@felicity
Active 5 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Erica replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
My sister keeps telling on me!! I’m hiding in the opposite corner with a blanket over my head right now . . . Ack, my crush just entered the room. I’m peeking at him and he’s looking at me and we are totally not looking at each other . . .
Lol, that’s the way it works with us. 🤣😍😁
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Koshka replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Wow.
The characters, the setting, everything in this story makes what’s going on so real. Puts the people you just hear about right in front of you. Dziękuję Ci. Спасибо, мой друг.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Yeah lol! Those revisions can be rough. But I would never remove Tauren!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Thanks! That’s what other people have said too.
Thanks!
Removing Tauren from the story!? I would never!😥🤣
He’s my sweet boi!
That would be tragic!
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Light replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
I know!!! That pic makes me break out in a grin every time I see it… *hugs Effie close while she squeals and wriggles*
Yes!! Aww!
Are Asher and Iris new characters or have I just never realized you had them?
Yeah!! They’re new. I actually just started writing chapter one of their book like five minutes ago 😂😅!
I think I know somebody t…
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whaley replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
I agree with @felicity that The Afterthoughts or Afterthoughts is short and sweet. I don’t find it vague at all. But of course, go with whatever sounds best to you 🙂
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
woah!! That was amazing! I would love to read the entire book when or if you publish! I’m hooked 😊.
Lyaksandro hunches his shoulders into the wind and sniffs defiantly at the world as we enter the school courtyard and part ways.
So many of your people descriptions are just on point! I never would have used, “sniffed defiantly at the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
I know!! I love it too! I feel like they are like the only ones who actually look alike in the pics.
For Ev’s family… maybe Ev and Asher look a bit alike. I feel like Ev and his dad kinda have the same eyes, except Malyk looks more stern.
Idk. 😅
@everybody, I’d like your opinions, if you don’t mind. How do the Nadirs and Barlowe…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
Lyla’s name is so sweet!
Thank you so much!!
I didn’t know you had a Asher as well!! The meaning does not quite fit with my Asher 😅And the meaning of Lyla is sooo pretty!!
Oh, that’s right, Everton’s brother’s name is Asher too!! That’s cool!! I didn’t realize that! Lol, yeah, he seems mysterious. Aww, thank you…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
Effie is so cute!!!! ❤️
Are Asher and Iris siblings? Bc their face claims look alike!! XD
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantsy12 @felicity @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
You asked for it!! XD
Chapter 17
Everton delivered one more punch and moved to the door next to him. He shoved the key in the keyhole and whipped open the door. There stood Amidala. She laughed. “How in the world?”
Ev just smirked. “I’ll tell you later. Come on. We need to…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
That is so sweet…do you mind if I use that in my story?? I just had that thought now. I’m not sure if Lyaksandro would do that but I want him to!!
Oh, I’m sorry I’m just now seeing this. Absolutely, you can use it!! Me and my brother would be honored 😊! Whenever you publish it, I can brag to my friends that my brother and me inspired tha…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh my gosh!!! She is ADORABLE!!!!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
Thanks!! I have my parents to thank for that 😃
I do get called audrey sometimes though lol
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity
@whalekeeper @arien @starofthenorth @pen_for_christ_205
Ok! May I make announcement?
Thank yall for following my story, I appreciate it a lot enjoy sharing it with you all! I seem to be having a major plot upheaval, and may be re-writing the whole thing. I’ll still use some scenes here and…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
@felicity AHHH I LUV HER SO CUTE!!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
Sure lol! I actually introduced myself here awhile ago with my irl name because I wasn’t familiar with kp customs and idk wanted to have it one there 😂
fire away!
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