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@esther-c

Cool. I was in a similar situation a couple of years ago when I took a Drama class. They are pretty fun to write but a bit different. I am pretty sure you can get some movie scripts for free on the internet (if you want references). Generally speaking I have found that if you read the lines out loud in voices it can help you with editing.

@freedomwriter76

@princesachronicle22 and he looks great too XD his story is so SADDDDD. poor boi 😭

Thanks! And yesss, I feel so bad to hurt him so😭

@lightoverdarkness6

XD XD

Hahaha! Poor Tyler the poor adorable boy 😂❤️

This looks like fun! I might join in a bit. Also costume/kareoke sounds fun XD

@esther-c

Yw! XD

@whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6 @smiley @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @acancello

A snippet for anyone interested, it’s unedited lol

 

The smell of womens perfume and expensive aftershave fills the usually grimy hallway. Incandescent lights from above the large hall illuminates the strange mix of people. Miners wearing their usual overalls and…

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@Whalekeeper

Well It’s not a milk allergy exactly… as in I haven’t been diagnosed with that allergy… but it does make me feel bad so I ‘try’ to stay away from it XD Because of my nut allergies, I’m left drinking oat milk. Which isn’t terrible, but it’s confusing when you want cheerios… because you have to realize you are eating toasty…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I want my allegories to be recognizeable for Christians, and its okay if others see it too, but it’s not going to follow the Bible exactly, and hidden to some extent.

Yeah, that works 😄

But I think that “powers” and special abilities are okay, as long as it doesn’t have spells or involve witches, or basically anything that th…

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@savannah_grace2009

*Picks up skirts and runs after you* Wait wait wait I just joined!! New characters are totally welcome!

@mineralizedwritings

Oh no it’s okay, Seb is more than a little selfish sometimes. It was perfectly sensible for Clement to call out 😅

Yeah I was hoping to back off so Freedom could chip in.

…Please don’t tell me you h…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Heeeyy I agree with you, our stories are so hard to explain XD

I found your allegories very easy to follow… I don’t know if that was your intention, but that’s how it read XD If I showed your prologue to a non-Christian friend, they would recognize it as the Creation and Fall story. I have no idea how they would react,…[Read more]

@tharcaneaxiom

About the Golden Compass – the movie is not good at all in adapting the book. It tried to follow the plot too tightly, without capturing the essence of the story. But I digress.

The book takes an anti-Christian position, but its points are actually extremely valid when it comes to looking back at what the “church” has been, how…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper

Aww, poor seb! I feel bad for him now! I’m going to wait for freedom to get back because she hasn’t rped in awhile

My mom is gluten free also. I’m allergic to like everything (ok not actually, but a lot) thankfully I grew out of my egg allergy at 5!

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you ❤

Gotcha, makes sense. Are you the only gluten-free person in your family?

Sebastian

As Clement sped off, Seb brushed his bangs out of his face, and rolled his eyes.

It was true. He literally could not afford it.

Sure, being arrogant was fun. But it was also necessary.

The man had taken the reply the wrong w…[Read more]

@keilah-h @grcr

Gus

Gus smiled a little at that. “I’m sorry for doubtin’ you, little ‘un, but planets are the sorts of pretty stuff you hear about in schoolhouses or at Sunday school.”

@loopylin

😂 So you are well acquainted with the type.

Yeah they’re pretty unpredictable, and in that, they’re predictable 🤯 At least, that’s how I write them (…Seb, since I don’t have any other official ENTP character yet). Trying to surprising, and always one-upping people.

That makes sense then! Before I took a test for him, I could never…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

Seb sighs. “I do seem so, don’t I? It’s less that I think highly of myself, and more that I can’t afford to be anything lower.”

Clement scoffs at the lofty remark; but refuses to reply; instead speeding up to walk next to the brothers. They seemed a good bit more sensible, even if quiet.

@euodia-vision @loopylin

Marcel

Marcel swung open the cafeteria door, snacks stuffed in his pockets, and was just about to settle down next to the two kids when two more entered.

They looked older and a touch more experienced, but nevertheless, one of them, the boy, had an eager gleam in his eye.

They screeched to a halt, and the boy waved…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

YuUus please do

@calyhuge

Goooootcha. Those could be very useful, since most of the teachers don’t support the students in fights. And that way, there’s some context characters in the school, if that makes sense.

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Oh yeah, we’re at 200!!!!! *cOnFeTti*