@felicity
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Light replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @felicity @sarafini @
Wow!!! Thank you all so much for the tips and ideas!!! As soon as y’all started sharing ideas, my brain was just like gushing with more ideas about other parts of the story!! So I have a TON of stuff to work with now 😃! Thank you all so much 😊!!
Ooh that sounds interesting! When you s…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Ok! Oh fun! Enjoy the nutcracker play!!!!
Thank you! It was fun! The dancers were so graceful. Even the little eight year olds🥰😅! They were really cute.
Your welcome! Glad to do it. Oh sweet!! My little brother just turned 14. 🙁 I can’t imagine him letting me brush his teeth…😂😂
😊. Yes! Awwww. Yeah I don’t think he would love that ǹ…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Hey y’all… in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 10 months ago
Thank you so much!!!! You really didn’t have to do that! But awww, thanks. Will you tell me what you think after you read it?
You are so welcome!! I want to😊! Of course I will! I’m gonna buy it today sometime. I didn’t get a chance to yesterday 😩. I read the sneak peak on Amazon, and I’m loving it already! Bramble is just the cutest…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
You did a good job showing them back home! You think later you might switch to Layson and Maylee and Keiryn? Or back to Kaine and Everly? That was weird, I help like a part of me fell into the hole with them😂😭. I guess that shows how much I love your charries!! I think poor Matthew might have a…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic What is your characters greatest fear? And what is their greatest love? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @esther-c @any-one-else-i-might-have-forgotten-I’m-so-scatter-brained-X-D-
Aww! I love all of y’all’s charries!! 😊
Okay, so all of my charries Greatest Love so far are their siblings/family. But their fears are an assortment of different things.
Matthew
Greatest Love:
His sister, Lyla.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @felicity @esther-c
SPEAKING OF ROMANTIC SUBPLOTS/PLOTS
i literally can’t make this post without mentioning my main subplot (that actually could be a full plot since it’s really important to the actual plot too and one of the MCs Charrie arcs 😂)
And that is….
ARA AND NOVEM…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
Also the snake and frog thing is HILARIOUS! I’m now imagining Tauren and Lesli sitting behind a bush watching a snake all wide eyed 😂
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings yes it’s like Kaine with Everly, but Ik sometimes it can be viewed as strange because it’s an animal, but to me he’s just like if he were a person.
and I’m still trying to decide on a certain ability his species may or may not have that….well…might explain some of that.
let me just say it’s very similar to sh…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic When is dark writing no longer writing for God? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 10 months ago
I mean in the second book one readers might think there’s one but it’s just…yea whatever
Ah yes, faking readers out is one of the best feelings, especially when they fall for it hard 🤣
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
yeah, I really like Grimm for some reason! Like idk why! He sounds so interesting, and his name seems very fitting.
Nyx having to talk to people he doesn’t trust out of need is a really interesting thing…
Aww he’s a sweetheart inside? I love that 😀!!
haha yes… pet peeve… lol I get it. And if I were an intelligent animal I…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic When is dark writing no longer writing for God? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings ya my series doesn’t have any love triangles XD I mean in the second book one readers might think there’s one but it’s just…yea whatever you’d have to read it 😂
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings also!!! I’m so happy u like my charries!!
I don’t want it to be weird but I really love their relationship and think it’s super sweet. I know a lot of people and the world can twist things into just weird stuff and everything but idk I just find it real sweet and I like it and think it’s fine and innocent and just so sweet h…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings 🤣 sounds hilarious! Poor Layson but he sounds like the kinda funny guy I’d LOVE! Also he’s taking care of a little toddler? Yes please!!! Already love him! And Kaine!
Also, Grimm is the MC that is introduced in book 3, and they meet him while traveling after leaving Cirque (Lyn and Nyx’s home.)
He’s been through…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic When is dark writing no longer writing for God? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 10 months ago
I get that! I haven’t read enough to have a stance on that, I just know that a lot of the books with the teenage crushes tend to be not ok, so I don’t read them. I actually really like the teenage crushes in books, but you have to be careful how it’s portrayed. I think people need to realize teenage crushes don’t have to have…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
Oh I love that plot for your characters! Sounds awesome!
That actually is so similar to what I’m doing, but different too.
I love Nyx only being heard by those he trusts… does he trust Grimm? and I can’t imagine the frustration of trying to tell people your fox brother talks (or are people familiar with the species?) when only…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@moneralizedwritings also the Practice makes perfect sounds hilarious 🤣 not sure why he’d be crying but maybe make it a comedic crying cuz imagining him mortified after that is hilarious 🤣
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
Of course! And yes I got it right, tho in the actual series (u may be thinking of the AUs) Grimm and Lyn’s relationship grows overtime.
So they aren’t obviously blood siblings, but Nyx was given to Jocelyn as a kit, the only one discovered of his kind by a man named Lander (who secretly has a large impact on Lyn’s life…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Feel free to add whoever, it can get hard to keep track of with a lot. I think we each have two in right now. 🙂
@theloonyone @loopylin @kielah-h @lightoverdarkness6
Allow me to remove Kaine and Everly from the castle, its going to be awkward but we’ll just pretend it worked just fine….
Kaine
Kaine stares at Crosshair. He turns…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
Honestly it’s sorta like what happens with Nyx, Grimm and Jocelyn in my book series, except you have a bit of leeway due to it being in comic form 😊
Oh yeah! I know a little bit about them… Nyx is a fox… right? And I might be getting this wrong, Jocelyn is his sister? And she and Grimm are together, right? Mind if I ask how a f…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
Now as for the loud Vs quiet…I would advice steering clear of Layson changing and becoming totally quiet to please Kaine or changing himself completely, but he can adjust a few things maybe to be just a bit calmer around the boy until he becomes more familiar with him, but Kaine will also need to grow too as the time goes on.…
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