I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to stay on track this time.

Mila means ‘beloved, gracious’, and in some translations ‘precious’.

Even though that isn’t her name’s proper spelling, it is fitting for her relationship with her father, as his favorite child. 🙂

The biggest twist in my FP,WS story is that the mentor dies at the end (which I hope will be surprising, but still mostly unexpected).

Other than that, I’ll have to get back to you on the HofE twists, once I’ve…[Read more]

Other than that, I don’t have much advice. I’ve never been someone to relate a whole lot to DID because it’s not something I have nor do I often imagine myself as a different…[Read more]

sorry, been a busy and mostly only had time for reading, reading, and more reading.

I don’t think I have any questions, but I do maybe have some advice for your question.

Could you have Brenven be an energetic, fiery child and there’s some sort of prophecy or promise woven around him that she finds out, and due to those two…[Read more]

I WANNA KNOW THE PLOT TWIST! 😁

I honestly could say everything and anything, but often I prefer to use different ways of looking at the world as inspiration, though that’s not always the case. Once I worldbuilded simply from the desire to have magic in the story and there are four kids with it and the king’s family, and then I dove into why only they had mag…[Read more]

np! And I can’t wait to hear what you come up with, if you decide to share!

I have found that one of my favorite things about writing is the worldbuilding (which explains why I enjoy writing fantasy so much). Plus, the worldbuilding of this particular project I’m especially proud of. It’s pretty simple, compared to many, but it’s still complex and developing. And I love it.

I am al…[Read more]

What sort of underwater things can you imagine? What is the government system for the fish and sharks? Do fish have to hide from their predators, like sharks, still? How do they manage that? Does that affect travel and commerce? Is there much trading between the different places and groups? Is there magic of some sort that protects…[Read more]

What is something he wants? What is his desire in life? Will he be focusing on a having it while helping out his friend, or will helping his friend be his entire focus for the duration of the story, like Sam in The Lord of the Rings? Why are the two friends? What caused them to become…[Read more]

[A little context: Hager is the antagonist of the…[Read more]

What is your favorite book of the Bible and why?

Probably the Gospel of St. John, because his is easy to read and I enjoy it, and it is read during important liturgical events, no matter what year it is. (The Mass includes readings from either of the other three Gospels (Matthew, Mark, or Luke) depending on whether the liturgical year is A, B, or…[Read more]

Zoe

Zoe ran, as quick as her feet would carry her, tears streaming from her face. She had done it all wrong and now Corvina hated her! She’d sent her away! Corvina wouldn’t protect her now! Malcolm could get her.

Zoe screamed, panic erasing her tears, clearing her eyes so she no longer ran blindly.  Her body shifted as her m…[Read more]

(I’ll get to Zoe later, for now, I just have time for Milla.)

Milla

“Wait! For just a moment, wait.”

The girl leapt forward and grabbed her hand, not necessarily keeping her from going, but Milla stopped anyway. Perhaps they knew the others well enough to prevent a fight. Though, they had run from the…[Read more]

The Council of Bust is me, quite basically, split…[Read more]

Generally, the way this works is: it’s a castle ( @elishavet-pigyon ‘s) that shifts and twists to be whatever it wants to be, and each person has a character or more and they enter the castle any-how you want, and meet up with the other characters and interact with them, and is a way to explore your character and learn mor…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Milla

“Thank you for your concern, but…” Viktor must have heard the voices too (it was always difficult to gauge those sorts of things, because she could no longer draw a comparison). He stopped part way through his sentence, but continued a momen…[Read more]

Milla

The boy and girl rushed for the warm firelight, stopping once they had reached it. The boy drew his sword, clumsily but bravely. The girl lifted a torch from its place and held it up, casting a circle or warm light around the two of them. Milla hesitated in the darkness as the boy…[Read more]

She is. Milla is from a Daredevil fanfic I wrote after reading all the Daredevil comics and the MC2 comics. I love comic Daredevil, but I really wish he’d settle down and start a family, because that’s be cool and he needs it to keep him from all the things he’s doing nowadays.

So, Mills’s fanfic is my solution: he has settled down an…[Read more]

Milla

No! She’d made a mistake! Their heartbeats which has slowed slightly at her words raced even harder than before when she’d used their names. She’d made a mistake any maybe screwed it all up.

“Wait!” She scrambled over the boxes after them, hurrying to stay close to them as they mounted the stair…[Read more]

There are misconceptions, but I can’t remember any specifically, so… yeah.  One of the coolest things I can think of at the moment is how the Holy Eucharist, at the moment of the consecration, whether the host and wine physically change to Christ’s body and blood or not, it is a miracle because the words of the consecration are so powerf…[Read more]

Milla

The children were moving again. Had they heard her? They couldn’t have; she was practically a ghost because of the Hand. Nothing would erase their ingrained methods of silent movement, now.

Two other groups of people met up elsewhere, their words faint but clear to her.

“Is everything alright?”

“Yes, but I suggest we c…[Read more]

Ah, ok. I hope we get SOME answers in this book, even if not all of them!! (I want to know who the last two Black Swan leaders are, and what Mr. Forkle’s original registered name is, etc. heh)

I admire that she isn’t perfect, too! But, sometimes it seems like she’s too imperfect, and comes across as whiny and more immature than she…[Read more]

I can think of plenty about Catholicism to share, but I would share better if there’s something specific you want to know. 🙂

(I prefer not to mention it so much, nowadays, because it can seem like I’m bragging, but since you asked, I will tell.) I am fifth of fourteen siblings, with no sets of twins. 🙂 My oldest brother is married and…[Read more]

Well, I hope you find her love here, too, then. 🙂

@kathleenramm

That is wonderful advice, thank you!! I will definitely use something like what you mentioned, now that you bring it to my attention!

I think sometimes I struggle with finding a different view because I have been relatively unexposed to different views myself, so it…[Read more]

Also, I forgot to mention that, somewhere in all her life happenings, she accidentally took a jaunt over to 616…[Read more]

Milla Murdock is the daughter of Matthew Murdock, alias Daredevil. She has his red hair and blue eyes, and also inherited his Daredevil powers from him, except the range of her power is turned WAY up, and with her hearing alone, she can locate anything or anyone on earth. (If she concentrates, she can…[Read more]

ALL the secrets? o.o Now I’m a little more nervous and excited!

I’m not the biggest fan of all the main characters, but they are very good, and it’s really only Sophie I can say I have any real problems with.

I don’t know if worldbuilding is my strongest suit, tbh, but I LOVE it and honestly, I sometimes prefer it to the actual…[Read more]

This is the one about the mentor MC, yes.

I should probably explain a little further.

MC struggled with self-doubt. As a double gifted (and the only one ever), he believes that he has a responsibility to make big changes to the world. But, he doesn’t know how he is supposed to do that, especially since there is nothing really b…[Read more]

(This is for the story I was asking about the death of a character, if anyone remembers that… the WIP acronymed FP,WS.)

So, the MC has two students he’s teaching.

The theme is about changing the world and how you change the world in a meaningful way.

I already know…[Read more]

The story end with a pirate captain’s 4 year old daughter getting amnesia and disappearing, and him getting super depressed and drunk, but at the very end he decides to go looking…[Read more]

And do you sometimes feel that you’re the glue that holds your family together?

I sometimes feel like I’m the one keeping lots of things in order, in my family. I have seen that when I don’t do the dishes or skim the milk, no one does, so it doesn’t get done, so things back up, and conside…[Read more]

No, I should have tagged you, and I meant to tag you, but I must have forgotten to reran you after accidentally reloading the page. 🙂

LOL interesting! why the Vatican? And do you sometimes feel that you’re the glue that holds your family together?

The Vatican because: first, I’m a Catholic; second, I’d love to see what all goes on in it…[Read more]

This is all over the place, because so it Bust.

Doris (the character this is for) is the head of the council of Bust, and appointed leader of the many variant-constants for the various Bust districts. She renamed herself for easier distinction between…[Read more]

Zoe/Snow

I’m sorry. Sorry. Sorry.

Her thoughts ran on repeat with the memory. The memories. She wanted to slip back to the innocence of Snow, the purity and simplicity of that side, but the guilt and memories dragged her back and pinned her just like Malcolm’s two assistants always did.

She couldn’t escape, no matter how hard…[Read more]

I absolutely love horses! I volunteer at a stable one day a week, and it’s awesome! so many things to learn!

That is so fun!! My sister is getting a summer job with the stables across the street from my family.

yesssss, mornings are great! Most mornings at least. (do you dream much?)

Yeah, most mornings. 😉 I… don’t really. I do dream, but not s…[Read more]