Euodia

@ellete-giselle OMG THE GAS PRICES ONE IS SO TRUE BUT SAD XD

@whalekeeper ok now I rlly wanna join this RP LOL

Sounds cool! Question-is this a voice call? (I’m awkward so was wondering rofllll)

@whalekeeper this might sound really weird but…I feel like I’ve been away from my computer for so long I’m relearning how to type lol. Sounds weird I know but yea. I think my brain is just so thrown off right now gah.

@godlyfantasy12

Glad to help :]

Yeah, it’s a lot of fun to find ideas that way! I understand taking long breaks from roleplaying though. The book’s gotta be written.

@rae (OMG I HAD TO SAY I LOVE UR PFP! Did u draw that???) @whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h Heyooo!! So I’m thinking of joining an RP again… *nervous shuffling* but it’s been a HOT MINUTE! and, well, Idk how much ill be on and I don’t want that to affect anyone. I’ll only do one character.

I’m struggling right now with Arabella, and my current…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @rae @theducktator @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @anyone else

Hey guys! Time to talk about this writing zoom call idea. If anyone is interested, please let me know what your time zone is, and when you’re usually free. I’ll try to arrange a time when the most people can get together.

The idea for this call is to have a few writing…[Read more]

@whalekeeper I like those ideas!! I may join a role-play again on here…to see if it may help me get back into the groove of writing because I found a lot of little gems when I was roleplaying to..I won’t be on as much tho so I don’t want it to affect anyone too bad. But it was nice to see how others saw my character and portrayed them in their…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin

How did I know Lucy would notice? I figured she’d do it silently, but I was apparently wrong on that point.

I just remembered he still has a cinnamon roll wrapped up in his pocket he got there with. He didn’t ever eat it, planning on giving it to Lucy.

Also, Mel is super cute.

@keilah-h @whaley @loopy

Gabriel

Gabriel…[Read more]

@rae @keilah-h @loopylin

Lucille

Lucy took a deep breath of the flowers, and passed some of them to Mel. This sniff test required a two-person court.

While the adults talked, Lucy watched Gabriel quietly, then glanced around the room. She wandered around, analyzing everything, from the table to the many skins.

Something had spilled on another…[Read more]

He’d bled on the floor more times than he cared to tell her. He hoped she wouldn’t notice more faint stains.

Bruh

@godlyfantasy12

So you’re trying to present Ara’s world to the reader before the inciting incident happens, and you don’t know how to translate the inner world to the outer world?
If so, wait a minute. We have the same problem. I’m trying to write the same thing. XD

The best I can say is to come up with a meaningful, but normal situation that re…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @looylin @kielah-h

Just to be clear, the flowers are bushes outside of the house. I don’t think I mentioned that.

Gabriel

“Was that your blood?”

Gabriel looked back at the rug, and nodded. He’d bled on the floor more times than he cared to tell her. He hoped she wouldn’t notice more faint stains.

“So are these the monsters you w…[Read more]

@koshka @whalekeeper thank yall so much for the advice!!

I’m already feeling better. 😊

I don’t wanna procrastinate but I do feel like I need some parts more fleshed out-maybe I can get some advice/ideas there…

right now I’m really struggling with the beginning. I know those are always the hardest, and is apt to change (and mine has man…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae @loopylin ok i’m back

Sniper

Gabriel walked around like he knew the place.

Sorta reminded me of, well, me during the war, when I was wanderin’ the old halls of my dad’s lab back on Staten, my earliest memories reactivated.

“Is this where you lived with that old man? Your master?” Lucy asked.

“This is where he found me.…[Read more]

Also yeah, like @elishavet-pidyon said! Writing calls! I’m not sure how to make it accessible to everyone because not everyone uses Google chat. Which is what I normally use for calls. But we can figure it out.

@godlyfantasy12

You wrote more than 50k words, which is a lot of emotional effort when writing the series of your dreams. So first off, that’s awesome. You’ll have plenty of material to edit. You’re definitely burnt out from that. That sounds normal to me.

I’m currently at an ADORABLE bookshop/cafe and slowly wanting and feeling the nudge to g…

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@elishavet-pidyon that’s a good idea! and yea I’ll probably find myself on here more often. I’m just struggling to get words out period…

I’m also…just struggling sometimes with this book. The concept, plot, characters, etc are good. I like it…but at the same time at points it feels flat…It needs more, I already have notes for things I need to add but its a little overwhelming…

I really wanna get it to the point I feel comfortable letting someone else read it and critique…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae remind me to write an rp later today (I have something I have to do but I also wanna do this)