a dictionary/thesaurus for the Fruits of the Spirit! 🙂 -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
*Melts more chairs just to be rebellious**smiles, satisfied*
@kate-flournoy @bluejay @lightningmouse(if you just so happen to still be here)
I wrote 739 words, which I pretty good for a scene which was hard to write. I fixed a few things as well that needed fixing, so I’m happy with that.
Good job to all of you! Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Well, Gentleness could include the opposite of Smaug, but you don’t want that, do you. 😉
Gentleness: polite – loving – friendly – soft-spoken – passionate without over-enthusiasm
Self-control: control – taking deep breaths to find peace – peaceThose are the main things that came to mind. I hope it helps, @bluejay! And sorry about the…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Well, Gentleness could include the opposite of Smaug, but you don’t want that, do you. 😉
Gentleness: polite – loving – friendly – soft-spoken – passionate without over-enthusiasm
Self-control: control – taking deep breaths to find peace – peaceThose are the main things that came to mind. I hope it helps, @bluejay! And sorry about the…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Dragons comes in late. When it finds out that it’s late, it melts all the plastic chairs.
*picks up the phone* @bluejay @lightningmouse @kate-flournoy @daeus
A dragon is never late, she arrives precisely when she means to.
I’m writing as well, to whatever extent I choose. See you all down the road!
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Snapper replied to the topic The Sea in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
I love the picture you put in my head, @bluejay. Good work!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Ahh. Now I gotcha! 🙂 Well, have fun on your continuing adventure, @jess! Good job!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
I was going to end in the next five minutes, but now works just as well, if that’s what you were asking. @jess
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
*picks up phone* Still writing away! @bluejay Feel free to join!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@jess , I’m starting now, just like you. (I’ve been taking notes on my story unofficially until now. But, here I am, click-clacking away.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@jess , I’m starting now, just like you. (I’ve been taking notes on my story unofficially until now. But, here I am, click-clacking away.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Oh! I’m sorry @Daeus‘ personal secrety! I had no idea. Anway, thank you for your time. Good-bye now. *hangs up phone*
Okay, just kidding. Anyone else, I’m still writing tonight.
@corissa-maiden-of-praise
@warrioroftherealm
@bluejay
@clairec
@jess
@sarah-h
@gretald
@kate-flournoy
@anna-brie
@overcomer
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Myeh. 339 words. I’ll be writing for the next half hour to forty five minutes for anyone else who wants to join or keep going.
Good job to you @jess and @winter-rose for editing. That’s one thing I usually try to avoid.
@daeus @kate-flournoy Are either of you writing from seven to eight or seven to nine or eight to nine? Basically in the time…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
I’ll join as well! See you both in half an hour (unless I get called to dinner).
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Snapper replied to the topic It's Time for War. ~NaNoWriMo'16~ in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
The dragon has changed its mind. The dragon, instead of writing an entirely new novel over the course of one month shall attempt to finish its current story. I’m already working on too much. Thanks, though!
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Snapper replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@bluejay
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Snapper replied to the topic Quick Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 1 month ago
@hope
So, when does thing get published? 🙂 I love the idea of having a jester’s apprentice!
Just a few things; I like the second better. It is shorter and with less information, it makes me want to find out what happens.
Also, perhaps the prophecy could be on the first page of the book along with the bold. That way, it’s what the reader sees…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Quick Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 1 month ago
@hope
So, when does thing get published? 🙂 I love the idea of having a jester’s apprentice!
Just a few things, I like the second better. It is shorter and with less information, it makes me want to find out what happens.
Also, perhaps the prophecy could be on the first page of the book along with the bold. That way, it’s what the reader sees…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Hello. My name is Anne Swiftblade… in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@anne-swiftblade
@kate-flournoy is not the only dragon on Kingdom. I am Dragon Snapper, (not a snapping dragon, btw) and I like mangoes. I know that Kate has a dragon pic, and I used to, but I changed it to a beautiful picture of some sort of pine tree.
I love LOTR and Narnia as well…but what is this Kingdom series you speak of? Pray tell, who…[Read more] - Load More
