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Loopy replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@ava-blue Awww 🥰 thank you, fren
@starofthenorth I’m glad you’re recovering! That sounds rough
These are pretty much the same as Ava’s, but I’m thankful for @ava-blue because she is awesome and has really cool weird interests that make her really fun to talk to and it’s really easy to be myself around her. 😁 I’m also thankful for music becaus…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@starofthenorth First of all, I’m so glad to hear that you’re okay! I’ve never been to the hospital, that sounds scary.
Personally, I’m very thankful for @loopylin for keeping me alive through the school year 😅 She helped me actually finish a big fat boring paper (and I almost got it in on time lol) and she’s the best friend I could ever ask for…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone
Imma do the boys now too
Simon and Carter
“They were right here.” Carter said for the tenth time. He and some others had pressed every stone in the wall, hoping to find the button that had opened the floor before, but with no luck. Now, he was on his hands and knees, trying to pry open the…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Sorry forgot to tag you @theloonyone
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Beth
The door opened to reveal another girl with her arm in a makeshift sling.
“What is with everyone around here hurting their arms?” Beth muttered.
“Hi! I’m Carmen!” Carmen said with a smile, peeking over Everly’s shoulder at the girl. “Hey, you match Everly here with your sling! You could be sling…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
I somehow missed the original notification from when you first tagged me, but I just found this and finally read it. I love all of the writing and the dialogue and the characters so much!💕
Is this the same story as the one Reuben and his brothers are from?
Also I think it would be interesting maybe in a second draft to…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
I finally got around to reading this and I love it! Can’t wait to read more! Also the perspective on that drawing is amazing 😍
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h sorry Kad doesn’t really have anything to do right now. I’m trying to hurry this up but I’m not sure how it should end
Dante
“Dante…I think we need a little bit more proof than that…
I don’t exactly know if I can trust you anymore.”
Dante looked up and met Steve’s eyes.
Trust.
He had heard those words many times…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
Time to introduce the girls! We should probably add character descriptions for them.Beth, Simon’s older sister, is 17 and has shoulder length dark brown hair. She is very practical and introverted. Carmen is Carter’s sister and is about the same age as him. She is very skinny and has wavy str…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@godlyfantsy12 Yay! I’m so glad you like it! I definitely want to come up with some more weird rooms in the castle
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Loopy replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 11 months ago
@felicity Uh, hi! Welcome to kingdom pen! You seem to be currently busy chasing a snake around, but I’m gonna introduce myself anyway. 😆
I’m Loopy. I like writing mostly fantasy and sci-fi, and I’m planning on a lot of my stories to end up being animated series or at least comics.
That’s really cool that your WIP is about Ukraine! Do you know…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @anyoneelseonhere
I just had a somewhat creepy idea for a random hall somewhere in the castle that is lined with renaissance portrait paintings of every character that has ever been in the castle. Every time a character joins, their painting…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone
Simon
“I’ll meet you guys on the other side.”
Kaine dropped out of sight on the other side of the wall.
The rest of the group followed his instructions, found the stairs, and got to the other side. Once they had met up again with Kaine, Carter turned to Matthew, a spark of mischief in his e…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I finished Reuben! I have very little experience drawing guys so it was really helpful practice. I hope you like him!

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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 hehe yeah, Dante needs to learn to quit being so selfish and Steve is the perfect person to teach him that lesson @keilah-h
Dante
“Dante…” Steve grabbed Dante’s shirt, pulling him out of the seat and towards him, “I think we all need an explanation.”
Dante grabbed the arm that held his shirt with both hands and looked up at…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Putting Yourself in your Characters? in the forum Characters 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Ooo this is a cool topic! I’m pretty sure every writer on the planet does this (wether they realize it or not). It’s part of what makes stories interesting. The readers can see parts of themselves or parts of people they know in the characters they read about.
I definitely do this because a lot of my characters have adhd like…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Carter
“Sorry, guys, for ditching you all. I just ah,” The curly haired woman said, addressing everyone. “I don’t know what is going on either and I needed to do something. Maybe if we can get to that castle, thing, we can get some answers.”
“Oh, you’re all good.” Simon answered. (I am…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy That’s what I said. But that doesn’t stop us from putting weird stuff like an entire forest inside the castle.😏 Just kidding, that’d be a lil too crazy. (I do like my cave system idea from earlier tho…)
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Loopy replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings
I love this and I could totally see it as a graphic novel! I definitely want to read more💕 I also really appreciate that you’re acknowledging the harm that divorce causes. That isn’t addressed very much in modern media. -
Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Yay! I’m glad you like the idea! My characters could probably take care of Evelyn if it doesn’t take a large amount of medical knowledge. They’d certainly be willing to.
I think they already have an obstacle because the castle is pretty much a never ending maze and there are a few villains roaming around that we could bump…[Read more]
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