@felicity
Active 3 months, 4 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
It’s so hard to just pick one main character out of the set of five, though! I love all them equally!!! XD
That’s fair. I think you can make it work as well, it is harder for smaller stories though, but not impossible.
This is funny, to me it feels like they’re my best friends and if I choose one over the other they’ll get m…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Okay, that’s kind of what I was thinking. I don’t know if it needs to be clearer or not. I don’t know how many other people would notice, and I already had a guess as to why. So maybe rewording it slightly would clear things up.
Ok, fair enough, I’ll tweak it then.
If you’re attached to it, I don’t think it needs to change at any point. It…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Ok, I actually didn’t know that it would be different characters, but it makes sense. Sanderson likes exploring the different eras.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Cool! That’s a really cool concept. Crystal swords as an idea has always felt a little fantasy cliché to me, but the mechanic you built into it is actually really intriguing! It’s kind of like a memory metal (is that what it’s based off of), but it disappears instead of getting distorted, so that’s a really powerful material. Just make sure…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
also the fanfic idea is really interesting!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76
LOL yall those are so funny XD
And freedom, you just made flower crown Bucky your pfp 😂😂
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, I agree with the majority of what Jonas already said. Although I think smaller stories can have many prospective, but it has to be done right. I could think of a few examples, though most are more contemporary, but I’m sure there’s many fantastical. I think a cast of 5 or 6 is a fair enough amount that won’t be…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, it’s odd. She wanted me to help her prep for NaNoWriMo:(
I like this chapter! My favorite part was how happy the robot got when he named her “Thing”. that was great!
Lol! Thanks! I’m glad it seems to be producing an enjoyable dynamic between the two😂
Great chapter! The bounce between present and past tense was very conf…
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@esther-c @grcr @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @everyone!
=-=–=-=-Hugo=-=-=-=
Hugo Searched everywhere for Ottoline. Under the tables, around the food buffet, around all the dancers, and finally, finally, he saw her coming out of the basement, holding hands with Hedieh.
“Ottoline!” He cried out in relief, “where were…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
You dont RP to much, I love to read yours!
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Allison replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 11 months ago
I love your blog! I like the whole thing and dont have anything I dont like about it, its all working fine! I do have some questions about Wix though. right now, I’m using blogger and dont really like it. I cant have a follow button or email subscription buttons or anything I need, Wix has that right? And on the creating the blog…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 awwww that’s so cute!! I want to see what happens when he sees his mom again!
(kinda want to draw it ngl. Probably won’t cause I NEVER GET AROUND TO DRAWING THINGS, but it makes me want to.)
(ik you’re still waiting on that request you gave me lol.)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@smiley Hey, I liked the bits of that story I read! It had a lot of typos, yes. It had a bit of a weird choppy plot, yes. But that didn’t mean it was bad.
Trust me, I can’t even read my old fanfics without cringing either. Especially not this one that I can’t even speak the name of.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision AHHH THOSE MEMES ARE TOO FUNNY!!!!
I love drawing incorrect quotes for some reason
That last one is too weird though lol
What, is it implying he’s some kinda prince?
Although……
Actually….
You girls do treat him like one XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@euodia-vision my brother and I were looking at some old art of mine 2 or 3 weeks ago, and were laughing about how disproportionate my human characters were back then lol…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@whalekeeper ik this was an old conversation but I watched all three guardians of the galaxy films several weeks ago and they were great!! I agree that Rocket’s backstory was really well done (so sad the way he lost his friends!!)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
LOL that’s hilarious 🤣 thanks for making me smile
although my fam said there needed to be more 💕💕💕 surrounding him…😳
Noooo girllll 😳not the hearts 😂
That’s hilarious 😂😂
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
You’re welcome, great chatting with you! <3
I prayed about my relationship with my sister too, and it got so much better. <3 it’s definitely the best solution
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
Almost every printer has a scanner, but most aren’t very good with scanning color. Make sure you set the resolution to at least 300 dpi to get decent results!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Thank you for the prayers girl!
Oof 11 and no much in common sounds rough. I became close to my sister once we were both in the teenage phase XD.
You can do something ou don’t like for a little while, and she might appreciate it if you played pretend with her for even like 40 minutes. Honestly though when I was wanting to…[Read more]
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