Felicity

@savannah_grace2009

I totally get it, Hugo can be a little… annoying.😂 It will be super fun!

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh! It could be!

@grcr @minerlaizedwritings @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Aright, Hugo is going to join! Sorry if anyone characters are different from what they really would be like, its sorta hard to write them. 🙂

Hugo

Hugo trudged up a hill as the sun beat down on his back, “Where the heck am I going?” He thought, “wander awa…[Read more]

@jonas

I do kind of want to keep fire, water, earth, and air.

Sounds good, just thought I’d point it out.

Celestiar mostly follows the rules of our universe, so in most cases, I don’t think I’m going to explain real natural phenomenon with magical rules I invented, so I don’t think that would be the case.

So if that’s the case, are the diffe…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I’m a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, and we believe that Heavenly Father, the Holy Ghost, and Jesus Christ are three distinct beings, though they are indeed one in purpose. (Please don’t burn me at the stake😅)

@trailblazer

Yeah, absolutely, that’s the mentality that I strive for in…[Read more]

@jonas

I really like this! The main thing I haven’t heard about yet is the characters. Is it going to play out in a similar way to Stormlight, where the characters at random points come across their abilities? I really like Krenna as well, but she seems highly resonant to both Shallan and Steven Leeds (I don’t know if you’re aware of the latter,…[Read more]

@anyone

I would like to revive this forum. Something that I have wondered about for a while now has to do with the necessity of the holly ghost in the trinity. I myself am non-trinitarian, but I was curious on what any of y’alls thoughts were on it if you have any.

@jonas

Sorry, I haven’t been on for a while, allow me to quickly express my thoughts here and there form when I’ve last been here.

I would be open to extended elements, but I worry that it would be more cliche than just the four Greek elements. I at one point had a draft for a lightning element, but I couldn’t think of anything interesting to d…

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@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76

Hey how’s it going?

@esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @trailblazor @grcr @savannah_grace2009

Kaine shudders, crossing his arms over his dark green sweater vest. A stiff breeze edges through the tight weave of his shirt, pushing the rain to his skin. Running a cold clammy hand through his hair, Kaine turns around to see over the crest of the hill.

I’m g…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Hmm, so my worldbuilding is pretty solid, and very real for me, because I literally have places based off of real things. For example, I have an underground trade city in the Nevari Desert that is directly based off of Derinkuyu, Cappadocia. I have a whole tribe that has ties to the Basotho, geographically, and culturally, and I…

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@freedomwriter76

I totally understand your concern.

I’d say that in the first chapter that’s in his POV, showcase his positive character traits, but also give us a glimpse into his internal conflict so we see that he isn’t as perfect as he seems on the outside. Slowly revealing his backstory like you said you’d do will also help readers start t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr

Ok! I finally got it! Here ya are!

(And fyi, so far I’ve decided that the language they speak in Amir’s country is Farsi, or something very close to it, so if he talks in a different language, that’s what it is.)

(Oh, and I’m assuming we decided on the bal…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Lol didn’t we one time have a wip rant chat… but it got buried in the forums and eventually replaced by the chat chat? XD

I’ll be on next time I have something to share!

Hi! Just letting you guys know that I wont be on today, its my brothers 13 birthday and were having his party also! I cant believe how fast hes growing up (I know I sound like a mom, lol, but seriously, that’s how I feel😂) So I am really busy today, (I’m also going to ask him to join KP, since he always wants to write, but cant get motivated)…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

(You just made me think, and now I feel old. I’ve been around a lot longer than most of the people regularly on here nowadays. XD)

Are you talking about before Riker turns himself in, or the end of the series?

In the former case, I’d like to ask if Riker would even go to Leon? He’s already asked for forgiveness time and again.…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Hello! Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy and am currently working on a universe with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning concrete rules for the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

 

It’s Felix, The Bois’ Dad, and Felix’s younger brother (and main villain of Leon/Riker’s first Novel) Hans. Yes…that Hans 😬

But they used to be so different 😭

;(

 

Legit, the main quote/moment of their book is this (the probably ending…so sad 😭):

“We fought the war, brother.”

Hans looked out at all the carnage…all the…

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@freedomwriter76

Yw!!

(Yesss, Yori Nakajima!!!!! 😭😭 i’m so sad how it ended between him and Bucky, ughhhhhhhhhhhhhh *faints*)

Wait… how did it end?? Ik Bucky told him what happened and he did it, was there something else?

Oh Riker… so sad. Actually Kaine does a similar thing… he sleeps in trees sometimes XD And one time he slept w…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Thank you for sharing all of those, they are so sweet!💗