@esther-c
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone want to critique my plot? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 4 months ago
Okay! That’s fine! I totally understand not having brainpower lol!
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Beth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
He he. 😄 Ima do it.
Evania
“Want to take dance lessons?” Evania asked jokingly.
They’d passed by a sign announcing there would be dance lessons soon, along with the form to sign up.
Alina grinned, almost mischievously.
“You can.”
“I was kid-”
Alina came to a halt.
“I’ll give you fifty dollars.”
Evania stopped by her sister,…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
HmMmMM… the only thing is, my characters aren’t going with anyone to the dance, so I don’t think they’ll have to know how. I could write that Alina dared Evania to do it and look bad on purpose for like 50 dollars?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Lol!! Fynn XD
Livia
“That would be fun,” Liv said slowly, contemplating it. If she was going to go to the dance, she might as well learn how to, well, dance. “Where are the classes?”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Livia
She gave Lukas a high five and lowered her eyes, smiling to herself.
“I think I may have gone a little overboard…” she laughed, “but the expression on his face was worth everything!”
“No kidding,” Lukas shook his head.
And then a thought crossed her mind. “Wait. I think we have a problem.”
Lukas tilted his head to the side.…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Liv
“I know this guy,” Fynn edged closer to her. Liv rolled her eyes.
“Um, no.”
“Are you sure?” he raised an eyebrow. “I think you two would have a connection, if you know what I mean,” he tapped his two index fingers together.
“Stop trying to set me up!” Liv whirled around, startling Fynn. She fought to keep a straight face.…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Btw, strong herbal licorice tea helps sore throats.
YOU DRINK LICORICE TEA TOO!?!?!?! I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT’S LITERALLY THE BEST TEA IN THE WORLD (except chai but they are a tie, lol)!!!! Everyone else thinks that it’s disgusting because they don’t like how licorice tea sounds (and they haven’t even tried it)…but…[Read more]
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Allison posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago
@esther-c @jonas @freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @grcr @euodia-vision @everyone
Does anyone use Grammarly? I was wondering if it is as good as everyone says. I’m thinking about using it to make some minor corrections on my book, but want to know if its reliable.
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whaley replied to the topic A Poem I Wrote ❤️ (Hey… got any ideas for a title?) in the forum Poetry 2 years, 4 months ago
ACK, I completely forgot about this!!
@lydibug @loopylin @euodia-vision @esther-c You girls are so sweet – I love your comments and I appreciate them a lot 🥰 *hugs*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@esther-c ok!
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RAE replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
I should tag some ppl:
@kyronthearcaninn @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @beth-torres @whalekeeper @esther-c @calyhuge @euodia-vision
Feel free to ignore.
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Beth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yeah. I think my characters will pass meeting the villian 😆
Okay! Thanks, I wanted to see if something like that was okay since I didn’t want my characters to just barge in a group of others. Though I think my character Evania would do that, but it’d be real awkward. 😅
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RAE posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago
@esther-c The promised Glace snippet…
If Only I Could Forget by R. A. E.
Peachy shores cannot keep in the salty water as it spills over its borders, dropping in streams down a fair cheek, and sliding under a girlish chin before falling and breaking on the ground. Shattering into tiny pieces just like my sister’s heart.“Glace…” A shaky voice s…[Read more]
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Aww, I love ittt! 😭
Wait, do you always write in present tense?-
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No, I usually write in third past tense, but I’ve been playing with first person present. I think it adds a unique touch.-
Ok, cool!
I believe Ally Carter writes her books in first person present. And she wrote it really well. At least for the one I read.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 4 months ago
lol 😅 no problem!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Ok 🙂
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 4 months ago
Oh, hey…. did you mean to tag me? Ooor was it supposed to tag Rae? 🙃
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RAE replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 4 months ago
Oooh, I like it!!
He seems like a sad charrie tho 😢
Thanks! Yeah, Glace got banished for something he didn’t do. And he tries to convince himself he really did do it. I have a short snippet of him if you want.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
Ugh, sad… very sad…
I like the quotes you used, especially that “If I had to live my life all over again” one.
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Smiley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @calyhuge @euodia-vision
I can RP
but if Y’all don’t mind I’m going to skip to us at the mall
Jade
Jade stood in awe looking at the giant mall, it was quite large and had very pretty and modern architecture. she looked at Michael, who was right by her side.
“I think blue would be a good color,” Jade stated.
“I’m…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Please say a prayer in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
Thank you!
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That name sounds familiar, but I don’t have any idea what it is.
Heres an excerpt I found online:
“Grammarly is an American cloud-based typing assistant. It reviews spelling, grammar, punctuation, clarity, engagement, and delivery mistakes in English texts, detects plagiarism, and suggests replacements for the identified errors. It also allows users to customize their style, tone, and context-specific…[Read more]
@acancello
I’ve heard of it and used it once…but it’s kinda annoying because it corrects your style. So it would say sentances aren’t grammatically correct because they aren’t….but I wanted it that way because it sounds better and it’s just my style. It was annoying and I had no use for it so I deleted it. I think Google Docs works fine for…[Read more]
Hmmm, alright. I also think that would be annoying. Thank you! 🙂
Ehh… I’ve heard of it, but I’ve never used it before… sorry, I guess I can’t help much…
Thats ok 🙂 I just found out about it today too
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I have actually used it lots of times before! I don’t use it while writing though, because it gets kind of acting, but any type of editing it would be great for. Did you have any other questions in specific about it?
Haha whoops, I just realized you said you didn’t know what to ask. Umm, I think it’s definitely worth downloading. I never got premium but you can still do a good amount of stuff with the free version, like spell check, which is really good for just finding typos xD. And then you can look at your tone and see if any of your sentences aren’t…[Read more]
Yes it did, thank you! 😀
I’ve never personally used it, but I know a friend who’s used it. But I haven’t heard much about it from her, so I guess I’m not much help. XD Honestly, I’ve never had any interest in getting something like Grammarly because I don’t struggle with spelling and grammar too much and I have a friend who’s willing to edit my books for me. Lol. So yeah. XD
Yeah, I would mainly use it to catch all the little things I missed, and after, I may just hand the whole thing and a red pen over to my mom since shes good at things like that XD
Lol XD
i use the web extension! it gives me suggestions on everyhting i write, whether it be an email, short story or google search! i really like it!
👍 Thanks!