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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 oh…no he didn’t….Hitchens u do not know what you’ve done… @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
so imma write a bit of Paxton and Nathan write before Nyx’s outburst XD
Paxton
“E-Eleven? I-I’m El-eleven…”
“Yea?” Nathan smiled.
“I…I don’t have many…many fr-friends either…” Paxton looked down at his feet. “Or at least..I-I used to…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Nyx
“Why are you looking for him?” Nyx eyed the man, nose twitching. Grimm shot him a warning look but he ignored it. The man merely smiled, glancing at the fox, making his insides churn.
He could practically smell the cruelty coming off him…
The blonde boy with him…he seemed…a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 He, he… yes actually. Although he may have been beaten with rods not whipped, but I’m still not totally sure about that so I’m leaving it vague for now. Still…with all the convoluted circumstances in his past…and his own military position…this is bound to get interesting. @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Reuben had left…and Grimm couldn’t help but feel to blame. He looked around at the solemn room.
Zlatan seemed to tense at the strangers’ introduction, and Vulkasin placed a gentle hand on his shoulder. The other boys took the dark-haired man in with a tone of caution, appar…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 I don’t actually have everything figured out a lot of this is coming while writing actually lol!!! Proves I’m a pantser (actually a Plantser) XD
Grimm
The man, Hitchens, was trouble. That much was obvious. From the way Nathan spoke of him in hushed whispers, to his frightened looks whe…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHHHHHHHHHHH 😭 😭 MINE TOOOOOOO @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Officer…
Colonel….
Paxton shuddered. He knew someone like that…back home…
Lord Viceroy….
The boy squeezed his eyes shut, trying to rid the dark memories from his head.
(By the way this is a character I have yet to introduce to y’all…but…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 hitchens if you TOUCH DAWSON SO HELP ME!!
Paxton
The boy clutched Hope closer, leaning towards Grimm as the blonde spoke to him. He looked up at Wulf, eyes searching. Wulf nodded, a small smile on his lips.
Nyx glared daggers, sniffed the air. He purses his lips, gaze returning to the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 true… until he finds Dawson and the girls aren’t gonna let him have him….and if he goes after the girls….it’s on like donkey Kong XD tho they can handle themselves too…. XD!! @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Grimm
Nyx let out a low hiss. Grimm hoped none of them heard, but from the way both men glanced at the kit, th…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I STILL DON’T LIKE HITCHENS XD @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Nyx didn’t relax. “I don’t like him.” He whispered.
“Nyx. Easy,” Grimm lowered his arms, still keeping a wary eye on the taller man. The dark-eyed one. (Could u put a description of Hitchens? I know Nathan is blonde with blue eyes)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Nyx was still glaring at Wolfgang, unwilling to trust him. To let him and his brothers pass so easily.
The kit was loyal…sometimes to a fault, Grimm had noticed. And while he had gotten better over the years, Grimm knew some of his past.
Knew he, and Lyn even, still struggled with c…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 REUBEN NOOOOOO!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
The threesome continued on for a little bit, walking fairly slow. In silence.
Paxton glanced at Grimm. The dark-haired young man seemed deep in thought, brows creased and lips pulled thin. Paxton frowned.
Nyx tensed, ears flicking. He turned from…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Grimm
“W-Wulf?”
Grimm glanced at the white-haired boy, still clutching his leg with one hand, Hope in the other.
“Hm?”
“I…I’m sorry…” He whispered.
Nyx shifted on Grimm’s shoulder. Grimm frowned. “What for?”
Paxton stopped in his tracks, fingers loosely gripping Grimm’s jeans. He sniff…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon yall on?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
OOF…. Reuben… 😭 I’m sorry Grimm didn’t mean to do that…but you’ve just hurt him too….
Nyx
“Do you even care about anyone!?”
One of the younger men was being held back.
Reuben.
Paxton gasped, eyes even wider now. He let out a cry, stepping back. Wolfgang gasped, turning t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Vulkasin was skilled in his work. It took a while, but Leo’s wound was patched up rather nicely, considering what little they had to work with.
Still, Grimm couldn’t help but see the open wound on the man’s abdomen, bleeding out. Blood that ebbed and flowed, reminding him of a sim…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
All our poor charies! Seriously, authors can be cruel sometimes.
(The medical stuff in my books is not purely medieval. However, much of it is, so if something seems a bit weird, that’s probably why.)
The twins
Vulkasin seemed to have lost track of the conversations around him.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Thanks, Grimm, for breaking that up so I didn’t have to watch Crosshair and Leo verbally shred each other……
(no I’m serious.)
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Crosshair
“That’s enough! Both of you.” snapped Grimm, the wolf shifter. “Look, Leo,” he eyed the other man as he said it, “Your brothers are alive. I…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h hoo boy. Grimm’s gonna have to break this up… @elishavet-pidyon
Grimm
Leo erupted…
The fire and guilt in his eyes so familiar…
Grimm flinched but it was barely visible. He knew his friends probably saw it, but doubted anyone else did. He…he could see himself so vividly in Leo’s glare.
And then Crossh…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Okay then! So she’s not completely redeemed yet, but she’s starting to realize it?
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Feather
“No…there are others besides…mammals. Birds, ocean life. Whatever animal there is, creature, there’s usually a shifter form to go with it.” the little fox-like creature explained. He seemed to…[Read more]
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