Felicity

Hi Sara!! Welcome to KP!! I’m Lightoverdarkness6, a young teen writer, piano player, and home schooler.  I just joined about a month ago, so I’m fairly new too.

Okay, cool! I was not, but I’m sure some of my friends here on KP were.

Oh, yes, Christian always!! I’ve heard of Adventures in Odyssey; what is it?

I’m home schooled but I’ve never…[Read more]

@esther-c

HI!!! Yay, another young writer! I explored KP for a while until I was an official “teenager” too!

I’m Lightoverdarkness6, a piano-playing, home-schooled, writer-that-just-started-seriously-writing-last-year teenage girl.

It’s nice to meet you! Oooh, I saw your mood-boards! Love them!! I’ve been experimenting with mood boards lately…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Absolutely beautiful. <333

It is ❤️❤️. I couldn’t believe it when I read that. That grandfather must be very strong in the spirit of righteousness.

My vision just got blurry for a minute…

Yes. Totally get you girl. And after that absolute amazing, precious, testimony of the grandfather, you see the picture of a very cute sweet lit…[Read more]

@felicity

I love his song Nuvole Bianche so much that I spent weeks learning how to play it. (I don’t care for the words as much).  Have you ever heard it? The name means White Clouds.

I have not heard it but I’ll have to look it up!

I am listening to Metamorphosis II. It is very beautiful!

I know, right? I love it so much!! 😊

@starofthenorth @freedomwriter76 @theloonyone @felicity @Wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @any-one-else

So, my mom just showed me this…and it is mind-blowingly sincere and just amazing. The grandfather of the girl that was murdered, he wrote this. And needless to say, I believe our prayers are helping and being answered :O 🙂

@felicity

Amen sister! Thank you for willingly sharing the request with us!

You’re so welcome! Thank you for praying for them 🙏.

@freedomwriter76

Oh my goodness!!! Thank you for tagging me. I will be praying! May God give that family peace, comfort, and hope in the days to come. <333

You are so welcome!! Thank you for praying. 😊 Yes, A…[Read more]

@felicity

I loved this, and you did such a good job writing it!

The only thing I would say is maybe put a little more tension in. The war is mentioned, but I don’t get the feeling that the family is panicked enough. Maybe you could figure out a way to show they’re nervous about the war? (If they are, maybe they’re not)

But great job, and I…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you for tagging me!

I will definitely pray for them.

You’re so welcome! Thank you for caring.

@wilder-w

Oh my word…oh that is so horrible.

Yes it is. I sometimes want to just go collapse on my bed and sob for all of the horrible, horrible, things that this world is capable of. But we have Hope. Hope in our Savior, J…[Read more]

@felicity

Glad you are enjoying it! 😃

Hmm… mysterious Keiryn… 🤔

@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @theloonyone @whalekeeper @loopylin @arien @felicity @starofthenorth @anyone

Pretty short chapter here, I listened to the interstellar soundtrack while writing some of this, loved it! It keeps your attention enough so that you don’t feel bored, puts you in the zone for writing another world, and still lets you…[Read more]

@felicity

Yes!! I loved it! You’re so welcome! 🙂

Oh okay! Yeah, I was wondering how much you would write of the war, –since there are two sides to the story, and we’re not sure who’s right, –or as you said, how it affects the people.

Okay!! Thank you for explaining!! 😀

@starofthenorth

1. The only thing I don’t like about my pleco is how much it hides! Sometimes I don’t see it for days at a time lol 🙂

1. Oh, yeah, lol. I had a baby bluegill that I caught in the wild, and he would stay hidden all the time too! In the summer, I’ll catch fish and maybe a salamander, and I keep them in my outside aquarium, and obs…[Read more]

@felicity

Oh, I really like this!! I love the set up of their home and family life.

Just wondering, how far into the Russo-Ukranian war is it? From what I understand, is it just beginning?

Yeah, @mineralizedwritings tip about changing up the action words with ing and no ing could help the story flow a little better.

Anyway, I loved it! Can’t…[Read more]

@felicity

I really liked that!

Glad to see another present tense writer! We’re pretty far and few between here on KP. 😀

Something That I do to help with the flow is alternate action words with ing and no ing. For example, this sentence could be said with either way.

“I say, as I step inside.

“I say, stepping inside.

If I use “step”, then I…[Read more]

@felicity

TOTALLY!!!!

YES!! XD

Ok I will. 🙂

Hehe…your story is so cute. I love how…

The puppie’s parents were not sweet to them and they died. Heavenly Father killed the parents because they were mean to their children.
That’s so good!!! 😀

Yay!! I just read the 2nd chapter, and it’s so cute!! That’s actually really good for 10-11! I’m gonna g…[Read more]

@ava-blue @mineralizedwritings @felicity @freedomwriter76 @arien

Here’s basically my playlist for my WIP, Ruby Fire. (You might notice a fire theme, lol)

“I See Fire” (Peter Hollens)
“Burning” (Ludovico Einaudi)
“The Spheres” (Ola Gjeilo)
“Blackberry Winter I” (Nashville Chamber Orchestra)
“If I Can’t Love Her” (Terence Mann)
“Speechless” (Na…[Read more]

@felicity

Your romance story is so cute!! I like it a lot.

Aww, thanks. There’s plenty more scenes I could share . . .

 I threw a lot of them out because they were really cheesy. Everything was love at first sight except that the girl always pretended she didn’t know the guy liked her. 😂😂😂

Haha, same. In this story Irene is just like “Do I lik…[Read more]

@felicity I love it! The fancy accents were funny to read XD

@felicity

I am wondering though, Ludwika and Michał, are they just being obnoxious brother and sister, or is there conflict in this family? Because it may just be me, but they felt rather strained.

And what draft is this?