@evelyn-collins
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 7 months ago
btw is Ev’s little brother still there? Along with Ami’s brothers? I haven’t heard from them so I wasn’t sure if they were still there (I might’ve missed something lol)
Yep! 👍 I just kind of… um… forgot… to mention them. Also, at this point, they are in their own prison cells, so I want it to be solely focused on them and their…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Ooooh… That would definitely be interesting. 🤔 XD
I’m here!
Wassup? (Besides waiting for your nails to dry, lol)
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Esther started the topic Pretty Prose, Please! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @felicity @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @kathleenramm @booksbyjayna @keilah-h @loopylin @theloonyone @power @thearcaneaxiom @otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin @landric @gwyndalf-the-wise @whalekeeper
So… I need help.
I’ve noticed that my prose is lac…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Any other Signposters here? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 7 months ago
When I get the chance, I’ll definitely check out the Signposts! 👍 Is it in a book or an article/website?
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 7 months ago
ARE MA BOYS OKAY
I MEAN YOUR BOYS XD XD
Lol. XD
For now. 😏
Here are the next two!! @mineralizedwritings @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @gwyndalf-the-wise
Chapter 26
Everton held his anger in as he was locked in his cell. He glanced at the door as it was shut. There was no way he was getting out. The door must have been at…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Wix or WordPress? in the forum Publishing & Platform 3 years, 7 months ago
Great question!!
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To which I don’t have the answer. Lol 😅
I think @gracie-j and @r-m-archer may have websites/blogs. They may be able to offer some insight on this. 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic They all said to start here… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 7 months ago
@solielnaia
Setter is like volleyball’s quarterback. You’re the understated conductor of everything and it’s awesome.
Yessss!! It’s awesome!!
And all the power to ya for your caffeine tolerance.😆 I can only dream…
lol XD
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Esther replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 7 months ago
Ooooh boy!
What are you most scared of?
Ev: Nothing
Ami: *nudges him the shoulder… roughly*
Ev: Ouch! Okay… maybe not nothing… I… *sighs* *looks down* I’m afraid of failing… of failing those I love.
Ami: In all honesty… I’m… I’m afraid of not being good enough.
(Me: 🥲 *hugs my charries*)
What is the weirdest thing that has ever…
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 7 months ago
Asher!!!! WHAT!!??
I kind of thought he was a bit shady but I never thought he’d do something like that!!
Ikr?!
I knew he was gonna do something, then I came up with this and I was like: Oh boy! This will be fun! His motive is explained later… 😏
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Wow, he does sound interesting! And conflicting lol. XD I can totally see Ev getting fired up about that.
I’m struggling on figuring out my villain’s motive and personality lol. Yours sounds a bit like him tho! Lol
Ikr? Lol
Villains are hard. Because it’s difficult to create their motive and personality without making it cliche.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Thanks! Micron style pens mostly, and a calligraphy pen. It looks darker than it actually is because I cleaned it up in photoshop.
Ok, cool!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 7 months ago
If your personality fit that of an animal, what animal would you be? i.e. a bold, fierce warrior might be a lion.
Ami: Hm… That’s a hard one….
Ev: I would be a phoenix.
Ami: Why?
Ev: *dramatically* I rise from the ashes!
Ami: Sure… Not really.
Ev: Ok… then maybe…
Ami: You’d be a peacock.
Ev: Say what now??
Ami: A peacock.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise
XDXDXD
I love how you wrote Fynn! You got him spot on.
Like, I love writing Fynn and Skyler so much that I’m considering writing a novel about them that happens a few years after The Endoxos Trilogy. It would be so fun!!
@gwyndalf-the-wise , you can go next if you want. 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Any other Signposters here? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 7 months ago
I’ve never heard of that before! Sounds interesting.
I call myself a plantser. (Plotter/pantser) I used to be a pantser, but found out that didn’t work for me, so I am now a plantser. I write out a short summary for each chapter and follow that as my outline. But I let it change as I write. For example, the last half or maybe mor…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 7 months ago
You charries have some awesome answers!! They sound like fun!!
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Esther replied to the topic They all said to start here… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 7 months ago
No way! I played volleyball in high school, too! I was a setter and then an opposite and it was awesome. It’s such a lovely, passive-aggressive sport: you don’t have to be up in people’s faces–instead you get to wack a ball at them from a distance.
That’s so cool!! I play setter as well. That may change though, since I’m switching t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@gwyndalf-the-wise @godlyfantasy12
Awww!! Luca is so cute!! <33
Fynn
At the young woman’s request, Fynn introduced himself, Skyler, and Des. “We’re glad to meet you, Luna,” he said with a wink.
She offered a smile. As Des joined Fynn’s side, Fynn leaned towards Des and whispered, “I think she likes me.”
“In your dreams, Fynnster.”
“I’…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
I feel kinda conflicted about him already…
Like, I understand his motive, but the means…not good means, I’m assuming…😅😅😅
Yeah… His motive and his means are kind of twisted, actually. 😅 Like, in the sin-cursed world we live in, we can never achieve peace. Len thinks he can. And the ways he tries are just wrong. For example, on…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 7 months ago
This is an AMAZING idea!!! And funnily enough, I had a very similar idea the past couple of days…😅😂
Great minds think alike!! XD
What is the one word that describes you?
Ev: *no hesitation* Irresistible.
Ami: In your dreams, buddy.
Ev: But you can’t deny it.
Ami: *clears throat*
Ev: Fine then… courageous.
Ami: More like impul…[Read more]
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