Folith-Feolin

@freed_and_redeemed

My advice as a middle-grade writer and a YA reader:

1. Stick as much as possible to inner turmoil. Instead of focusing on how much the outward character is being damaged, focus on how the inner character is coping/struggling/whatever.

2. Instead of portraying each individual blow/whatever, gloss it all together into a simple…[Read more]

…So I was wondering – should we have a main goal for the characters to head towards? I haven’t been part of a KP roleplay that has that, but this feels like one of those.

@loopylin

Whatever you choose, I am here to emotionally support your life decisions 🥹🥹

@loopylin @rae

I think this school needs help. Like a student council or somethin.

Sebzter

Chase, the detention boy, appeared once more. He was out of breath and quite out of his mind.

As the teacher came towards them, with less enthusiasm than exhaustion, Seb noted the slight vibration coming from their barricade. It would fall down…[Read more]

Trying to tag again @kathleenramm

I think that’s her tag, might be wrong 😆

@loopylin

Ooh, I’d join if you did

@rae

I made her up but she’s an NPC, so go ahead. She might be hard to find in the dark though XD

@lightoverdarkness6

Your turn whenever you have the time : )

@loopylin

*runs up, out of breath* I’m baaack

Sebzter

“Come now!” Seb puffed quietly. “It isn’t that bad… is it?”

“If you call a huge bruise normal.”

The boy patted his own face a few times, trying to gauge how big it was, and what his definition of bad was. It felt like a candied apple had grown over his left eye.

“I hit myself with a hairb…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Hey, I’m game for letting him have a few personalities. My characters don’t get much of a say in it lol. You could actually use some of them in your actual series if you wanted to. (I’d have to change some names first, but since you’re only taking generic personalities and not their physical form or anything, I don’t actually have to c…

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@rae @keilah-h @whoever

Winston

The demon boy took some time to absorb the sight. The sun warmed up his scales, and he periodically closed his eyes to soak it in. When he could enjoy it no more, he walked west, towards where the evening would be the brightest.

Every time he came to a hilltop, he ran his hands over the sheep, as if running…[Read more]

Y’all, I’m also sad that the pictures aren’t working, because I have memes and comics and fanart, but none of it will come through. My passion is temporarily deflated.

@freed_and_redeemed

Oof idk, I feel as if I don’t know enough about your story to give ideas 😅 Maybe give him scenes where he’s missing meaningful moments with his family because he’s looking back instead of forward (you know, reliving his grief)? He could miss a child’s special event, or forget a promise he made one of them.

@loopylin

Dante deserves his own personal planet of cuteness

Sebzter

“Yes.” The boy stopped smiling.

“You obviously enjoy it, but -“

“Yeah, it’s warm and fuzzy, but it hurts. I can’t help myself, and my friends begin to wonder.” Seb blinked and tipped his hat over his eyes. “Am I a pyro for the sake of it? It is entertaining. But…[Read more]

@jonas

YES! That sounds so fuunn! I love worldbuilding and magic but it’s harder to focus on that in RPs, but this would be perfect! My author’s sandbox 🤩

@loopylin

Sebzter

Inside the classroom, moments before being snatched, Seb’s inner dream shrieked for dominance. He turned around, and for a split second, he could see a complex diagram of his and the crowd’s movements, like shimmery white ghosts. With a tug of the plot strings, he yanked himself forward, and warped through the crowd. The doo…[Read more]

@loopylin

Splendid *offers Dante a butterscotch scone in thanks*

Sebzter

“After a precursory kick of inappropriate nature, I made a face.” Seb yanked at his lower eyelids, and his squishy smile widened in the overwhelming white light emitting from his eyes. The rhythm was strong, and he held it back in order to talk sensibly. “Now they want…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Waves* 😝 Heya. You probably already know how you want the characters to end up, but I’d also recommend plotting out what to do in the middle, or at least have bullet points for each chapter.

Having some kind of outline helps the pacing a lot, which I can see you’re worried about rushing or slowing. Leon’s alcoholism and R…[Read more]

@loopylin

She’s so cuuuute XD Hey, and she has my hair style too!