Felicity

@rae cool! I like how you used the same “comes from a crystal” concept but made it different.

I don’t have very many Mandalorian characters I’m working on now, except one who really doesn’t count…..but I do have a few Republic commandos, some of which were trained by Mandalorians and have a little bit of the same system in place.

random fact for those who want to hear it

Star Wars has a movie in the works depicting what’ll happen to the galaxy right after the Empire’s fall, before movies 7-9 happen.

They aren’t sure who to cast as Luke Skywalker (who will probably appear), since his original actor, Mark Hamill, is too old to do it now.

One of the weirder choices on the…[Read more]

@acancello @mineralizedwritings  @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @rae

Hedieh

Hedieh did a quick twirl in front of the mirror, watching the skirt of her dress spin around her. She bounced on her toes, happy to be wearing the sparkling, baby pink ball gown. It was her favorite color.

She did one last check of her hair and makeup, then…[Read more]

@rae ooh is your character from a sci-fi or something??

most of my charries in the RPs are from Star Wars fanfics so they’d get what he’s talking about lol. Might even like the lightsaber thingy.

I still haven’t figured out who to add here though.

@savannah_grace2009

And then something came over her.

In one deft motion, she let go of his hand and shoulder and wrapped her arms around his waist, pressing the side of her face against his vest in an embrace. She took a few shuddering breaths, trying to keep control of herself. She was not going to cry.

Once Hugo recovered from his shock, she…

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@scoutfinch180

I don’t have time to look at the whole thing, but from the first ones, It’s really good! I don’t see anything really I would change. I personally like large lettering, but that might not be your taste. Your poses are so dynamic! In general, the flow is really good, and the smaller panels to show details are a great addition. I…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Oh it’s totally fine! And I’m not here to tell you what you can and can’t write and draw, I just know SE has a older and probably more tolerant audience than KP does. As long as you’re following the KP guidelines it’s ok! They say that as a general rule of thumb don’t post anything you would not feel comfortable with a 6-year-old…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

I don’t think it works! You can upload it picture by picture if you like.

And welcome from story embers! My sister is from SE and told me about the forum shut down. It’s too bad, but I hope you like it over here! You might want to be aware that because we have an age cap on kp (only for young adults, until 30) we attract a much…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, awesome! I’ll take a look then!

@savannah_grace2009

You definitely fixed a lot. Though I still think you got to connect the chapters a bit more, like how did Lilitu and Sef end up in the woods and why are they being hunted, as well as their relationship. You’ve might have already done this though, and simply not posted it on KP, have you done it on reedsy already, I’ll have to check.

@scoutfinch180

Hi! Nice to meet you, we haven’t met, but welcome back to KP!

Links have always been an issue on KP for as long as I’ve been on here. I’ve gotten by through simply pasting the link, then making a space after the first h, so it isn’t registered as a link, but others can copy it and remove the space to get access.

@scoutfinch180

Well, I see the link you posted. I’m not sure if that’s what you want or not. If you haven’t already, maybe try the link button at the top of the response box? 🤷🏻‍♀️ idk

@sarafini

That’s a great question! And actually, I’m planning to write a non-magical fantasy sometime in the future.

I think all you have to do is make the world unique. Magic doesn’t define fantasy, although it often is a big component of it. You can create different races, or different culture within one world or country. Whatever you want…[Read more]

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

Ok, since we have a weird guy to girl ration, I’ll go ahead and add in Hedieh. It’ll be fun. 😉

Amir

Amir squirmed in his seat, trying to get comfortable. He hated wearing this tight-fitting suit, but if it was for tradition, then he told himself he wou…[Read more]

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

Heres a short one that might get the party started!

Hugo

Hugo waited on the couch for Ottoline to get ready, he could only imagine how she looked with makeup on. He had a nice chat with Amir, Lane and David who were already dressed up in suits like…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I will see if I can write one today or tomorrow! Also, I am sure that Hugo will dance with Ottoline, but group dances would be fun! Maybe some boys should bring dates since we hardly have any girls? Or do you think that would be to crazy? (Sorry if someone already asked that!) 😀

@keilah-h

Thank you!

Lol what funny timing! That sounds like sooo much fun, Cosplaying as Bucky is a fantasy of mine. There’s a girl on youtube who has a full tutorial for a female version of the outfit and I want to do it so bad 😭😭

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you!

@freedomwriter76 oh wow

Poor Riker….

@sarafini lol i just listened to that song earlier

there’s a character I know who has one white eye from an injury, and when I saw a fan art depiction of him if he were in a western AU, I thought “hey, he fits the description of cotton eye Joe!”

@mineralizedwritings misspelled your tag

@rae nice!