Karina Sanchez

@overcomer I guess that’s fine so long as her hand doesn’t short circuit in the process.

Awe, I don’t know Kate. It was just there, ya know? Don’t worry though. This will give me great insight into characters with withered hands. My novels are gonna just go crazy now.

Oh, yeah *goes and reads about Cobalt*

Or a dragon who has to save the prince from the princess.

Ha, that’s funny cause I’m actually writing something like that right now only the dragon does a terrible job of saving the knight (a frog does it instead) and I’m using and evil Rapunzel instead of a princess.

@overcomer I don’t think it matters, but I’ve always included it as text in the email and they’ve excepted that

*horrified gasp* Oh my goodness @Daeus let me see it! *drops gavel with clatter, springs in terror from her seat* Oh no, why did you have your hand there!?!?

You should really write about a character who takes gavel swinging practice

I would raise my hand but Kate has forever crippled it with her gavel.

May the publishers be with you

Yes! Any opposed? *glances happily around* No?
Good.
*slams gavel down on desk with resounding crash* MOTION PASSES!!!!!

@overcomer Invision dancing dwarfs scarcely visible through clouds of confetti with chocolate fountains in the background.

@overcomer If you click “Get published” and scroll through the page a bit, you’ll eventually find this.

“Please submit your image as an attached jpeg file which is a minimal of 448 x 336 px in size.”

@Daeus ah. My bad. 🙂 I do see how that could be better, now that you mention it.

@kate-flournoy I don’t think it had much to do their accent. I think it was mainly about the flow of the scene, sentence flow, and characterization.

Reading through you guys’ comments, I’m seeing a lot about the German characters’ stilted speech, so I may be the one who’s wrong here, but I kinda got the impression it was supposed to be that way because they couldn’t speak proper English. @writefury I am mistaken?

@overcomer Come 21 you can always create your own site. Your own site has your own rules. Or you find another place to publish or do Wattpad or something.

@sarah-h Yep

@Bluejay, well at least you’ve got a top notch excuse. Actually, I’ll be taking classes from the crickets, so it’s all good. You only ever hear their crickety noise, but they sing even better.

@writefury, I like it! I mean, I like them…the stories ideas, that is. 🙂

This is really great Rosey. I only have two small comments. First, when Jean says, “R-Really?” This seems too much like a quick mood swing. I would just have something like, “Oh-“.

Second, the part where the two bad guys are talking: I don’t know quite how to say this but it seems – almost – formulaic – kind of. I mean, first of all, the bad guy…[Read more]

That’s fine @bluejay I’ll just have to manage without you. Unless anyone else wants to join *cricket noises* …Anyone???