Esther

@esther-c

I’m so sorry, I forgot about this!!!!

I think it’s a new day, so where do you want to continue? XD

@esther-c

are you looking for critiques? Or just posting for fun?

I just wanted to make sure…I don’t want to assume you want critiques if you’re just wanting to share it with us! 🙃

@esther-c

That’s so funny…My sister Hallie’s nickname is Hal…we call her that all the time XDXD

When she was little we used to call her HalPal…we don’t really use that anymore but I laugh remembering that, it was pretty cute hahaha

@esther-c

Within the next hour, everyone rushed around the house, trying to get ready for church and still be able to leave on time. This included a couple pairs of shoes being thrown down the stairs, someone looking for their shoes, people telling whoever was getting ready in the bathroom to hurry up, and a sister frantically searching her…

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Thanks y’all!!

@whalekeeper @loopylin

Praying 🙏

@esther-c

It looks a lot better! One thing I noticed is that Antonio does say “fabuloso” twice.

“Then the topic conveniently comes up in a conversation with Easton.”

Also, I feel like this might be better if you just change it to “Then I can ask Easton” or something like that. Otherwise, it looks great! I like the way you made Hallie more rea…[Read more]

@esther-c

girllll

i love thissss

Keep writing ✨✨

@esther-c

Sorry, I just realized I never replied to your explanation of contemporary churches.

Ours will normally follow the same pattern of announcements, we have a time of worship through song, then the sermon, then we’ll end with another song and sometimes Communion. This can change depending on the Sunday, but that’s the normal structure we…

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Well, I made the forum, the forum stopped working for me, and I also disappeared off the face of the earth for over two weeks😂💀 well I’ll try to answer questions/responses now😅

@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @elishavet-pidyon @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @koshka @trailbl…[Read more]

@esther-c

I find those funny, tbh. XD As long as they’re not being disrespectful of the Bible or God, then I don’t have a problem with it.

Yup! I saw one that I thought was going to be disrespectful, but it actually but christianity in the light! (in a good way)

I don’t believe there’s anything in particular that’s wrong or that just because t…

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@esther-c

Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊

Awwww ofccc!!!!

That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m not stealing any of that author’s ideas, I promise!!! just some of the vibes in certain s…

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@esther-c

Found it! 🙃

@ESTHER-C
OMC THIS IS GONNA BE LIKE MY COMFORT BOOK

I JUST KNOW IT

*curls up in a love seat with a chai latte and gingersnap with a fuzzy blanket and fuzzy socks* (those are the vibes your book gives me)

ALSO I WANT AN OLDER BROTHER SO BAD

@esther-c

Very interesting! I’ve nothing to say that hasn’t been said by the others. Excited to keep reading!! 😃😄

@esther-c

My siblings and I have a very different, unhuggy relationship, XD.

I know what you mean though, and I did feel that this part was a little cheesy… Idk, Easton tends to be that way… I’ll think about it. I’m not sure if it’s like that throughout the rest of the book, so I’ll keep my eyes open.

Yeah, it felt realistic through most of the…[Read more]

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Announcing the winners!!!!

First, like the previous judges, I will go over each story.

Shadow:

What a short, sweet story! You are sucked right into a conflict,…[Read more]

@esther-c

Hybrid pointed that out to me too. For this chapter specifically, I wanted it to feel pretty fast paced, specifically when she got to the party. Do you think that worked?

Ah, okay then that makes sense. It did work pretty well, the chapter felt fast paced. Not in a bad way though, it introduced the characters and world efficiently.

Let…

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@esther-c

This was good, nice job. The only thing I would recommend though is using a bit more body language.

@esther-c

I enjoyed it, but one question.

“Me too.” Easton walked across the room and gave his sister a tight hug. “Thanks so much, Hallie. Today was amazing.”

She smiled up at him. “You’re welcome.” Anything for an amazing brother like you.

Are they always this nice to each other?