Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

That sounds a lot like Cloak of Light.

@ellette-giselle

Your advice is so so helpful!!

And it drew attention to a weaker part of my book—my FMC identifying the lie she’s been believing and accepting the truth. That turn-around moment is a part I’m still working on, so you pointing that out is awesome. I think right now she’s just been living this lie without experiencing any consequ…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Third is most relatable to me. XD

@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle

Thank you!

@ellette-giselle

XD

Dante

The chair moved down the sidewalk a couple yards before slowly rolling to a stop. Dante turned to see Rory’s puzzled expression, and then burst out laughing. Then he doubled over, holding his side.

“Heh, ow, hehe… there’s no way that wasn’t a bit,” he said, barely managing to hold back more laughter. “Seriou…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle The Tangled one is me when I read my one fanfic that I spent half of 2024 writing lolllll

I vacillate between “Why did I write this, this is weird” and “This is peak writing, I love it”

The other memes are so accurate too haha

@ellette-giselle

Lol. The evil authoress. They definitely do.

I mean, they’ve got a reason…

@ellette-giselle

Those are great. I think there’s a little bit of crazy in all of us. XD

Also, the last one is fabulous. I don’t think I’ve done that as an author, though. I’m usually the reader watching on in horror, lol!

Ivyyyyy Greeeeeeennn. Nooooooo!

@ellette-giselle

lol there was a space in the actual doc, I don’t know why it didn’t transfer over…

This seems a little odd, because 1. it is one of the more standard ways of swearing an oath, and 2. as a soldier he would know this from training and wouldn’t need to be told. I would say something like “swear the oath” etc. Something that tell…

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@theducktator

Yay! Hope you feel better soon!

@ellette-giselle Haha, your signature! XD

@ellette-giselle

eeeee yay!! 😃 I’m pretty much open to all feedback… yeah.

(I actually thought the dad was gonna die in this chapter from scene 1…. so I’m relieved that he made it. XD)

LOL

It’s like a family I know, expect they have 15 kids and it’s all “J” names.

😅 I guess great minds think alike lolol

Yeah, it’s not vital. It probably wo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Dante

“They’re… exactly what they sound like. Just set me down in that one over there. It will look less weird than you carrying me.”

Rory did, and Dante tried his best to not let any pain show while moving. He settled into the seat and looked around until he figured out how to unlock the breaks. The chair rolled forward a lit…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

XD This is what I get for trying to post when sick… @rae the message several above was for you.

@ellette-giselle

It’s hard for me to answer this because it kind of was a slap, but it also feels like the right way to end it. It made sense and concluded his arc. Like Whaley said, we were never promised he would live nor did his arc hinge on it. I’d file this under “books whose endings I will complain angrily about to my siblings but still…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

yeah ok I get that. There’s different kinds of tragedy, and it’s interesting how every country does it differently as well as every religion. Yeah I like those bittersweet endings too, I think they are more common in western stuff, possibly because of Christian influence!

Chinese and Japanese tragedies don’t usually end on the…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

XD oh boy, you like a good old tragic story?

Girl, Ellette writes some of the most tragic characters. She and Freedom make it their business to make KP cry, I swear.

Also, thank you. The hair took me forever.

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!. I may go back and put in some parts of the original design, but I said I would let this…[Read more]

@rae

You’re welcome!

oh my goodness you totally got the hair! Looks great!

@ellette-giselle

Ooo! *is immediately interested. XD*

XD oh boy, you like a good old tragic story? I mean you could look into it for yourself, if you don’t want spoilers I’m happy to answer questions. It’s a phycological thriller, it’s a little creepy and a lot of bad…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Also I love your signature lol