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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 19 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Next chapter. 30 chapters now. Wow.
Chapter the 30th – The Regretful
Also, of those of you who found spell images disturbing, there will be no more descriptions of them for the remained of this book. So you can continue reading without have to worry about that.
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 19 hours ago
400 more words.
I honestly can’t believe I’m sharing this…HUGE, MASSIVE, PLOT TWISTY SPOILERS
@rae you might wanna read this🫣
Hans is taking over his own story
“So, you figured it out.”
Hans stepped forward, fists clenched, eyes burning. “That’s why you never loved me…why you never…nev…
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 19 hours ago
Okay… I’m still working on my story…(sorry people! I pushed it off again until the last minute. *groans*), but Lord willing, I will post it this afternoon!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 20 hours ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
Stupendous points! Those are things I’ve thought about with a shudder. Some of our soldiers captured in Afghanistan were women. In one situation, she was the only one to survive because the medical staff of the place didn’t want to see her die.
Our Marine grandfather told my mother that she’d enlist “over his dead body.” Meanwhile, a…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
@elishavet-pidyon I love it💜😭😭
Is there no one else you can throw snowballs at???🫠🤣
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 21 hours ago
Good section! And I like the boards. I’m interested to see what will happen now that they’re in the city again.
Two things:
The first thing that I noticed was… I forgot who William was. I thought he might be one of Amelia’s brothers 🫣, but I wasn’t sure. I think, with the amount of characters we have, especially the ones we’v…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
*settles back and watches everything unfold*
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HighScribe replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 22 hours ago
But tall people are already appreciated. They can reach stuff in the high cabinets.
From what I can find, June 22nd is National Tall People day, but there is no Appreciate Tall People day.
What I wanna know is if there’s an Appreciate Slightly Above Average Height People day.
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Loopy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 7 hours ago
Everything you said fits. There’s definitely some gothic architecture and old buildings mixed in with the newer technology
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Loopy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 7 hours ago
I love all of these ideas thank you!
Wait, I just realized Brea might be too old to be watch over like that. Oops. XD Well maybe the idea can still be used with another young character.
No, she’s like 9 or 11ish. She was an unplanned kid, so that’s why there’s a big age gap between her and Lois.Your idea totally works.
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Loopy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 8 hours ago
@theducktator That’s some good advice right there
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Loopy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 8 hours ago
Didn’t want to make a new topic, so this seemed like the most fitting place for this.
I’m a bit stuck with my story rn and I just need some filler or something. So does anyone have ideas for things my characters could do/trouble they could get into? It could be as ridiculous or mundane as you want, I don’t care. Any idea is a good idea right…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 13 hours ago
Poor kid. XD
Well, he’s basically old enough to graduate, right?
We could just…idk, make him Leo’s apprentice or something. That could be funny. And crazy. And possibly dangerous, so maybe we shouldn’t.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 14 hours ago
So we could certainly use Barnes’s help.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 14 hours ago
It is a bit confusing. XD
I was taking them to Leo’s apartment (since the apartments have also been introduced before) to get them to a safe place where we can come up with a plan.
In order for Silvia, Quincy, and Rory to go back to school, we’re going to have to defeat/remove/in some way displace the Agents (and apparently for Leo…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 15 hours ago
I have FINALLY caught up with all my snowballs!!!!!!!!!!
and I wrote a Lotr paper while doing it. I thought I would post it here and see what you all think. (My father gave me this assignment in preparation for a Lotr New Year’s night out my siblings and I are having with two friends.
Why do you enjoy the…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 16 hours ago
Leo
He looked back over at Rory, a smile twitching his lips. The strain of carrying Quincy was obviously getting to him, but Leo hesitated to take back the small boy. Rory looked more like…himself with that small head tucked against his neck. More alive and real.
What had he asked?
“Ah. Not far, no.” But not…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 17 hours ago
Oops. Once again the amazingly brilliant Koshka forgets to complete and submit her RP. XD
Leo
The street was quiet, making him glanced at passing windows to watch their reflection.
Still no agents.
But his shoulders itched with the feeling of something just beyond perception. Irritating. He shoved his hands in…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 19 hours ago
Covid 19 was not the plague.
more people died falling out of their BEDS or being bit by SNAKES then from Covid.
Oh, right.
Well then. If you will, allow me to rephrase that:
Watch out, Joseph, Plauge restrictions are headed your way!
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