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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Y’all can do whatever you want!
Besides the fact I haven’t thought much about it, so I have no idea. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Alright, here’s for my girls!
Annia
A soft breeze tumbled through archer’s loops, each about nine feet tall. A burst of green ivy danced at their rims having wound it’s way over morter and rock. This room was shaped in a fifteen foot hexagon, three of the sides looking out, one set with a…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon ALSO!! Thank u so much!! I’m so glad y’all like my charries!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon 🥺😫 I understand though.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHH LUV THEM!!! @koshka POOR ZLATAN!!!! @elishavet-pidyon
Grimm
“Woke up here. That’s usually how it goes. This is Wolfboy here’s first time in the castle, so…he’s a bit lost. Poor thing,” Nyx dramatically blinked and flailed, then snickered. Grimm stuck his tongue into the side of his mouth, narrowing his eyes at the fox.The tw…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon Oof poor choice of words Wolfgang but it’s okay you didn’t know 😊
Paxton
He flinched. Hard.
The other young man was coming over; Leo.
Paxton hid half his face in his bear. Wolfgang must’ve noticed his change in behavior, because his brows creased.
Leo chuckled, but not in a cruel, sadistic way.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ooooohhh, Paxton!!!!
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Vulkasin
His brother sucked in another ragged breath and smiled slightly. Or rather the corners of his mouth turned up, hardly touching his eyes. “I’ll be fine. It’s good to see you, Nyx.”
Vulkasin almost wrapped an arm around his brother’s shoulders, but instead rested…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
does Reúven die…..?
because I can’t remember and now I’m wondering and if he does……..
im going to be heartbroken.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
November
Viktor was all smiles, the same boy he’d once been all that time ago it seemed. Beside him was another young man, near the same age.
“November! Peace to you, brother. I’m so glad to see you again.”
Brother.
November’s fingernails dug into his skin, his palms beginning to burn. His face pale…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Brothers…
Paxton tensed without thought. He winced, hating himself for it. It was silly…
These weren’t his brothers after all.
Ara had told him families weren’t supposed to be like his…
So…not all brothers were like his…right?
“I like your bear. Does it have a name?”
Paxton lo…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka oh cool they’re the same ages!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Vulkasin. Zlatan. Strong names, much like those of his own pack.
“Nice to meet you.” Grimm lowered his torch slightly. His eyes narrowed in on the dark-haired one, noticing the worn, pained look in his eyes.
He didn’t get the chance to say anything, however,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon okay okay, look, Arabella chose to get eaten/killed okay….
not that that makes it any better….XD
She takes Paxton’s place, combining their blood and making them literal Blood Siblings.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 yea I mainly meant if it changes in my books but I don’t think it will either because Lilith has dark brown hair that falls in curls. She is a beautiful woman truly, but not on the inside at all.
Paxton
The boys…almost men…stopped in their tracks, eyeing him with varying expressions. His heart thump…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwroter76 AHHH LOVE YOUR CHARRIES!!!!! AND YAAAY SO EXCITED THE BOYS ARE HEEEEEREEEE!!!
Also Paxton will probably be a little quiet at first just cuz he is very shy and scared, so ya XD, let’s see how this is gonna go… @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Ara wasn’t here…
Neither was Ember.
Or Grimm, or Lynnie, or Luna, or Nyx.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon YAAAY MY NOVEMBER!!! And they actually probably won’t notice the age thing because u said Viktor is like 15…that actually fits the age of November being 17, because when they were last here Viktor was supposedly like 12-13 and November was like 14 sooooo ya.
also imma start a little before u ended 😊
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka OK THX!! My bad!! Ah, gold eyes pretty!!!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Two figures appeared in the stairway, their shadows dancing. Grimm adjusted his grip on the torch, holding it a bit higher.
The first young man, they looked nearly the same age as he did, (they are around 18-19 right?) had light hair, and was tall.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Oh btw y’all…I haven’t really thought about this….but thinking on it now….I think GRIMm would have some battle scars…
He was the leader of the small rebellion in his home, and I think he’d probably have some scars on his body.
Im thinking some along his torso, back, and one that runs across his sh…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Nyx & Grimm
Grimm lifted the torch aloft, shining it’s light across the dark cavernous expanse. He grimaced at the sight of hollowed rock and and stone, giving way to a staircase.
The walls seemed slick, old. Crusted over with grime and cracked with age. Whoever kept this castle obviously didn’t kee…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
So, a quick run down of what’s changed:
This is right after Zlatan’s Solution beat, so he’s a bit emaciated and weak, and has wounds from his beating which are still healing. He’s wearing no armor besides his sword, in an effort to reduce the pain. He’s struggling a bit with redemption right…[Read more]
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