Esther

@ellette-giselle

Wait what? You mean you don’t use spell check for the other book and still manage to have something readable?!

I didn’t know other writers couldn’t spell until I joined KP. XD I’ve rarely needed spell check. But my handwriting is horrible, and people can’t read it, so the skills balance out.

@linus-smallprint

Lolololol. I’ve gotten to the point where spellcheck knows my shortcuts and auto-corrects for me. It only messes up sometimes. But still….. mine can be a bit of a mess once I’m though, and I always run edits before posting.

@linus-smallprint

I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint thanks!

It’s a shame we can’t comment yet. I have some good ones.

@linus-smallprint

Okay! Most people seem to be reacting positively to this, so I will definitely conciser coming back

Yes please.

Interesting. Did you find it confusing at all when it switched to reveal that Cedrick was narrating everything?

Uh… not really sure. At the moment I was just in speed-read mode, not really edit mode. I was…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!

Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?

I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon        @theducktator     @grcr

( @kyronthearcanin      @whalekeeper        @jonas      @power )

Next Chapters!!! (2 of them!!!)

@linus-smallprint

Thanks.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, well at least you made me laugh really hard. 😂

@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁

@liberty

I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.

Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.

Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.

@linus-smallprint

 

Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!

🤣

But it did! Really!

See, the car that hit me slowed down like it was going to stop, and then passed me and kept going. All I could think about was, “Dad is going to be so annoyed if he has to take on this hit-and-run investigation and there’s no license plate”

It…[Read more]

@esther-c

Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰

@jonas

I have a bunch of trips that I’ll be gone for, but you can start without me!!! I’m just not sure how available I’ll be until my schedule frees up in July. And I’m sure I can pop on every now and then in between being gone lol

@hybridlore

<3

I don’t go to camp until this afternoon so I’m really excited and nervous!!!!!!

@esther-c

Aw girl you’re the best <3

@whalekeeper

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

Oh girl I’m so sorry *hugs* I don’t know exactly what you’re going through but I do know that  cancer is horrible and sucks to deal with…if YOU need to talk to someone who (to some degree at least) un…[Read more]

@esther-c

Okay that’s a cool character arc then!!

I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD

And I’m glad that Hallie’s talking to God again <33 even if it’s slow progress

@linus-smallprint

Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.

i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]