Felicity

@freed_and_redeemed My reaction to Moishe talking about them shooting his wife was the same as Matthias’s lol. “like they WHAT NOW?!”

So they’re spies or something? That’s kinda cool. I also love all their names, they’re pretty unique.

And hey! We get to see Leo/Reuben and Riker! A little weird seeing them from the outside perspective of…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Strangled noises*

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Please don’t kill Moishe. It may be a pretty amazing wrapup if Mathias is killed (not that you are planning to do that, I’m just a fellow writer{rather concerned btw over those choices[does he go to a camp?(If he does, is it the one Riker is stationed at?)]}), but please…that would just be…[Read more]

@theducktator

Yes I am!! Thanks for reminding me. I’ll post the next one(s) sometime tomorrow. I’ve just been getting so distracted and I’ve forgotten! 😭

@rae oooh very cool!

@esther-c Honestly, the very fact that you can come up with an idea and have it as a short story is great, when I have ideas they always either turn into a whole saga or become a scene in a larger work.

The idea itself is interesting! I’d say write it!

@highscribeofaetherium

Ok I will 😂 I want to start brainstorming it this afternoon (since it won’t be anything longer than a novella) but I’m not sure if I’ll get to it or not.

@trailblazer

Ooh, I like that idea!! This is definitely still in the plot bunny stage, so any ideas are welcome. XD

Sooo… I just came up with a possible novel/novella/short story idea that I really want to write… Basically, this person, probably a girl, is told that she is the chosen one, or something like that, but she refuses. She doesn’t want to get involved with this at all. So the special responsibilities/quest/privileges are given to someone else, prefe…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I love this scene!

Welllll, you already know I like Matthias. 😛 But I think I have to agree with you—I like Moishe too. I get the vibe that he has a layered backstory, more than he might be willing to share… 🤔

@freed_and_redeemed This all sounds so cool!! I love all your new characters, I can’t choose my favorite.

@freed_and_redeemed lol how you said Riker and Leon “aren’t cooperating”

happens all the time with my characters.

oh and your new charries sound amazing

@theducktator ooh interesting!

I like how the female duck is called Serpentine, a long, majestic, complicated name (how’d she get it anyway?) and then the male duck is just Bob. Brilliant.

Ending’s a bit choppy, but that’s nothing editing can’t fix.

@theducktator you’re welcome!!

@theducktator

Good choice 😁

@theducktator

That death made me madder than possibly any other death/supposed death in the books. It was sweet though, that each of the kids got to feel their father’s love in their own special way.

Peet though. Peet hurt.

@whalekeeper

I have no idea which group you are asking (if any. The general somebody is always an option), but you’re welcome to join in with anybody anytime. Technically an RP shouldn’t have to depend on groups.

@freed_and_redeemed

*GASPETH*

I like this new story. A lot. Matthias sounds amazing. Charna sounds amazing.

I know it’s not a main WIP or anything, but I would like to hear more of this book whenever you have any other randomness to share. =)

@freed_and_redeemed

This is a book I’d totally read!! I’ve actually been reading too many books outside of the genre I write lately. XD Authors are always saying you should read lots of books in your genre, but I enjoy reading his-fic so much! lol! I really love this idea though! Be sure to tag me if you post any snippet of it. 😊

@esther-c you’re welcome!!

@trailblazer @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h

Thanks for the thoughts, y’all!! Your opinions are helping me figure this out a lot. I might just step back from it for a while, or try to write a little farther ahead in the story and see what happens.

I was gonna save this new WIP for NaNo this year buuuuut…. Yeah that ain’t gonna happen. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

Oh yeah I totally get it. No worries! <3

Ah, I gotcha. I’m kinda there too. At least in one of my WIPs. If I really set myself loose on a different one I’ve been working on on the side, then I’d be writing a lot. XD

Ok, awesome! Glad it was helpful!

Of course!! 😊