Esther

@sarafini @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

“Oh!” I turn backwards, caught between the awkwardness of Derek Len’s blocking our path, esther, and the new girl.

“Hey, I’m Elizabeth. What’s your name?”

“Oh! I’m Lesli…” I smile nervously, one eye still trained on Derek.

(Also Lesli is 19 if any of you guys didn’t know) (I know this is…[Read more]

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

I follow behind Esther as she takes us down some stairs, eager for more exploration. She stops, astonished by a man standing in front of us. I make a face. He looks gross for some reason I cannot explain.

“Derek Len?” Esther says, awestruck.

I raise an eyebrow at her. They know eachother?

“Hate to br…[Read more]

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

Lesli

“Explore this library, of course!”

I rub my hands together excitedly, ready to take off into a grand adventure. I would rather be doing this with–

–oh nevermind. I’ve got plenty of new people to meet here.

Cut off by a piercing scream, I look to my left.

“What was that?”

Are they ok?…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 Sorry I’ve forgotten who else!

Ey! Friday squad, we ready for this?!

@esther-c

If you were stranded on an island, what ONE person would you want to be stranded with?

Dante: I think… Ellie. She’s less likely to try to murder me… and she’s kinda smart. I guess.

Ellie: Eddie. Sorry, Dante.

Eddie: Ellie. Who else would I go with?

Dante: Hehe, that’s fair. *cries inside*

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h  @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Renae and Vidar:

“Have you found anything?”

Renae glanced up from the pastel green sweater she was pulling over a creamy white princess dress. She smiled at Ara. “I’m going to let my hair down, then I’m done.” She pulled her dark hair from…[Read more]

@esther-c

I was thinking about this last night, and although I would love to beta read for you, I’m not sure I would be a good beta reader because #1: I don’t know a lot about the dystopian genre, and #2: it’s really hard for me to give constructive criticism on things. Even though I know it’s good and will help people grow in their writing, it’s…[Read more]

@esther-c

If I have the time when you post it I’d love to beta read for you! (No promises but If it works out I’d be happy to!)

And hey we wright the same genre if that helps!

I love giving advice and would love to help you iron it out 🙂

@esther-c

Oh yes, that’s a wonderful example! Thanks so much! *is very excited to write now*

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @devastate-lasting @gold_hummingbird @charityanne @gwyndalf-the-wise @c-j @sarafini @madelyn @arien @mineralizedwritings @koshka @lewilliams @princesachronicle22 @folith-feolin @power @otherworldlyhistorian @not-so-…[Read more]

@esther-c I’m not a fantasy reader, so you don’t want me on your list, but I do have a bit of advice. Joy is right that you don’t want too many beta readers, so keep it to six or fewer, but focus on picking beta readers who (1) already read in your genre, (2) are willing to answer specific feedback questions, and (3) are part of your target audie…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @felicity @freedomwriter76 @anyoneelse

Okay! After several failed attempts, I’m finally going to RP!!

Dylan

I stood in a room full of soft pastel light and colors. The floor was a light chocolate color. Well, the part that you could see anyway.

Most of it was full of soft, fluffy…[Read more]

@keilah-h @esther-c @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @felicity @sarafina @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

SO I’m thinking the girls discover that the girls wardrobe goes straight into the girls room and decides to go tell the others this. That way any other girls can change if they want to when we split.

Same for the guys (…[Read more]

@esther-c @felicity

November

After gathering a heap of snacks, the two boys placed them all on one end of the extremely large table.

“Good job guys.”

“Yea…thanks for your help.” Ev glared at the kit, who hadn’t lifted a finger. He glared back, and then, picking up a single back of chips with his teeth, plopped it into the pile.

“[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Don’t worry, I like rude characters. They’re more fun.

Dante

“The likes of me, eh?” Dante asked with a grin.

“Alright, Krataristo.” He plopped down onto an armchair close to where the boy was standing. Then he pulled his lighter out of his pocket and played with it, flicking it on and off and back on again.

“We can both wait he…[Read more]

@esther-c

I can probably do it. Maybe

@esther-c

Oh Ev…*sigh*

🙂

@esther-c

I would love to beta read for you!! I love your characters and the story in general.

I think 5-6 beta readers should be good, but that’s just my opinion. You could probably have less than that, but more might be overwhelming. It’s up to you. 😉

@esther-c

I would say that I could definitely do it (though I have not read the first draft). The only thing is my schedule so I can’t promise it would be achievable in a timely fashion.

@esther-c

Yep! It sound interesting. I might enjoy beta reading any scuffles or skirmishes!