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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@catwing Lovely ending, *nods enthusiastically* I approve.
DO NOT TOUCH CHAPTER ONE CATWING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@catwing I was just about to ask whether cranberries and oranges were a catwing thing or something that average people did (average people are very boring, so don’t be upset that I’m implying you’re not-average).
Ah, I see what they are. We have something very similar here, but they’re called Shapes, and are in various different shapes, depending…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Okay, forgive my ignorance, but I have heard several people refer to “Goldfish”, and this is not a thing in Australia, so I’m presuming you don’t mean actual Goldfish? But now you’re talking about cranberries and canned oranges and I’m wondering what sort of food you eat with cranberries and canned oranges????
I am confused.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
It’s good to hear that someone’s making progress 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Please come and outline my third book. Please??? *cute cat eyes*
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ClaireC replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
What @seekjustice said is really true, guys. Australia (particularly the state of New South Wales) is really struggling. If you want to read more about it, follow this link.
http://www.abc.net.au/news/drought/
Also, @seekjustice, I thought you might be interested in this Christian mission’s response to the…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Absolutely praying for your friend, @alia, and for you too, as you try to counsel her with wisdom. I’ll be praying for both of you.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
I’ll hunt down some books on that then, and set to work reading them while my beta readers finish off the document and I’ve already started doing some serious worldbuilding. I see that as my main things to tackle in the next draft 😀 Thanks for all your input!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
I realise that 🙂 though things like the “Premier’s Bill” which Lang gets assassinated over, were things that really happened in Australia during the Depression (though no one was assassinated, as far as I know).
I definitely think that in order to do better worldbuilding for this story, I need to do some amount of study on economics and…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
The only thing I would say in rebuttal to what you’ve said in your comments though, is that I had quite heavily based the world on the world of the Great Depression. That’s part of the reason there’s such a divide between the rich and the poor and also in the technology. In the Great Depression, the people were living in a world that was…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 Bye!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 The hardest thing about this one is trying to bring it all together into something that effectively caps off the last two books.
@valtmy Most of it makes sense and a lot of it was said by another beta reader last week. Most of the main critiques have to do with my worldbuilding especially, which I know is pretty subpar.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Its coming along slowly, but at least I have something that resembles a plot now.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
I’m still here, reading over Valtmy’s comments 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
I don’t mind which you use 🙂 Feel free to go with whatever works best for you.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
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