Ellette Giselle

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Dante

Dante was silent for a moment. Now that he thought about it, he really was running low on safe places he could stay.

“I guess… I could hide in a corner of that basement for a few more days. Try to sleep this off.”

@ellette-giselle

OMC that’s crazy because when I read your post I thought it was an example from the Cloak of Light books XDXD

and yes it’s crazy…I agree they’re cool but holy moly the theology  *cries*

@ellette-giselle

Wow, that’s crazy. But I like that as an idea to go off of. I probably won’t make it too drastic just bc I don’t want to take the story that direction, but that does spark some ideas.

Thank you!

@koshka

You can do this! It’s worth it. (plus, hey, we’re all in this thing too…writer’s are crazy)

Aww, thanks girl!!

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@ellette-giselle

That’s quite the story about your friend. Yikes!

@ellette-giselle

WhAt??? Wacky theology? Really??? *Utter sarcasm*

Ugh yes. The Angel stuff is just…weird. and then there’s Drew’s senses things and the red light expirement…*shakes head in mild derision*

@ellette-giselle

Wow. Yup, Green Beret. He did die in the Middle East, but I don’t think it specified a place or operation.

@ellette-giselle

That sounds a lot like Cloak of Light.

@ellette-giselle

Your advice is so so helpful!!

And it drew attention to a weaker part of my book—my FMC identifying the lie she’s been believing and accepting the truth. That turn-around moment is a part I’m still working on, so you pointing that out is awesome. I think right now she’s just been living this lie without experiencing any consequ…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Third is most relatable to me. XD

@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle

Thank you!

@ellette-giselle

XD

Dante

The chair moved down the sidewalk a couple yards before slowly rolling to a stop. Dante turned to see Rory’s puzzled expression, and then burst out laughing. Then he doubled over, holding his side.

“Heh, ow, hehe… there’s no way that wasn’t a bit,” he said, barely managing to hold back more laughter. “Seriou…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle The Tangled one is me when I read my one fanfic that I spent half of 2024 writing lolllll

I vacillate between “Why did I write this, this is weird” and “This is peak writing, I love it”

The other memes are so accurate too haha

@ellette-giselle

Lol. The evil authoress. They definitely do.

I mean, they’ve got a reason…

@ellette-giselle

Those are great. I think there’s a little bit of crazy in all of us. XD

Also, the last one is fabulous. I don’t think I’ve done that as an author, though. I’m usually the reader watching on in horror, lol!

Ivyyyyy Greeeeeeennn. Nooooooo!

@ellette-giselle

lol there was a space in the actual doc, I don’t know why it didn’t transfer over…

This seems a little odd, because 1. it is one of the more standard ways of swearing an oath, and 2. as a soldier he would know this from training and wouldn’t need to be told. I would say something like “swear the oath” etc. Something that tell…

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@theducktator

Yay! Hope you feel better soon!

@ellette-giselle Haha, your signature! XD

@ellette-giselle

eeeee yay!! 😃 I’m pretty much open to all feedback… yeah.

(I actually thought the dad was gonna die in this chapter from scene 1…. so I’m relieved that he made it. XD)

LOL

It’s like a family I know, expect they have 15 kids and it’s all “J” names.

😅 I guess great minds think alike lolol

Yeah, it’s not vital. It probably wo…[Read more]