Felicity

@lightoverdarkness6

That’s great!! I’m super thrilled you enjoyed it! Thank you!

Yes this is actually Feb. 20, 2022, and the invasion starts on the 24th. So it’s right at the beginning of everything. This book isn’t so much about the actual events of the invasion, more about how the events effect the people of Ukraine and Poland. I don’t go into…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks for reading!! I’m glad you liked it! Yes! This was my first try at present tense and I really liked it, so I kept it. 😀

Thanks so much for the tip! I will use it for sure.

@lightoverdarkness6

Yay!! I just read the 2nd chapter, and it’s so cute!! That’s actually really good for 10-11! I’m gonna go dig up some of my 10-11 yr old writing…XD.

Thanks!!! I think I had just finished reading a book about the French Rev. so that’d be where I got most of it. 😀 Yeah do!

@starofthenorth

Aww, thanks. There’s plenty more scenes I could share . . .

Yeah go for it!! I want to read it!

@starofthenorth

Haha, same. In this story Irene is just like “Do I like this guy?” and then he (the guy she likes is named Arthur) is like “Hey, I like you.” And she’s like “He loves me!!! I love him too.” And her dad is like “Marry this Edward guy.” And she says “I don’t want to.” And he says “Why?” And she’s like “I like this other guy named…

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@loopylin

I know right? I was obsessed with Quakers and all people who used to say “thee” and “thou”. 😀

@freedomwriter76

Also, what you’re writing about has been a pretty…well…topic that many people have been really interested and invested in, so I think that will help

Yeah I know what you mean.

But, I really, honestly, think it probably depends on the person…

…I’m probably not helpful at all. XDXDXD

Ok that makes sense. Yeah you are!! 😀

@koshka

Wow. I like your set up. You did a very good job of an intro.

Thank you!!

I did feel like some things were a little too stated, and perhaps not quite smooth.

Yes you’re right. I am experimenting with a newer writing style and not sure if I like the way it flows. I think to counter my normal long, rambling prose, I kind of chopped things…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

messed up your tag up there. Plus I just like blowing up your notifications.

@freedomwriter76

Oh and can i get your honest opinion? I’ve learned that first chapters are supposed to grab reader’s attentions and “hit the ground running”. Do you think mine does that? I’ve always struggled with slow beginnings, because for some reason I just really like writing slow beginnings. 😂😂 Do you think that’ll hinder the reader’s…[Read more]

@freedomwritier76

It’s my device, trust me. XD

Ok. I will. 😀 Do you know how to indent paragraphs on here? Because I indented all my paragraphs in the story and when I posted it they un-indented. 🙁 Does it do that to you too?

You are sooo welcome!!! <333 And yeah, don’t be!!! Everyone on here is so supportive.

Oh yeah!! It’s so gre…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Okay, so…my computer won’t let me access your story (stupid technology!!!)

Did i do something wrong when I posted it or is it just your device? I’m still figuring out how to use this forum…

I love it!

The characters all seem so real, and I love them already!

But I love where the story is heading. 😉

I’m sure you’ve put a lot o…

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@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12

Here’s chapter two of the French-Revolution story I wrote when I was 10/11. 😀 The first chapter is on here somewhere!!

With original spelling and punctuation:

Life in the Castel -chapter two            Elisabeth de Medicis

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@lightoverdarkness6

Ach! I forgot the six. 😀

@lightoverdarkness6

There’s this part in the older one. Or maybe it is in the new one, where Willy and Charlie fell through the roof of Charlie’s house in an elevator, and one of his grandmas is lying in bed, and she leans up and says: “I think someones at the door.”or something of that accord. Me and my brother love that part!! It’s hilarious.…

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@lightoverdarkness

YES!!! Riker Wrath XD. Not on you! But DEFINITELY on Riker’s abusers (terrible people that never should’ve been born!!!!!!!!)

TOTALLY!!!!

I found yours!! Yes, please share the second chapter!! It was so cute! I loved the historical vibe–even if you didn’t know much about history at that time XD :).

Ok I will. 🙂

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@freedomwriter76

A lot, lol. XD

Why not?! 😀

Okay, so, Wolfgang is 18, Reuben is 20, Jakob is 24, Joshua is 25, and Leo is 28. Their ages will be revealed, just kinda slowly. But I have already established the order, so at least I have that! XD

Ooo…I see. Sounds good!

@mineralizedwritings

12k… wow. That’s great!! Yeah I don’t know what’s actually fast or not.  😆

I know the NiNaRiMo….(however you spell it) writing challenge is to write 50k in a month…which is extra crazy fast. I’d say you’re doing pretty good. Yes stay away from burnout!! (Once you’re burnt out, it’s hard to start up again)