Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

yeah, well that’s reality for ya.

is it really though??

(this is a joke reply, not a genuine thing you need to spend a paragraph answering and wasting your time lol)

yeah, Leon has a rough time of it, poor guy. I’ve gone back and four on writing his backstory as like a short side story novella. We’ll see though.

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@ellette-giselle

Are we getting a new section today?

@keilah-h @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @grcr @theducktator @theshadow @esther-c

Help meeee

I’m stuck *cries* I want to write over the summer but I’m strugglingggg

You know when you get an epic idea for a plot, but then forget where you were going with it and then you don’t know what to do?

Yeah that’s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

more like a knitted hat.

ohhh

if you look closely at what the prince said, it leads to the suggestion that he was killed by the priests because he got upset at them for killing his son.

dang that’s dark

also it’s gonna be hard to deal with in the next part of the story. Say that against all odds, the new emperor does become a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Chilling climax, if that’s what this is.

“Ah, look at this!” Leon exclaimed, pulling the tray over. “A cup of lovely, musty water, with who knows what floating in it to give us a lovely surprise, and some rock-hard bread seasoned with just enough mold to make it delightfully poisonous.”

lolllll

“And after that we can count the…

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@ellette-giselle

There were from some far-off country— we don’t have knights here.

They, not there.

Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.

“And then I put it on. There was a helmet that completely covered my face so that no one could ever recognize me or tell…

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@ellette-giselle

Does him getting angry when Julian was all excited about him being the White Knight in the last book make sense now?

Yep.

Did any of it surprise you?

No, I don’t think so. Not really.

Julian and Leon are now in the bottom of the arena.

@ellette-giselle

Julian slowly shook his head.

Oh no…

Good section. The new prince’s beliefs make more sense now.

And we got to find out Leon’s backstory!! I’m glad, but… it really feels like you’re setting it up for him (and Julian?) to die. 🥺🥺

@keilah-h

I tend to lean towards global flood as well. That’s something I hadn’t considered regarding rock layers.

@grcr

My dad says that there are a lot of generations skipped in those genealogies, and that they only recorded the more important people, so that’s why he doesn’t think that they are a very accurate way to calculate the age of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It’s okay!

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My family went to a museum full of fossils today, which sparked a discussion…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, that’s fine.

@ellette-giselle

Is there going to be a new section today? 🫣

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 30 out!

@ellette-giselle Thank you!

yeah I’m still learning but it’s so fun.

@ellette-giselle @loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

Alright, I have it!

I wasn’t sure how I wanted to do the background and stuff, so I did his face first. I did a pale cream layer and then went over it with light purples because I was going to make the night sky have a purple tint. I ended up kinda hating it, both the idea for…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I seem to remember it not working very well, but hey, the second time’s the charm.

Sounds good!

@ellette-giselle

Ellette!!!!

I feel like you’re going to kill at least one of them off. 🤨😣 Do I need to call out the Character Witness Protection??

You did another viewpoint shift without telling us. It probably needs a *** or something in there every time you switch from Leon to Julian.

The rest of the positions we divided up between the r…

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@ellette-giselle

So they are captured now. Well, it was only a matter of time…

“Lord, help us top trust you,”

To trust.

“I don’t know. I guess I’m a little nervous,” Leon replied. “I don’t know what they’re going to decide, and everything seems so confusing. I was ready to give my life for Christ, yet now it seems that has been thrown aside…

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@ellette-giselle

It was a good section, but I don’t have much to add, sorry. 🙃