Esther

@esther-c

Found it! 🙃

@ESTHER-C
OMC THIS IS GONNA BE LIKE MY COMFORT BOOK

I JUST KNOW IT

*curls up in a love seat with a chai latte and gingersnap with a fuzzy blanket and fuzzy socks* (those are the vibes your book gives me)

ALSO I WANT AN OLDER BROTHER SO BAD

@esther-c

Very interesting! I’ve nothing to say that hasn’t been said by the others. Excited to keep reading!! 😃😄

@esther-c

My siblings and I have a very different, unhuggy relationship, XD.

I know what you mean though, and I did feel that this part was a little cheesy… Idk, Easton tends to be that way… I’ll think about it. I’m not sure if it’s like that throughout the rest of the book, so I’ll keep my eyes open.

Yeah, it felt realistic through most of the…[Read more]

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Announcing the winners!!!!

First, like the previous judges, I will go over each story.

Shadow:

What a short, sweet story! You are sucked right into a conflict,…[Read more]

@esther-c

Hybrid pointed that out to me too. For this chapter specifically, I wanted it to feel pretty fast paced, specifically when she got to the party. Do you think that worked?

Ah, okay then that makes sense. It did work pretty well, the chapter felt fast paced. Not in a bad way though, it introduced the characters and world efficiently.

Let…

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@esther-c

This was good, nice job. The only thing I would recommend though is using a bit more body language.

@esther-c

I enjoyed it, but one question.

“Me too.” Easton walked across the room and gave his sister a tight hug. “Thanks so much, Hallie. Today was amazing.”

She smiled up at him. “You’re welcome.” Anything for an amazing brother like you.

Are they always this nice to each other?

@esther-c wow, that’s a nice beginning!

@esther-c

*gasp* Hallie’s board has an Ender’s Game quote!

@esther-c

Please tag me for when you post the chapters, your boards look so good!!

@esther-c all righty!

@esther-c cool!! I’ll totally read it, if only for fun! Might pick out a couple of grammar mistakes here and there or tell you if  there’s a better way for a sentence to flow, but other than that I don’t think I’ll be critiquing much.

@esther-c

ooooooooohhhh keep me tagged please 😄 I like the vibes of the boards and it sounds really fun!

@esther-c

Yayyy!!! The moodboards look great!! 😊

@ESTHER-C
YESSS YOU RESURRECTED THIS WIP

I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR FOREVER TO READ IT

TAG ME

or else

@esther-c

Ooo love the boards! You can tag me too when you share the chapters! I’ll try my best to keep up! 😅😃

@esther-c

Please tag me for chapters! I want the car on Easton’s board sooo bad, but in pink.