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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Hi, guys! I can’t be on long, but maybe for a little if were talking about anything. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you! Yeah, his sister was five when he left, and she hardly remembers him. Also, because of the traumatizing situation they were in for a while when he was taken away, she has hardly spoken for those two years. My poor little character!
I find it tons of fun, but also difficult to write these very emotional scenes. I enj…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira started the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
Okay, so I have this scene I need some help with. My MC is an eighteen year old guy who is returning home after not being able to see his family for two years. His family has thought him dead for over a year. What would these peoples responses be when he shows up one night: his Father, his Mother, his ten year old brother, and the elderly se…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@alia @jenwriter17 @rochellaine I really wish I could be on more, but life won’t allow that yet. Just thought I’d say it is something to celebrate that poor Uncle Bill has been found! 🙂
Please, though, don’t hesitate to tag me. I will be on as often as I can!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@alia Am praying for you!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 I would love to, but I have to eat and then do some stuff before bed. 🙁 What is a word war?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@alia I am on, but I am not writing. I am actually watching all the videos that Josiah and Daniel made. Im about to die of laughter!!!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine No I never heard it before. Good morning!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine That song is hilarious! 😀
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hi fellow KaPeeFers!!! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@the-real-kapeefer So, I am wondering who is older, you or Josiah?
And have no fear, @aratrea , we are all much more devoted to you. There is no chance of him ever taking over the Kingdom! *laughs at Daniels useless attempt*
BTW, how can you call yourself a real kapeefer? I have been on the forum only a month and I have many times over the a…[Read more]
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Considering Songwriting in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
I have to admit, if you’ve watched a lot of those videos you probably know more than me, at this point.
I’d say…
1) Come up with a song idea (What you want your song to be about)
2) Think about the possibilities of that idea, or a question about it
3)Write your ideas down in verses and a chorus
4) Make a melody for it
You can…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
@sam-kowal @rochellaine Thank you very much for your advice! I agree, and will do so.
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira Well, I definitely think ‘shady’ songs could make younger believers stumble, but from what I understand you’re also talking about non-Christian good songs, which aren’t necessarily shady- I think, there, your own discernment and prayer is what’s most important. Also, discussing it with people; if they do seem uncomfortable, it could…[Read more]
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
“I was going to try to explain to the friendly giraffe that we had lost our minds and believed that she had too,”
@filewriterbase13x XD XD That was a really excellent installment
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Considering Songwriting in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
@alia 😀 Thanks!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Considering Songwriting in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 Go for it! Can you let us know what you come up with? 🙂 I like the lady in the videos. She seems sweet, and her voice is beautiful.
I am not much of a songwriter. I mean, I have written a few good songs with good tunes, but I don’t play any instruments or anything. My songs and tunes just come to me, like writing does.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Your stories are so fantastic!!! This is great! The way B-bot talks makes him sound both cute and wise. 🙂 But I have to ask…what is a B-bot? Is it something you made up?
*patiently waits turn to be in story*
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Joy replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x *appears from realm of the hiatus*
HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!
*disappears again*
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x It’s not that I didn’t like Madelyn. I just found Frederick especially interesting. 🙂 Sorry if I’m being too critical…the story is good.
Ah, cool. I was wondering about that a bit, but I haven’t seen many typos. Part Four made me anxious for the next one.
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Yes! That’ll totally work! And I know what you’re talking about.
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