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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 3 weeks ago
lol there was a space in the actual doc, I don’t know why it didn’t transfer over…
This seems a little odd, because 1. it is one of the more standard ways of swearing an oath, and 2. as a soldier he would know this from training and wouldn’t need to be told. I would say something like “swear the oath” etc. Something that tell…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 months, 3 weeks ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 3 weeks ago
eeeee yay!! 😃 I’m pretty much open to all feedback… yeah.
(I actually thought the dad was gonna die in this chapter from scene 1…. so I’m relieved that he made it. XD)
LOL
It’s like a family I know, expect they have 15 kids and it’s all “J” names.
😅 I guess great minds think alike lolol
Yeah, it’s not vital. It probably wo…[Read more]
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-GRCR- started the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Hello hello hello.
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I’m rewriting TPE (I’ve renamed it to A Fire Within btw, so I’ll probably call it AFW instead) for the billionth time and I’m pretty happy with it so far, so I’m going to start sharing it again. Andddd… yeah. Tagging everyone I can think of atm, but feel free to ignore. I don’t want to bother anyone. 😅😅
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Dante
“They’re… exactly what they sound like. Just set me down in that one over there. It will look less weird than you carrying me.”
Rory did, and Dante tried his best to not let any pain show while moving. He settled into the seat and looked around until he figured out how to unlock the breaks. The chair rolled forward a lit…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 6 months, 3 weeks ago
XD This is what I get for trying to post when sick… @rae the message several above was for you.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 6 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s hard for me to answer this because it kind of was a slap, but it also feels like the right way to end it. It made sense and concluded his arc. Like Whaley said, we were never promised he would live nor did his arc hinge on it. I’d file this under “books whose endings I will complain angrily about to my siblings but still…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 months, 3 weeks ago
yeah ok I get that. There’s different kinds of tragedy, and it’s interesting how every country does it differently as well as every religion. Yeah I like those bittersweet endings too, I think they are more common in western stuff, possibly because of Christian influence!
Chinese and Japanese tragedies don’t usually end on the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 months, 4 weeks ago
XD oh boy, you like a good old tragic story?
Girl, Ellette writes some of the most tragic characters. She and Freedom make it their business to make KP cry, I swear.
Also, thank you. The hair took me forever.
Thanks!. I may go back and put in some parts of the original design, but I said I would let this…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 months, 4 weeks ago
You’re welcome!
oh my goodness you totally got the hair! Looks great!
Ooo! *is immediately interested. XD*
XD oh boy, you like a good old tragic story? I mean you could look into it for yourself, if you don’t want spoilers I’m happy to answer questions. It’s a phycological thriller, it’s a little creepy and a lot of bad…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Also I love your signature lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 4 weeks ago
Dante
“A wheelchair.”
He pointed with his free hand. There was one parked next to side entrance of the building. “You do know what those are, right?”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 4 weeks ago
sorry it’s short. I got stuck.
Dante
“Oh, so I can talk now. I don’t know. Up to you. Maybe we should steal a wheelchair. I’ve always wanted to do that.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 months, 4 weeks ago
@mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle
So, first, Min, thank you so much for the advice! It was genuinely the most helpful advice I got (I posted on reddit and Unvale and I didn’t get anything).
Second,
AH! Don’t touch it! Okay….. maybe a little, but leave the eyes and expression and hair. It’s perfect!!!
The expression is still there, but it ha…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 months, 4 weeks ago
Sadly I did not do my pfp lol, I think it’s official art from Link Click, it’s a Chinese donghua I really like. Idk If I’d recommend it here it’s pretty tragic. The art is great though!
Lol thanks, it’s a fandom reference to a kpop group I listen to. One of the members is called Lee Know and there’s some clip of him saying that…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 months, 4 weeks ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 7 months ago
XD But actually, in my memory (until you just recapped it) he was going to turn himself in and then they were attacked and he was killed protecting Jenna (?) and her family. I like that ending because Baron gave his life for someone instead of taking life…. but then that is also cliche for a redemption story (and cliche is not a…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle lol it’s not like I’ve ever done that in books so I’m not offended. I’ve just seen it happen.
tbh it is aggravating but it’s not as annoying as some other stuff people do in books so it’s pretty low on my list of Things I Hate In Books.
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Ruth replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 7 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 7 months ago
(though the wild one is more Baron-sih to my mind. XD)
Same. Don’t worry, he will keep his ruffled, unruly hair for most of the book. This drawing was supposed to be from his time with Jenna.
It does kinda hover in the area where you know who it is, but it doesn’t exactly look like him because of the hair XD
Thank you!
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