Folith-Feolin

@folith-feolin

Thanks! This is the first time I’ve tried writing in present tense and I’m enjoying it so far.

@koshka

You weren’t barging in. This is super helpful, especially the map! Thank you!

@folith-feolin @keilah-h

Thanks for the help!

@folith-feolin

Thanks for the help!

(as your first chapter seemed to be told from the 1st person pov I’m going to assume that your WIP is in 1st person (I’m also assuming your WIP is a multinarrative story (meaning it is told from the point of view of multiple characters))

So this book (working title: A Dream Shattered), the sequel to A Dream Com…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @wilder-w @elishavet-pidyon @folith-feolin @sarafini @loopylin

Sorry I’m late to respond, but . . . finals, uffda. Anyway, here I am!

*some sort of warning here, but I’m not sure for what . . . abuse I guess, but isn’t that what this forum is about?*

As I mentioned earlier, Elinor and Aedan were abused by their guardians. It’s…[Read more]

@folith-feolin

That makes sense the only reason I found them was because I was listening to I see Fire on youtube and left the autoplay on and It started playing one of them.

Haha, I see. I have a love/hate relationship with autoplay 🤣

@lightoverdarkness6

I like “I see Fire” and the song from the Hobbit that he re-did. I don’t know the exact…

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@keilah-h

Funny story, I couldn’t figure out the character’s name for the longest time. Then, while searching a naming website, I came across the name “Jareth,” which apparently means “descendant” or “next in line” and I loved it. The problem was, I wasn’t sure if my brother would, so I kept it in a list of names I liked and would just always…

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@folith-feolin Yep, it’s happened a couple times before, so….

@folith-feolin My dad loves the Game of Thrones music…..

@lightoverdarkness6 Yeah, he’s one of my favorites! He has such a detailed character arc, that ties in a lot with the legends and mythology of the fantasy world my brother and I created.

Funny story, I couldn’t figure out the character’s name for the longest time. Then, while…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I haven’t seen the Transformers yet either, but I LOVE the music!! Especially ‘Auto-Bots reunite.’ I’ve seen you say stuff about Jareth before! Is he your favorite character?

@starofthenorth

I like “I see Fire” and the song from the Hobbit that he re-did. I don’t know the exact name, but it has something to do with “Misty…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

 I love music from Peter and Evynne Hollens!

I know, it’s so great! Do you have any favorites? I also like “For the Dancing and the Dreaming” and “I See the Light.”

@folith-feolin

I’ve never listened to any of his Game of Thrones songs–I try to stay away from even the music for Game of Thrones. But I love “I See Fire!” It…[Read more]

@folith-feolin

Ok cool! I could maybe find a way to do an online tour or something?

@folith-feolin aww ur poor charries!! While I don’t have a mute Charrie (yet 😉) I do have 2 charries with stutters!

one is very mild, he stutters just slightly when nervous, maybe fumbling words just a bit or stuttering the first word.

But the other, a little boy, has a more extreme stutter that he was born with and became worse over t…[Read more]

@folith-feolin

That was actually really good for 6th grade!

@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @felicity @folith-feolin @esther-c @sarafini @loopylin

Great topic! Let me go check my playlist real quick . . .

Okay, for Elinor, I think Metamorphosis II, a sad Scottish fiddle tune called My Nanny O, and “Life” by Ludovico Einaudi fit really well. I know, they’re all instrumental, but I find…[Read more]

@folith-feolin

Okay, cool! Do you sing pretty often then?

@esther-c

Yes!!! All of our family love it!! My dad and brother love it the most with probably my mom and I in close second. It’s so… authentic. Yeah… It’s so good! 😆

My mom and dad went and watched it in theaters, and then the whole family watched it for my moms birthday. Yes!! I think m…[Read more]

@esther-c

I loved reading your old writing! You had a great story idea! Maybe one day you could try to re write it. 😊

@folith-feolin

Thats awesome writing for a 6th grader!! I really enjoyed reading it!

@esther-c @folith-feolin @koshka @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @starofthenorth

Thank  you all for your replies! I enjoyed reading them.

@koshka

Take a look at how the Bible portrays evil. Does this book do the same?

That’s such a great way to sum it up!

@mineralizedwritings

Oh, this is definitely a topic that I’ve thought about.

I think the biggest thing is to separate good and evil and to make it clear that good is good and evil is evil, which is what most everyone else said. Once my dad said something along the lines of ‘if you want to read something with a lot of adultery and murder then…[Read more]