Ethryndal

@jenwriter17

I love quirky POVs 😀 So much fun!

Pretty good! I’m almost at the end of part 2, which means I’m roughly halfway through Stars Fill Infinity.

@jenwriter17 I approve whole-heartedly!!

How’s your rewriting going?

@jenwriter17

Well, thank you 😀 And yes, its not so much the character trait, but more the normalisation of it. That’s what makes me mad.

@jenwriter17

Yes, its crazy! I hate it very much. 😐

Well, I don’t necessary have a problem with her being disrespectful or disobeying her parents. My problem comes when the character never changes and its shown to be okay. After all, Chessy can be pretty disrespectful and disobedient toward her father, but I hope that I portrayed that to be bad…[Read more]

@jenwriter17

I always liked reading those stories! The more modern ones tended to get on my nerves though (an excuse for disobedient and rebellious girls to one-up everyone else), but I’d love to see a Christian version of those sorts of stories.

Nice pinterest board, by the way.

@jenwriter17

Cool! It sounds interesting. 😀 Is it a “horse story”?

@jenwriter17

Cool! I’ll check it out (pray I don’t get lost in the murky depths of Pinterest)!

@jenwriter17

I didn’t know you’d written a contemporary. Do you have a blurb for it?

@jenwriter17

Okay, I’ll do that then.

😀 Sometimes I want to recommend my own books to other people (can’t you see what a humble person I am?). Its nice to know that I’m already being promoted though. I’ll have a lot of fans by the time my books come out. 😛

@jenwriter17

By the way, have you changed it much from the first draft? I’m just wondering whether I should read the second draft you posted a few days ago. If it isn’t changed much, I’ll leave it and maybe read the next draft, but if you’ve changed it substantially, I’ll have another read.

@jenwriter17

Awesome! Your dystopian novel?

@catwing

Whoa! That’s amazing news! Well done! (And it was my pleasure. It was a really cool story to read)

@jenwriter17

I’m editing. Whatcha working on?

@leumeister
Kay would rather die than live in a simulator forever.
Alex would choose the same.

@rochellaine
Kay would be allergic to all meat. It is a lot easier than being allergic to all fruits and vegetables. She could eat vegetarian and restarants don’t have carnivore options. It could blow her cover badly if she didn’t eat her…[Read more]

@rochellaine If you were allergic to potato-squash that would be unfortunate, because then you couldn’t eat it. 🙂 There are so many good foods made from potato-squash. Pies, cakes, breads, fruit arrangements.

@dekreel Math is determined to be boring. It is very stubborn.
Solve this problem like this.
Why do they need to know this? Why am I doing math for the person in this problem? Sjouldn’t they do their own math? 😛
(The point is to learn math… But still! 🙁 )

@rochellaine perhaps talking bags are why horses are scared of bags… (That was a joke that I now realize isn’t as funny as it was in my head.)
@seekjustice I met someone with the same name as one of my characters. When she said her name, I thought, “At least she doesn’t look like my poor tortured character. I wouldn’t want to have a book…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Enjoy your trip! (Am I late at replying to this or what? 😛 )

I wrote this earlier but I have discovered it didn’t post… Soo…
@rochellaine @seekjustice @ariel-ashira
Thank you all again for helping me edit through The End of Alex. It won the contest! (There only two othet stories, but still!) Y’all were so helpful. Thank you again!
Yay I won! *throws feathers*

(I’m going to try to be on more because…[Read more]

@valtmy

That’s the best way to write, isn’t it?

Well, I need to go now! It was nice chatting with you. I’ll probably be around tomorrow, so I might see you then!

@valtmy

Those bits are good too 🙂 I really need to get onto reading what I have left of your novel.

(wait, it is a full length novel, or a shorter work? I’m curious)