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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 minutes ago
Other than that, this is a good section, and connects well with your previous ones.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 minutes ago
Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heaven will be. These guys are scared and they need a reminder that they don’t need to worry and God will protect them, even if they die. They need to know that it will be worth it, and this can help them see tha…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 29 minutes ago
Just for these reasons:
Exactly. I kinda saw some of those points coming when I read Leander’s description.
In Character Party, we had literal fights between characters. We resolved things a little, and no one died, but my poor Nahim had a concussion, and the other characters…oh Zaren ( @highscribeofaetherium )and Nahim had a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 58 minutes ago
Gotcha. You might want to try to clarify the definition a little more, but I would see what others like Linus think.
What does your signature mean, by the way?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 hours, 11 minutes ago
@keilah-h ^^
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 hours, 11 minutes ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle@keilah-h @theducktator
New chapters! I’m getting a little short on my supply so I’ll probably start posting singles instead of doubles every week soon. The past few weeks have been busy, but hopefully I’ll start writing again soon.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 hours, 15 minutes ago
I like how Konner and the others are afraid of the Empire. That seems realistic—I would be surprised if in a time like this, all the Christians were courageous enough to defy the government always. Julian’s speech is good. Very rousing. A few parts didn’t make sense.
“If we make decisions based on survival, and only on the abi…
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 hours, 50 minutes ago
I have seen some stuff. It looks like it has a cool concept to it
I’ve thought about watching it just to know what the hype is about.
and from there I gathered that kitsune are fox creatures from Japanese mythology, hence why kitsune masks always have ears.
I found that out from Godly because she said one of her characters was inspired by…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 hours, 52 minutes ago
I’d love to be tagged!!
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 hours, 56 minutes ago
(Barnes always peaks my interest, but now more than ever, which is saying something.)
Aw, if she was aware of this conversation on a break-the-fourth-wall level, she would be mildly flattered.
Gabriel will most certainly pry into that one…
😐 Oh no, flight instinct initiated.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 hours, 15 minutes ago
Oh dear, Leander, Hunter, and Gabriel may clash…
this rp may be filled with that sweet drama like in Character Party *evilly taps fingertips together*
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 hours, 40 minutes ago
lol
Anyone can be good at art if they practice.
Glad you like his character. He doesn’t have a written story yet, and I wasn’t planning on giving him one, but maybe I should change that decision.
Also, your forum signature is really funny.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 hours, 6 minutes ago
Ooooooooooh! Interest officially peaked. (Barnes always peaks my interest, but now more than ever, which is saying something.) Gabriel will most certainly pry into that one…
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 hours, 12 minutes ago
Oh, and the anime style for Gabriel’s character design is from a video game called Wuthering Waves. I don’t play it, but I saw a trailer for it on YouTube a while ago, and like the style. Gabriel’s pose and much of his character design came from a character named Jiyun.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 hours, 13 minutes ago
*Makes note to officially submit character for this rp after sprinting for CEW*
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 hours, 14 minutes ago
@rae
Yeah it would be interesting. They definitely have different lore, though. Barnes has… maybe four different reasons for wearing her mask? Five? Oh goodness, I’ve never thought about that before but it’s true. And only one reason is remotely similar to Gabriel’s reason. -
Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 hours, 14 minutes ago
Do you watch Demon Slayer?
I have seen some stuff. It looks like it has a cool concept to it, but it also seems pretty dark, since the “demons” were once people. It also can get bloody, like a lot of animes.
I don’t know much about kitsune, I just googled what type of mask the demon slayer characters sometimes wear, and from there I…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 hours, 19 minutes ago
Boom, I knew you were inspired by anime! I know very little about Kitsune or anime besides the classic Ghibli. XD And I can’t remember where I got the mask idea myself; it was probably just a product of deciding what my character would wear. Do you watch Demon Slayer?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 5 hours, 19 minutes ago
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 5 hours, 23 minutes ago
Got it, good to know. I didn’t remember what color he was before anyway, so this helps.
Got some scenes for Crosshair too? Or is he dead in the first ten minutes? LOL in that case sorry Cross
NO comment. 🤣
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