@felicity
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Esther posted an update 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
Since I mentioned it over on the RP…
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
Sometimes you gotta feel it out.
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
Oh and just to clarify, the words that I suggested should be taken out shouldn’t be taken out every time they’re in your prose. It’s just a good rule of thumb to follow, not some law. Just wanted to make that clear. 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I was just about to ask how you were doing when I saw this in my inbox! Glad you’re back!!
Um, I don’t think so. It’s a new day though.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@rae wow…..
getting a little worked up there
However, I don’t blame you for not wanting to add him in if he’s that overpowered. My question is, how exactly do the characters in your story get close enough to beat him, if like you said there’s only one being (besides God) who can do it? Like I can see Alpha going there by himself to fight, but…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
oh, and thanks! I have a lot of really cool dragon ideas.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins ah ok makes sense
so what canon events did happen? Like obviously Crosshair joined the Empire, the rest of the Batch are probably doing mercenary missions right now, etc….
So would you say this story happens in roughly season 1’s, 2’s, or 3’s place on the actual timeline? I’d go for 2 maybe if we absolutely had to quantify it,…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
And girl I’m so sorry 🥺 I know that must be so scary and overwhelming. I’m praying for you ❤ I wish I was better at saying encouraging things…but just know that you are loved and worthy of love no matter what. We love you, Min!! Don’t ever doubt that.
Thanks girl, you too. I love interacting with you here even if you’re…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ikr? He’s trying so hard to keep everything to himself. I mean he does go on long philosophical rants to his cat but that doesn’t really count lol
I’m so glad you want to read more! That makes me so happy thank! <3
I’m so glad you like it thanks!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Would y’all like to start this RP up again or modify it ect.? I can’t be super steady on here, but I can at least rp 1-3 times a week.
If y’all do want to continue it, I’d like to insert a character perhaps.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings wow…..
Nice snippet!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
OUR brave sharpshooter boy lol.
Since you’re writing so much about him, he’s yours also.
ok off topic, but when you finish that picture of Markus, can you show me? He sounds like a really cool character, and I love his name!
As a dragon-person like the ones in my fanfics, he’d be awesome. Phee is a color changing, venom-spitter dragon…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed Hans whyyyyyyy
so actually, thanks to Hans’ complicated backstory, and a few story clues from his canon universe, I’ve begun rethinking my fanfic villain, Hemlock.
He’s totally evil, through and through, and under practically no circumstances will I ever feel sorry for him, but I wonder how long, exactly, has he been the way…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@jonas Yeah, it’s less about the time period and more how they’d recognize him. Snake has quite a lot of fame in the dragon world in the future–he’s effectively the Hercules or Achilles or any other mythical hero of the dragon world. Like, several characters of mine use “Snake’s teeth” as an expression.
So I would do it, except it’d be a little…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins cool beans, is he in the story? probably not because the timeline wouldn’t match up no matter how you tweaked it. He’d always end up like 15 years younger than Leo lol
But you can always make a different AU for him to inhabit. Maybe one where tech never died? Maybe he was just hurt or something? (My profile pic depicts him as a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed My brother plays a WW2-themed Roblox shooter game which has the Battle of Castle Itter as a map in it, and I think he says he likes playing there. That’s how I know about it lol
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Tysm for asking I really appreciate it! Yeah, it feels like it’s been forever.
Ofc girl! 💖 Yeah it really does.
And girl I’m so sorry 🥺 I know that must be so scary and overwhelming. I’m praying for you ❤ I wish I was better at saying encouraging things…but just know that you are loved and worthy of love no matter what. We…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
Um, I don’t think so. I believe I was just pointing out some wording that I felt was a little awkward. My suggestion was a way to word it differently so that it would be smoother to read. As for the describing the forest, you could tap into his emotions a little bit then, but that wasn’t exactly what I was pointing out. I was just sug…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
O_O I’m not sure I want to see this scene.
Poor villains. They can seem nice at times, and we as the authors know what they really need, they just never choose it.
I did once have my twin feeling kinda bad for one villian though, untill I told her he murders his brother.
She doesn’t like him now at all for some reason.…[Read more]
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@esther-c
Hi!!!! <3
Wellll I may or may not have gotten my heart broken (I hate teenage mood swings…ugh!) …so I've been trying to deal with that. (This guy I have liked on and off for three years asked my nemesis to prom (okay she's not a nemesis…haha!) and it's just been me feeling like I'm not good enough for him and that nobody will ever l…[Read more]
(Sorry I didn’t reply sooner!! KP was acing funky.)
I can’t say I can relate to what you’re feeling, but from reading books and hearing real people’s stories, I can understand what you’re going through. I’ll be praying for you. <3 But I’m so glad it’s brought you closer to the Lord! It’s amazing how He can use a circumstance that we deem bad as a…[Read more]
@esther-c
AHHHHH NOOOOOO
why do I do this to myself???
So you know the guy that I liked that I was talking about up there? (his name’s Jack) welllll…..his older brother Kai (he’s like 17 years old) has been super nice to me and we have so much in common and we’re good friends….AND I MAY OR MAY NOT BE GETTING FEELINGS FOR HIM….and I really…[Read more]
Awww, that’s so sweet!!! 🥰 Ahh!! I love that so much!! XD That’s fantastic. 😊 Although I’ve never been in a relationship, my only advice would be to keep it at friends for now. Because who knows, even if this doesn’t turn into anything serious in the future, you could still be great friends. Anddd… if you really do have feelings for him you could…[Read more]
Hahaha yeahhh! I know I’m not ready for a relationship now and I do want it to stay just friends for now. After all, I’m only 14!!! Ugh, I feel like I’m going to start getting a crush on him if I want to or not. And it’s awkward because my “friends” tease me about hopping between brothers….because Jack’s my age and Kai’s older….*sobbing*
I…[Read more]
Oh yeah, I almost forgot that! XD (I’m 14 too) But that’s good. 😊 Oh! One book you must absolutely read (I recommend it to as many girls as I can) is Praying for Your Future Husband by Robin Jones Gunn and Tricia Goyer. It’s amazing!!! It totally changed my perspective on how to pray for my future husband and relationships in general. If you can g…[Read more]
@esther-c
Heyyy sorry I haven’t been on in a while!!!
I might have to take Livia out of the RP for now, just because I’ve been sooooo busy!!!! Sorry, I really enjoyed RP’ing Lukas and Livia :/ I’m gonna miss that.
And I may or may not have feelings for the guy I was telling you about…
I’m just waiting for my heart to get broken again…ugh!…[Read more]
You’re totally fine! 😊 I was actually just about to see how you were doing. 😁
Aww, I’m a little disappointed, but I totally understand, so don’t feel too bad about it. 😉 I get life being busy. The school RP has slowed down a bit too.
🤭 I wish I could give you some advice but I really can’t other than pray about it. Journaling or writing out you…[Read more]
@esther-c
Heyyy…just wondering how far you got in my story? I’m not trying to nag you, I just was wondering 🙂 and I am stuck again…so I could really use the help right now XD
Don’t worry about nagging me. 😁 But I was literally thinking about your story this morning. I was like, “oh my goodness I haven’t read it in foreverrr!!” 😂 So I’m going to get to that today and hopefully this week too. I’m soooo sorry I haven’t read it in a while!!
It’s okay! I get it, life happens XD