Felicity

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon

Grimm

He hadn’t meant too…but walking up to Leon and Riker… he’d heard the mention of the lost child…

Grimm kneeled on one knee. Riker looked up at him, forcing a smile.

“Oh, hey, Grimm.”

“Hey…are you two alright?”

“We’re fine.”

He obviously wasn’t.

“How about November…? Is he okay…?”

“Worried about you,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aram

Aram’s eyes narrowed.

This woman…was much too flattering to be sincere.

She was planning something. And it involved him, Aram had no doubt.

He stopped in his tracks. Nadya walked past him a few steps before turning, brown raised.

“I believe I will take my leave here. As stated before.”

Nadya pursed her lips. “Are yo…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Bren

Bren’s hands shook as he held the flashlight, making the light quiver on the figures in front of him.

The man’s threats from before rang in his ears…

Find out more about…his powers…?

He swallowed, breaths shaky.

But…he didn’t want to use his powers…they hurt people!

He stared at the new group befor…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Oh, those are nice!

@freedomwriter76

AHHH they’re so adorable! The tiny brothers *melts*

Also the fact that Dietrich origami. XD or at least that’s what I’m assuming he’s doing

*round of applause*

@freedomwriter76 AHHHHHH BABY DIETRICH AND ADOLPHUS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOBBBBBB

Oh,  I just saw you said they live in caves. Oops.

@loopylin @theloonyone Sorry this is late, but here you go.

Feather

Crosshair and Elissa were back. Good. Feather was about to run over to her husband and hug him, but she knew he’d hate her doing it in front of everyone else.

“What did you find?” Beth asked. “Does anyone here even have medical experience?”

Feather perked up a bit. “Some,” she…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Sorry for replying late.

I love all those designs and names!

Oh, and for the Kobolds, I have a few ideas, but they all depend on where they live, and if they’re confirmed humanoid or can look like anything.

@joy-calle Sure thing!

@freedomwriter76

You are welcome!! ❤️❤️

Oh, I see. That makes sense. XD

That’s great! So glad you’re doing well! 💗💗💗115 pages? 🤩🤩🤩

I love that metaphor about carrying the mat, sounds like a great message! AWW! That sounds adorable!

I’m ok, lots of driving practice this week so I can meet the requirement of 50 practice hours and get my…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

LOVE IT!! I NEED MORE TINY LEO!!

So sweet! You did it so well! Not exactly a critique but when the sister questions about what he’s doing with the decorations, it wasn’t obvious to me she meant ill will, so it seems a little like Leo over reacted and started it XD

I can tell from reading the rest she’s not very nice…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

I might join over the summer! I’ll have more time to write higher quality than, and because the writing is public, I wanna make sure it’s my best 🙂

@kryonthearcanin

2. Favorite theme? Trying to figure out this question. I don’t know if you meant genre or something else, sorry.

Lol yeah that one confuses some people. Theme= message. So or some books it might be like friendship take sacrifice, it could be family is more important than money, learning to give up pride ect….

3. Rina was a p…

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@kyronthearcanin

Ooh that riddle made my head hurt lol.

XD

Also, I’m playing around with a secret language for one of my races.

Cool! I’d love to hear about it! Secret in what way?

I’ve gotta go for now (youth event)

Have fun!

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks about the art! Can’t say I’ve heard of StarFox, but it sounds like it would look like my drawing haha.

Your welcome! Yeah, it’s a really old videogame from Nintendo.

1. Worldbuilding is amazing! I have to cut back to avoid overwhelming people lol. Aspects? Describing how things look to my character, or how they seem. Kind…

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@kyronthearcanin

=) You’re welcome!

1. Cool! My fantasy has three species for sure but I considered adding a fourth…but I dunno. XD I love that she learns to trust God, that’s a great theme!

2. XD I guess we’re even, I can’t draw cartoon animals very well. I can do realism of them if I have a photo to copy but other than that they’re not very…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 NOOOOO they lost a baby?! 😭 😭

Also currently I’m at my church and will be teaching in youth, but afterwards I should be able to RP 😊 u may not be on but if u are yea.

if not I’ll see (or type with ya XD) tomorrow!

@kyronthearcanin

Alright, sounds good! Is that to add friends or what? Sorry kinda new to this haha.

Oh just realized what the tag thing was haha.

XD XD

@kyronthearcanin

Here’s my proper response. Nice to meet you Ava! I’m TheArcaneAxiom. I’m a homeschooled writer about to leave highschool! XD I love math and fundamental divine truth, and discussing that through writing. I’m a sci-fi/fantasy writer as well, and I promise that you will see a lot more of that here! My current WIP is actually a…[Read more]