Ellette Giselle

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

It has been a very long time since I last posted on this topic (3 months apparently). First, I’d like to thank everyone who read my draft; it was a huge help, and helped me re-evaluate my entire story.

Second, I re-evaluated my story and have chang…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol, that’s hilarious! Love the little interaction with Huntress, it’s perfect.

@rae

Yep. Poor Sniper.

ikr, poor guy.

i love how it’s just like:

the character: is a literal assassin and would know like 10 ways to kill me if I got within a mile of him. Plus my augmentations to him give him two or three more of those ways to kill me.

me: I feel so bad for you, your life is so tragic. I would give you a hug if I weren’t con…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Something you might also want to take in consideration is whether he is relaxed or has adrenaline pumping. If he is relaxed when he gets shot, he will bleed out faster. If he is high on adrenaline his contracted muscles will hamper the blood flow giving him more time.

@rae

Gotcha.

@keilah-h

lol you know me well don’t ya?

i hope so. XD. i try to pay to attention to people’s charries…even when I forget the world lore…

I’m assuming you saw that image in the school roleplay lol.

Yep. Poor Sniper.

Also, thinking of Sniper getting shot, it hit me yesterday but Medic is definitely a parody of how real army medics will do<…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay. My limit is 4 hours of constant activity before I get tired. Then I need naps and food to get me back to normal again. If I’m not doing too much, I can make it through the day fine, but my stamina is terrible…again.

Otherwise, all’s good.

thx.

@esther-c

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going. A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so changing that up a bit mi…[Read more]

Alright, here is my feedback!

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

You know Tyn and Cyrus were my favorites from the previous book. In this book, I enjoyed James and Eric (post-memory wipe), both for their enthusiasm. Iskyagus was fun as well for the brief moment he was there.

~ Were there any c…

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@ellette-giselle

I like Evan, he’s probably my favorite. The other guys sort of blend together a little for me (that might just be a me thing though.) Amber is fun too.

@ellette-giselle

Exactly.

@ellette-giselle

Yikes. Poor Jonathan.

@rae

Thanks for the update!! I’ll keep praying!

How have you been feeling?

@rae

Yeah, I wondered if it was Sniper.

lol you know me well don’t ya?

If I remember correctly, he was shot in the chest and the side of his abdomen, right?

I’m assuming you saw that image in the school roleplay lol. I think that’s right. I don’t think he was hit in the heart directly, but yeah, I assumed it punctured one of the big arteries…[Read more]

UPDATE

Had my blood drawn for the blood tests yesterday. All went well except they couldn’t do one because I’m under 18, which makes no sense. It was only a heavy metals panel (which I wanted done cuz I have had problems with heavy metals before, and are prone to them) but I don’t understand why there was an age limit to it, and there was no…[Read more]

@keilah-h

How do you know all that shooting stuff, first of all?

I researched GSW’s a year or two ago for a character. He had been shot in the knee, shattering his patella and making it hard for him to walk without a brace by my lore. I wanted to see if that was really a thing (turns out, a form of torture is actually shooting someone behind the…[Read more]

@rae How do you know all that shooting stuff, first of all?

Second, thanks! Trying to figure this out cause remember in that fanfic I shared with you, that scene where the enemy team shoots Sniper? I’m writing scenes from his perspective and want to know exactly how long he would be able to remain conscious before passing out and eventually…[Read more]

@rae oh cool!

Anywho, I came to make a kitten update and instead started talking about morbid stuff…

@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper

Do you have any pictures of them?

not yet. I’ve wanted to take pictures of them sleeping (cuz they sleep in the most adorable and weird positions) but they’re in our barn…[Read more]

also, there actually is no need to google “How to hide a body” since all you need to do is look up the stories of serial killers. It’s actually pretty easy to get dangerous info by looking stuff up in less direct ways.