Evelyn collins

@freedomwriter76

I could add even more charries for them to join if y’all wanted…🤣

There’s a couple I may need some practice writing. 😜💗

If you want to. 🤣

I know @godlyfantasy12, @princesachronicle22 and I were a group that had Des, Fynn, and Sky in it. If they are willing to pick up that group again, then I’m fine with that. I’m okay with you…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

1. Any other country… Good question! I’m going to have to go with Israel, I think? Because I would get to see some of the places where Jesus walked!

That would be so cool!! I used to really want to visit Israel (and I still do), but I really want to visit Ireland/Northern Ireland now because of the scenery and the accents. &#x…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Yep! I understand! 🙂

@keilah-h

If you’re bored writing a story, that doesn’t mean it’s a bad chapter. It might mean you’re getting tired of the project and need to work on another one for a little until you get new ideas! Or, if you think a scene is getting boring or useless for your charries/readers, insert some foreshadowing for what’ll come later.

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@freedomwriter76

Ahh, I have not!!! 😭😮😔 So sorry about that!!! Will/Ev were going to find a frozen dragon or something…right??? 😅

Naw, you’re good. 😊

Sure! Lol XD Whatever you want do. 😁

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else-I-missed

Is there any group for Destry, Fyn…[Read more]

Hello and welcome, @kyronthearcanin!!

(Somehow I missed it when @thearcaneaxiom tagged me. : )

Anywho…

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, homeschooled, amateur writer!!

My WIP is ya dystopian, but I have tons of ideas for stories in other genres!

Fantasy sounds really awesome!! I tried fantasy a whi…[Read more]

Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen, @light-warrior-pen!! (Hey, it rhymed. 😂)

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, homeschooled, amateur writer!!

I love incorporating crime, humor, and romance in my writing. I also love showing Christ in my writing in unique ways, but I need a lot of work in that area!

I would t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

LOVE IT!!!

The boys as, well… boys, lol, was so adorable to read!!

I love writing my charries as little kids!! 🥰

@thearcaneaxiom

I see what you mean. That’s a really good point.

For my situation specifically, I may have to change the chapter a bit. It is in my second draft and never existed in the first draft. In the first draft, they learn this information over time, but it’s unnatural. In the second draft, they learn a little bit at once, but it see…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

I do actually have a question.

So, I understand that people can join the groups to become one of the people who critique others’ work, but how do you become the one who gets their work critiqued? Do you have to be published on KP to get critiqued?

@katthewriter

No, I was on my iPad.

Thanks for letting us know!

Totally! 🙂

@acancello

Awesome!! 😀

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Oooo I really like that scene! =D

Thank ya!!! 🥰

However I don’t have any feedback/suggestions for you right now, sorry.

You’re good!! 🙂

@princesachronicle22

Yeah, I’ve considered a few options like that, but my main problem is, that this has already happened in the book. Simply a side characters view point of the scenario. She is assumed to be in leauge with the villains, but this is how I’m showing that she wasn’t at all.

So it was hard for me to state it as a full flash…

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@mineralizedwritings

That sounds like a really good idea!! 😀

You’re welcome!! 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! You can be vague if you want. I am curious, but for the sake spoilers, I can be patient.

Alright! 👍

I’m really bad at that, when I’m asked about something about my worldbuilding, even though it would be a spoiler, I just kinda dump it all out. I need to work on being more vague.

Lol XD

Yeah. My siblings don’t like it when…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Ok, yeah that makes sense. Thanks for clarifying! I would love to hear more, because you make it sound man made to a extent, but it’s also clearly a magical or beyond technological structure, so I want to understand the lore you got going now.

That’s a really good question… because I’m still figuring some things out. XD

I know wh…[Read more]

@otherworldlyhistorian

Great idea!!

I really need to worldbuild for Aletheia more. 🤦🏻‍♀️ This will help me finally get to the religions. I have a feeling they’ll be pretty close to real-world religions, since their world is very similar to ours, but I’m not sure yet. 🤔