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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator

New chapters are out!

@ellette-giselle

I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.

One note: I was very…[Read more]

@liberty

Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!

I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅

@theducktator Praying!

I’m going to the BMV to take my learner’s permit test. Please pray that I pass.

@koshka Who are they? Astronauts? Fighter pilots?

Either way the boards look awesome!

@ellette-giselle

Signing in for the long haul. I can look for rogue grammar and suspicious word choices.

Code key: nuanced syntax.

@savannah_grace2009

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?

@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?

@koshka

Perfect!

@linus-smallprint

Yeah. Dented up my pretty blue car. 😢

@linus-smallprint

That worked! I’ll read through it later.

@linus-smallprint

wait…. did this hot my inbox really late….. or was I on there before it was released?! 😱

I literally just got done commenting and editing chapter 32

@linus-smallprint

It just wrapped up, so I should have time now.

@linus-smallprint

No kidding.

Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. 🙄

@linus-smallprint

The link won’t let me on for some reason.

@linus-smallprint

Oh no, I completely forgot about that! I’m still interested; it just got lost in the last few weeks of school.

@linus-smallprint

I’m so sorry, I have been swamped. I kept trying, but i just haven’t got the time right now.

@koshka

Oh yes, an email thread would be best.

Oh, did you see that I have a chapter of the first book out?

I greatly needs your opinion!!