@felicity
Active 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper Sure thing!
Jaye
The boy turned and ran back where he’d come.
“Hey, wait!” I yelled. “We aren’t going to hurt you!”
Howzer shouldered his way through a stack of books to pursue the kid. “Hello? You can come out.” he said, even though only I could understand him. He was doing a good job keeping his voice at a friendly tone, though.
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@awsumfaith
Oh my goodness, I love roleplay!!! I’m totally in!
Oh yay!!
I can’t wait to see your charries!! 😀
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@princesachronicle22 Yeah, that’ll be funny! Go for it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c Hmmm…this might get interesting….
What defines “villain or anti-hero?” Evil character? Character who does the right things but for the wrong reasons? What about a character who is on the evil side but not evil himself/herself?
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Light replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Okay girl! Sounds good! Talk to ya later! 😀
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Light replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 5 months ago
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
YESS!!! LETS DO IT!!! 😀
XDXD You’re good girl! So the character castle is where you role play (RP) as your characters, having them interact with other people’s characters! You just write a description about the character(s) that you are going to enter into the ‘castle’, and then write a short RP as them entering, and…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Ooh! Okay that’s good! Hmm….yeah tell me XD I’ll be on the spoiler forum!
Alright! I need to skedaddle at the moment, but I’ll get to it today or tomorrow. 😁
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Esther replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 5 months ago
Yw!!
Yay! Ok, I can’t talk about them now, but I’ll get to them probably tomorrow. (Or at least some of them. XD)
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Esther started the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @joy-calle @acancello @felicity @kyronthearcanin @anyone-I-missed
Ok, ok, ok…
I have an idea.
So, I know we already have multiple RPs, but what if we did another character castle…
This time we don’t add in any good…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah… um…
I can promise that it will not be Lukas.
*Sigh of relief* Okay good! 😅
I think he’s going to be in a sequel with Skylar and Fynn, so neither will they die. And I would definitely not kill off Ami or Ev. (I guess that narrows it down to six charries…) If you really want to know, I can tell you over on the spoiler forum. 😏…
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Esther replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@everyone
Ahh!! I’m gonna have to hop on here at some point and continue! I like totally forgot about this. XD Maybe we don’t have to stick with the schedule, idk.
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
It’s all good! 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 5 months ago
Ember sounds so awesome!!
@the-rest-of-y’all
Do you guys wanna hear about my MCs families?? 😏 (It’s nine other charries, btw… 😅😂)
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Oof…yeah, I feel you…WAIT who are you planning on killing off?! I must know!! (It better not be Lukas, the baby is too precious…and I know you won’t kill off Ev or Ami…)
Yeah… um…
I can promise that it will not be Lukas. I think he’s going to be in a sequel with Skylar and Fynn, so neither will they die. And I would definitely[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHH!!!! It’s so good!!!!!!!!!! I almost cried! (That’s saying something, cause i like NEVER cry for books and/or movies) You did so gooooood!
Woo-hoo!!! 😆
(Same here, girl. XD)
Thanks so much!!! ☺️
i hate to give a critique on it, but you asked for some. My only thing is i would have showed a lit…
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Light replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Yay!! So glad you love it too!!! 😆
Yes!! 😄
Sorry to make you cry, but I’m so glad that my writing can be that powerful! 🥲😄
That’s okay…I guess I’ll be alright 😭😂 Yes girl!!
Thanks so much!! 😊
You’re so welcome! 😊
I know!! 😭
😭😭😭
Yes!! 🥹❤️ I pantsed my way through this and I was so happy with how that theme was taught to her. 🥲
Yes!! Y…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 5 months ago
Aw I love Ember!! And the aesthetic is really good! 😀
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Yay!! So glad you love it too!!! 😆
Sorry to make you cry, but I’m so glad that my writing can be that powerful! 🥲😄
Everything is so smooth, like the way she wrote the poem, I was so impressed at the way you wrote that, it’s perfect!!!!
Thanks so much!! 😊
And when he found her on the beach I was just 😭😭😭
I know!! 😭
The way she…
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Light replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
OH. MY. GOSH.
ESTHER!!! GIRL, THIS IS AMAZING!!! I’m just over here crying 😭😭😭😭
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍 AHHH!! Everything is so smooth, like the way she wrote the poem, I was so impressed at the way you wrote that, it’s perfect!!!!
And when he found her on the beach I was just 😭😭😭
The way she realizes that true love is…[Read more]
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