@felicity
Active 4 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Nyx
“Ugh why’s the water here so blasted cold?” Nyx hissed, turning off the faucet and reaching for the automated paper dispenser on the wall.
His nose twitched in agitation as he dried his now freezing hands and then chunked the paper into a nearby waste bin.
Placing his hands in his pockets, he sighed, leaning again…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Wow. Look what happens when I step off for a day. These were really fun to read through!
Eira is an Alve, although she has Forester blood too. Without an idea of who she is, she has been raised in an orphanage that doesn’t believe the Light exists, and that the Alven are mere fairy tales. She is taught first of all the Light, t…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, I’m good with that! Do whatever you need to do :).
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 hey can Riker run into one of my charries in the bathroom? I was just thinking it’d be funny if Nyx is in there and he’s like “Whoa. You look like crap.”
XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 😭 RIKEEERRR ADOLPHUS U BEST WATCH OUT! @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Paxton
Paxton glanced at Wolfgang, who was smiling softly, and then at Leo, who gave a small nod.
He looked down at his backpack, and then slowly slid it back over his shoulder, nodding himself.
He glanced over his shoulder, trying to figure out how exactly he…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
(Yeah…🤨 is my new way of saying HMMMM 🤐🤐)
I was cracking up while reading open under almost every single thing I said. 😂 That’s how I know I’m onto things… 🤐🤐
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
Um… good for you? 🤨😂
Yeah… 🤨
Ooh… these friends… 😬
Yeah… 🤨
I loved the chapter! And I don’t like those friends 😒 But I love Lesli and Tauren! I’ve got mixed feelings about Keiryn
LOL exactly how I wanted you guys to feel 🤣.
😍 Tauren’s here!! maybe 🙂
Yeah…🤨
(Yeah…🤨 is my new way of saying HMMMM 🤐&#x…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
YES! Chapter four is here!
“I took it really well.” Keiryn smiles with pride. “I haven’t cried in two years straight.”
Um… good for you? 🤨😂
“Oh yeah! I forgot to introduce her to you guys. She’s living with us right now.” Keiryn turning towards them.
“Oh hi!” One of the girls reaches out her hand to shake Lesli’s. “Ple…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
LOL that was really cute 😂
A buffalo buffing really does seem like something a kid would come up with. And tbh the dialogue was really good for 8 or 9 years old. I don’t even know if I knew what a council was at 8 🤣
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
Lol yes! My story is partially inspired by the city of ember. LOVE LOVE LOVED that book growing up. I didn’t actually realize the parallels until quite awhile through plotting 😅
Good job!
Thanks!😁
HEHE I wonder what Keiryn was doing in the mines? 🤨
Go on, Lesli, just give him a big hug in front of everyone, they don’t matter! 😊😍
Lol y…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Sure! Do whatever you need to. I’d just like Everly and Kaine to stick to together.
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Light replied to the topic Y'ALLL!!!!! I started it…and I love this already!!! <3 Any thoughts? 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
AHHHH!!!! GIRLLLL!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!! ❤️😭❤️
YOU’RE SOOO WELCOME!!! 🙂 🙂
Lol, that’s great!!! XD
Yeah!! XD
I KNOW, RIGHT!?!?!? ❤️❤️❤️❤️
YES!!!! <3 <3
Lol, yes, Frida, look out. XD
Yes. We’re coming for you XD Frida…
Lol, it does!!!! xD xD xD
Leo and Brothers, trademark pending.
XDXDXDXD
Lol Girl, you are so funny X…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
No worries, thanks for reading!
So sorry it took me so long to reply! I LOVE it!! Great job!
And I like your drawing style, too.
Thank you! Glad you like it! 😁
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Erica replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
So sorry it took me so long to reply! I LOVE it!! Great job!
And I like your drawing style, too.
Keep it up!!😊😁
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Yeah!! XDD He’s so funny.
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Light replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, it’s not terrible, it’s just different than the original .Lol Maybe once i watch it again, i might change my mind. But Johnny Depp just creeps me out with all that makeup XD.
Yes, the ending is good! The message is really good too. 🙂
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Erica replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@theloonyone @everyone else on this topic
I pulled out some more old writing. This is 11-year-old me trying to write a romance, by the way. 😝😍
In this scene, Irene was just met one of her suitors, Nicholas. He escorts her to her rooms.
When we arrived at my door, he said, “Well, here thou art, Lady. I shall see the sometime in the near future.”…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
LOL Mount Everest XDXD
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
We just finished putting up our Christmas Tree!!! 🙂 My brother just read this RP, and he called Everly “Mount Everest.” XDD. He loves coming up with funny/crazy nicknames.
Lyla
The boy collapsed into Everly’s arms, sobbing. He was breaking my heart–no, he had shattered…[Read more]
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