Esther

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Antonio gently wiped away one of her tears with his thumb. “Please don’t cry. I like it much better when I can see your eyes sparkle naturally.”

*squeals* OH MY GOODNESS.

I loved this book!  The scenes when Hallie is making up with her friends were so sweet!!!!!!!! I’m sad it’s over. I looked forward to the chapter dumps.…[Read more]

@esther-c

I would just like to see it set up a little more at the very beginning chapters.

I know you’re going for chaos on the Sunday morning before church, but like I mentioned before, since Easton and Hallie’s family is a big one, I think you need to focus more on their family and the dynamics. I’d love to see Hallie’s closeness with her mom…[Read more]

@esther-c

yeah, Cars and Phones BROKE ME

Last week my mom was at Mayo Clinic in Rochester doing more cancer treatments, which was hard since it wasn’t planned. I guess even if it was, it would be hard since she was gone for over a week and me and my siblings and my dad were all missing her a lot and attempting to keep our house from going out of…[Read more]

I fell behind quite a bit, but I finally caught up. Whoops.

@esther-c

GIRL.

This broke me.

I figured Tyler was going to pass away, but I wasn’t expecting it to be so sad and encouraging at the same time. It was really good. Really powerful. His letter… ah, it sure struck a chord. Katrina’s situation was an amazing plot twist—I wasn’t sure what…[Read more]

Tagging as many people as I can think of.

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @rae @theducktator @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @raxforge @theshadow @janellebelovedpig @stephie @ellette-giselle @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @the_lost-journal @felicity…[Read more]

@esther-c

All I can say is…

THAT WAS SO GOOD

I actually love your book so much I think I’ve said this before but it’s actually my comfort book…I got so excited when I saw you posted MORE!

@esther-c Thank you!

@anyone My brother has been feeling a lot better, and he just got the all-clear from his surgeon yesterday. 🙌 Thanks for your prayers!

@esther-c

I’m so annoyed with Hallie right now. I get where she’s coming from, but still. 😒 So Katrina’s parents died with Antonio’s…I did not expect that. It explains why she’s so opposed to God. I love that scene at the end with Easton and Ruby. It’s adorable.🥰

How could they sit here, eating Tyler’s favorite meal, without him eating with t…

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@esther-c

You’re welcome, and now that I’ve finished this next section here’s a few things. This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve int…[Read more]

@esther-c

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going. A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so changing that up a bit mi…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’m pretty sure the authorities have me flagged. I had to do a “sell an element” project a couple years ago, and I chose polonium, which meant researching how to buy it, and also given the fact I chose to sell it specifically for murdering people, I researched how much it would take to kill someone too. XD If you want to learn how to…[Read more]

@esther-c BRO I LITERALLY JUST LOOKED UP THAT KINDA THING

it was something along the lines of “where on a person will a bodyshot kill most easily” or “how long does it take for someone to die from a gunshot to the chest”

I wanted to know how long it takes a human or at least a humanoid to bleed out after being shot twice in the chest, cause I…[Read more]

@rae Oh, weird! I hope the blood tests/supplements are able to help. I’ll be praying!

@esther-c

Oh, gotcha! I’m glad it’s fixed!

@theducktator

So sorry! Being sick constantly is so annoying. I’ll be praying!

@esther-c @rae Any updates?

@esther-c

Joining at :28

@grcr @rae @esther-c

Praying for all of you.

@esther-c

I’ll be praying!! Have fun at volleyball!

@esther-c

Okay that makes sense…I’ll keep reading and waiting for more and I’ll let you know if I come up with anything else!

@esther-c

Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰

@hybridlore

<3

I don’t go to camp until this afternoon so I’m really excited and nervous!!!!!!

@esther-c

Aw girl you’re the best <3