Felicity

@mineralizedwritings

Okay, gotcha didn’t realize it was a comic but that’s super cool!

So with that awkward scene…I think if you make it a comedic scene since it’s a comic it would work out a bit better, and then perhaps later have Everly realize “Ah wait a minute this guys actually different then what I originally thought” meanwhile Layson’s on…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Hi there! I found a few names too!

cerritulus (In Latin it means weird 😅😂)

sciurus (Latin. Means squirrel)

ardilla (Squirrel in Spanish)

Gwyllt (Wild in Spanish)

And just some names I made up:

Cajats, Zoogers, Sperves, Flurbes, Gluxes, Livops, and Striverxs. 😂😅😊 Hope that helps!

@godlyfantasy12

Not exactly sure what you mean by pov characters…

It’s eventually going to be comic style, so there isn’t much of a pov. Anybody’s thoughts can be shown too.

Layson is 19, I think Everly is 22. Layson is really mature for his age.

Oh I’m not sure if I want them to get married in the book, I think it might be a ending thing…[Read more]

Also, how old is Layson and Everly?

do they get married in this book? If not, then u can play with time and leave the readers with their own thoughts on what happens after the story “ends.”

In truth, showing their relationship developing isn’t all that hard. It’s mainly a point of not rushing them into things, just as we wouldn’t want to h…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

hmm…

Are Layson and Everly pov characters?

@godlyfantasy12 @anyone else who wants to help!

Oh, great advice!

So here’s my problem:

Kaine, Everly’s younger brother has been caring for here pretty intensely since she got injured about 6 months prior. Exuasting himself so that she can be comfortable has basically become a way of life for him. He feels it’s the least he can do, because she…[Read more]

@felicity ah yes. You cannot flirt to convert, something my father and grandfather (also the pastor and bishop of our church) preaches.

@esther-c

Absolutely!! Yeah, add whoever you need😊.

And anyone else can add any Charlie’s they want to! The more the merrier 😂.

Again, plz share ur specific issues with ur subplots, etc so we can help u out as best we can!

@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6

Feather and Crosshair

“I-I’m Matthew,” stuttered one of the boys. “We were j-just exploring. T-Trying to find some food. You guys c-c-can join us if you w-want.”

“Sure.” Feather stepped closer to the group. “With a castle this big, there has to be some sort of kitchen around here somewhe…[Read more]

Man… there are 3,491 posts on here XD

@lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @loopylin

I’m not sure who else is on here 😅

Maybe I could join in! I have an interesting villain I’m trying to develop more that I’d like to throw in, along with Ami and Ev, of course. Does that work?

Oh, and maybe Lukas too… I may just have too…

@starofthenorth

Alright. This is what I’ve got.

I totally agree with Godly. What I do is look up words relating to what I’m trying to name in an obscure language, or just a different language, mixing up letters or parts of words.

For example, in my WIP, my country’s name is Themelios. (Though it may change 😅) Themelios means “foun…[Read more]

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone

Okay! Well, we’re kinda just wandering around the castle. Any of you have a villain you can bring in? Or a cool room to find?

@godlyfantasy12 you can bring in Aramis, Edrich, and/or Lilith, if you like.

Lyla and Matthew

“Crosshair, no need to be so harsh,” A young woman said, walking out f…[Read more]

@felicity

Oh I like it! Interesting fears there, a lot of ones I don’t usually see in books!

@godlyfantasy12

How about we make a forum topic for romance subplots? If y’all want to?

Yeah! That sounds good.

 

 

As for Paxton….

IKR?! Quite honestly idk. I just have a thing for adorable little boys and had to have one in my series. Plus it does make the things he go thru…a lot worse…but, also makes the happier parts, the hope he keeps a…

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@esther-c

Thanks! No that’s ok! I get it! And yeah it is a lot to catch up on 😅

@mineralizedwritings I just responded to it lol!!

Ill probs talk about him in that

@godlyfantasy12

lol no I have not met him! Feel free to share about him if you like!

I actually asked you about your experience in charrie romances in another forum… I believe you may have missed it XD

But anyways I would love some advice if you have any XD I have no idea what I’m doing with it