@evelyn-collins
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins all righty! See you then I guess!!
(and now you know why I have Tech as my profile pic lol. Like him, I can fill your head with useless info for hours)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins Maybe! I’ve never thought of that, but there are studies on some people (the only ones with the trait are female, but a male could probably be introduced through genetic experimentation, which is exactly what happened) who had extra light-sensing cells in their eyes. It’s called tetrachromacy, and it’s though that those with the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins All right!
So, Leo’s arc here–the story we’re trying to tell with her–seems that she doesn’t trust anyone, and is really aloof. Her mom’s hurt her, Varian’s not the nicest either, and she’s heard about how her dad walked out on her. Is there somewhere you’re going with that? Like, she’s going to have to trust Crosshair that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I can see her being less powerful since she’s second-gen. But still.
Can you tell I’m really enjoying helping you brainstorm?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I could tell lol
does that mean she’s also got superpowerful eyesight? Like, with training and a decent rifle, she could hit things from as far away as he can? (For reference, the “10 clicks” Hunter mentions when he first introduced Crosshair is ten kilometers, or about six miles. No sniper in our world has ever managed to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins it certainly would be…
Except I’m not saying your charrie and my charrie are literally the same person. What I’m thinking of is two separate timelines, in which what would be the same character went through different situations. Something happened to Cross’s love interest in your story (idk her name here, but the charrie in my…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins I’m back. I just keep coming here to read your fanfic as it’s written lol
So, funny enough, Leo’s mom’s explanation of how she fell in love with you-know-who is pretty close to the romance story I’d contrived for him in my own fanfic universe, which is crazy (and make me wonder……are my charrie and your charrie two different…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins ok, here it is:
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins I hope so too. Hence why I have him as a cyborg on my profile, since I feel like the fall he took would at least hurt him. (I can post the picture here and larger if you want to study it.)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins Lol I can be, but I also was just shocked that they’d kill him off so soon in the show, and after all the character development they gave him.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins lol I didn’t even cry at Tech’s, I was just frozen, like “What…what just happened. What.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins lol that’s awesome
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins lol yeah it happens
also, great signature. Fives is the best isn’t he?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins cool!!
also, yes, I do canonically, they’re hilarious together. But in fanfics, it really depends, because before the show introduced a love interest for him I’d already contrived one. So it depends on whether I have her in the story or not (she is in almost all of them, so it’s more of whether to kill her off or not)
While I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins I’m back with ideas!!
- Maybe Hemlock’s after Leo–and if she has cousins through the other Bad Batch members, them too–because, well…because they’re the children of the republic’s greatest soldiers, and that could be exploited. And, if anything, the Empire could threaten the guys with “We have something you’ll definitely want,…
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Sara replied to the topic hi it's meeeeeeee in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Heyy! I’m Sara, though most people around here call me…well, they call me Sara. XD
Anyways, I’m a chocolate consuming, emotionally unstable, sleep deprived, algebra loving, public school attending freshman (in highschool)!
Here are some random questions:
Do you ever talk to yourself?
Have you ever subconsciously narrated parts…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
Hey guys!! I think it’s about time I start sharing my WIP since it has changed drastically from the first draft I had shared on here 🫣
Any critiques are welcome, but if you just want to read it that’s totally fine too!
I have 20ish chapters written, so I still don’t have a good chunk of the book written yet. I’m not sure how often I’ll be postin…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@jonas @freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherum @trailblazer @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @princesachronicle22 @grcr @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @power @thearcaneaxiom @esther-c @scoutfinch180 @livingwoodchronicles @beth-torres @hybridlore @evelyn-collins I know we haven’t met, but I’m tagging you anyways…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic hi it's meeeeeeee in the forum Start HERE 10 months ago
Honestly, a lot of what I’ve read recently has been historical fiction. But when I was in middle school I used to read the Babysitter Club books and Christy Miller, and enjoyed both of those series at the time. When I was even younger than that, I loved the Boxcar Children, although I guess that falls into the mystery genre.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I couldn’t deal with that idea either, so I was making sure we were on the same page in that regard lol
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