@esther-c
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Light Warrior Pen replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I’m a fan of the paranoid dragon
Everyone else:
Your characters are awesome!
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @anyone else on here.
Okay, here’s my insane anti-hero
Name: Violet Maxwell
Occupation: thief/break-in expert
Looks: Brunette hair,…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh my goodness this was so beautiful, so sad but so well-written!! Augh, what a tender, beautiful couple, that hurt when I realized she died 😭. I haven’t read the Wingfeather Saga (not yet at least!) so I was glad this didn’t need any background knowledge.
The only critique I might offer would be this: during Meira’s internal struggle…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Thank you, Esther! This is for the next part in the allegory!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Arabella
With all of the classes figured out, the groups split off, with Ara and November tagging along with Jakob and Wolfgang.
“Your brother mentioned it being a long week…how has everything been? With…your brothers? Other brothers I mean…” Ara asked, brows furrowing at the thought of Adolphus and Dietrich now retur…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah!
I think I’m gonna go with Tali as the shifter.Brycen’s POV can then be sort of misleading, because you might expect it to be him, but idk.@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone
Here’s the next part of the Dragonsbane Society!
Brycen met Aiden at the Badger just as the…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig started the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
@acancello @esther-c @felicity @any other poets or poetesses.
I can’t figure out how to punctuate throughout and also at the end of the lines. Thoughts?
The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever
Desirable far beyond refined gold
Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether
Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb
Turning simple to…[Read more]
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Light posted an update 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @euodia-vision @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @sarafini @whalekeeper @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @joy-calle @felicity @awsumfaith @esther-c @keilah-h @whalekeeper @anyone-else-I’m-forgetting-sorry
Hey everyone!! So…I’ve been thinking. And honestly, I’ve been s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I should probably have my characters run into someone.
@esther-cSam and Madeline
A man suddenly jumped out and pointed a gun at the two of them.
“Don’t move.”
Sam tensed up and was about ready to grab the gun out of the man’s hand, but he froze when he felt Madeline’s cold hand on his arm. She smiled sweetly up at the stranger.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
So, since I’m having serious trouble deciding who to add, I’ll let you choose for me. Would you rather have a manipulative and fierce but slightly paranoid dragon officer who has a bone to pick with my MCs? Or would you rather…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I’ve got villains I could use, but I don’t really want to include them…..
@esther-c @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon I MIGHT be putting in the rest of Hunter and Omega’s siblings if you all want me to….although they’ll still be the only POV characters.
@freedomwriter76 I’ll start us off then!
Hunter
Here again….
It’d…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks! Yeah the height difference is really funny. I actually have this drawing that kinda makes fun of it.

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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
Actually, I’ll just make Maddie completely powerless since she isn’t in her own world. Also, I completely messed up and called the other character Ben. His name is Sam. I don’t know why I did that.
Sam
Sam stared at his h…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
I really want to add Madeline, but she’s a literal cartoon. Unless I made a human version of her… *shudders at the thought*
Ok, yeah, I’m doing this.
Madeline: looks like she’s about 7 years old, about 3 and a half feet tall, wearing a plain white knee-le…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Ok! Here’s my self-insert.
Lin: late teens, short brown hair with bleached tips, wearing boots, a comfy sweater, and old ripped-up jeans, very spacey and forgetful, quiet around people she doesn’t know, intp, is carrying a satchel with art supplies and other random things in it
And my other character, Melissa aka…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-on-here XD
ok y’all…I’m really excited about this and I have some villains/antagonists/antihero’s I wanna put in but like I mentioned before they’re from different timelines.
Character castle isn’t really a “Make Sense” kinda place anyway XD so would y’all mind if f…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @esther-c @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon WAIT does that mean my charries are the only bullies now… I don’t wanna be the only onessss XD
ANYWAY I WANNA RP NOW!!!!
November
November tapped his pencil against the library table, foot tapping against the floor. He twerked a brow, frowning.
“Everything alright?” He jump…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic BETRAYALS, PLOT TWISTS AND AHA MOMENTS, OH MY!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 5 months ago
@joy-calle @felicity @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6 @gwyndalf-the-wise @esther-c
One thing with abortion stories is people also need to know there is still forgiveness for them.
One of the things that’s never talked about is the deep horrible grief people who go through Abortions feel afterwards, both mothers and fathers, bu…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
I love it!!! I haven’t read WingFeather, nor have I ever gotten into fan-fiction, but I could tell why you wanted to give the context to the song, it’s very beautiful. I don’t really have any criticisms, but you mentioned realism, and I would say that this has far more of a romanticized vibe, but in a really good and emotionally…[Read more]
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I’ll miss you, and will be praying for you while you’re on this break. =)
I hope it goes wonderfully! ❤️❤️❤️
Okay! Yes, hope all goes well for you, hugs and loves!!! (:
That’s awesome that your taking some time off for yourself! We all look forward to seeing when you get back!
Ok! Have a good break light, we love you! I’ve been thinking about maybe doing the same lol
I’ll miss you so much, but I hope you have a good break. 😊 Can’t wait for when you come back!! ❤️❤️ I’ll be praying for you. 💖🙏🏻
Have a good break! I’ve noticed a lot of people have been doing that lately, and I honestly can’t blame them. Sometimes it’s good to step back for a bit.
Looking forward to your return, but hope you have a good break! Keep pressing on the upward way! ❤️❤️