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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
It just sounds so much better than “looked”. XD
@shadow @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theducktator @savannah-grace2009 @sorry-if-i-forgot-anyone-😢
Next two chapters! 😆 I’m fairly pleased with these. Chapter 13 (Alec’s first POV!) may need to be extended a bit, but it certainly ups the stakes a bit. At…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m shaking my head at you right now.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, sometimes it looks different and the entire website doesn’t load, but it still works usually.
You 100% are!!
Nice. 😎
I feel like I’ve had a tone of those scenes though.
Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.
You have no ide…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I got tagged for both of these, so I’m assuming it’s working again for the most part.
since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore,
I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.
Good section. I was right about them meeting the boy again, but wrong about him coming with them. Oh well.
When did Leon start calli…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Probably not, I guess I just missed that.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
ack, yes, I missed a word there. When I read it over my brain said it was there. XD
XD Yep, happens to me too.
Okay, so Julian was about 17-19 in Joseph’s book (I never specified) which makes him in his late twenties now. Leon is a few years older so late twenties to very early thirties.
Rolf and Roland are around 19-25
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Sorry, for some reason I didn’t get an email for this. 🙁
Good section! I like Julian’s reaction to Leon being the White Knight, and how they resolve their argument.
Julian raised an eyebrow. “I think that’s about the first time you have ever admitted I was better at you than something.”
Lol.
He knew this room very well. Leon…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle AHAHAHAHAHA
*more wheezing laughter*
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Andrew replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle that hilarious XDXDXD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah…I think mostly I need to write like two more pieces, and then it’s just editing the rest. So hopefully this is doable XDXD *hopefully**
I think I just need enthusiastic pep talking right now, but emailing would help a lot too!!!
That’s totally fine!!! Just don’t let me give up lollll
That’s the main thing I’m…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@esther-c @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @raxforge @rae @freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @theducktator @theshadow @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @keilah-h @anyone-else-i’m-blanking
I’m doing something drastic.
Something crazy.
I suppose I shall start at the beginning…
Our youth…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Great, thank you! Do you want me to post references for the clothes?
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Ooh, yay you’re picking this up again!! Here’s my character if you could draw her please:
Name: Elina Miller
Age: 16
Gender: female
Clothing: jeans, basic blue sneakers, blue T-shirt, a light green jacket, and a baseball cap.
Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): about today
Physical appearance: about 5’5…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Any thoughts on that?
Hmm…well, I was a tad bit surprised by how sharp Leon was with Julian. I don’t know their past friendship well…but I wasn’t expecting Leon to react to Julian like that…like just closing the conversation. I thought he seemed to be a very open character, especially as a Christian…but maybe some things…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
WOW!! Those are awesome!
Thx! 😊 I’m trying to get comfortable with the line of action and forming the mass of the figure around it. It should make my art easier to look at. That’s what they say… Must… get better… *Eye twitches*
I guess Pinterest is the place to go, then. XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I’ll tag the art people. Don’t feel obligated to reply.
@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @grcr @elishavet-pidyon @i-know-im-forgetting-someone-please-help
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yes. I just hope it doesn’t lead to bad stuff for them.
I think you’re enjoying the suspense way too much. 🤔🙄
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
For some reason I thought of you IMMEDIATELY (probably because we’ve had so many conversations about slapping your writing on paper and NEVER GOING BACK (something that I struggle to not do since I’m a perfectionist lol))
It’s okay!!! I completely understand and I can’t even imagine how hard the past few weeks have been for…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Leon!!!! Yes!!!
Great section. He must have been really famous…
I want them to meet up with the boy he set free. 🥺
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