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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Hi!! I’m back, but warning now, I may have to disappear again in the somewhat near future.
Zlatan and Vulkasin
The corridor was dark, the small oil lamp bright in his hand. Shadows swayed to it’s flickering flame.
Which way led to the brother and sister?
“Nyx,” Zlatan turned to the little fox. He…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy13 @koshka
Milla
No! She’d made a mistake! Their heartbeats which has slowed slightly at her words raced even harder than before when she’d used their names. She’d made a mistake any maybe screwed it all up.
“Wait!” She scrambled over the boxes after them, hurrying to stay close to them as they mounted the stair…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Milla
The children were moving again. Had they heard her? They couldn’t have; she was practically a ghost because of the Hand. Nothing would erase their ingrained methods of silent movement, now.
Two other groups of people met up elsewhere, their words faint but clear to her.
“Is everything alright?”
“Yes, but I suggest we c…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic If Hollywood adapted your novel… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@devastate-lasting @emilysf @augustinaii @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Thanks for the inputs! 😀
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Madelyn started the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 years, 3 months ago
Hey y’all!
So, I’m dipping my toes into allegories…
Who am I kidding, I’m diving right in!!
I would love all y’all’s input on this subject! Namely, what are some of your favorite Christian allegorical stories and what made them impactful? What parts drove to your heart? Narnia is definitely on the top of my list of Christian allegories, so i…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@koshka @emilysf @elishavet-pidyon
This is going to be interesting…
Viktor
They would not get his sister. He would not let them. They would suppose she was a truant slave. They would punish her for assisting intruders. They…
They would look past her Yartassite upbringing and see her Eirtanian blood.
But no, Alyona wouldn’t be the one to…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@koshka @emilysf @elishavet-pidyon HERE I AM! WOO LOL
November
“Run.” Zlatan’s voice was sharp and strong. Commanding. November’s eyes widened as the footsteps outside the door grew and a pounding thud sounded, like a knock.
He gripped Ara’s hand, squeezing it tighter then he probably should have, and rushed down the hall Viktor and Alyona had…[Read more]
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Alright, thanks! I’m going to be completely honest that I haven’t been following the story the entire time (I mean, it is over 400 pages…) so I’m not sure if I’ll be doing this right or not, but please let me know so I can fix anything! I’m not really sure how to do this, but I guess I’ll try… 🙂
My character’s name is…[Read more]
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@denali-christianson @godly-fantasy12 @koshka @emilysf @elishavet-pidyon
Wow, I’m late to this! XD
But I was just wondering, from the rules stated at the beginning of the forum, if there are already ten characters in the castle and if there is not, could I add one??
I totally understand if not! Just curious! 🙂
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @emilysf I’ll try to RP replies tomorrow! I’m on vacay but I’ll be sitting in the car for a while some tomorrow so 😊
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
I’m sorry this has been so late, but I’ve been preparing for a Bible Quiz Tournament tomorrow, which actually means I probably won’t be back on here much till after the weekend.
Zlatan
Guards.
The footsteps had grown loud enough for Zlatan to hear. Not to many of them. If they came through the door as would…[Read more]
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AnnabethKatherineWingfeather replied to the topic About Me- a Book Reader and Writer! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
My cousins are mostly out-of-state too, but we love doing shows together. Actually, one time some of us did a Felicity play(based on the second book) from a little kit I got. Casting was rather awkward, because I was playing Felicity and my younger cousin was playing Father. And he had to kiss the top of my head, being a foot…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Arabella
The coin thumped against the table. Ara stared at it, examining the insignia on the side she could see.
She sucked in a breath, thankful for Zlatan’s quick thinking and the fact that had such a thing on hand.
She…she had nothing to offer Alyona, and now…seeing the girl give A portion of food that must have…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Here goes!
Zlatan
He flinched at the force of the slap on his shoulder, then sighed. His brother was being his typical friendly self, reminding Zlatan that these were possible allies.
The lad looked to each of the group as they were introduced, then back at the brothers, dark eyes searching.
So this is who…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Arabella
Lyn, Nyx and Alyona were now accompanied by a boy around Ara’s age with brown hair, much darker then her own, that curled at the tips. His eyes were dark, as if he were…concerned, but something about his face seemed kind.
”This is Viktor!” Lyn introduced him, not giving him time to speak. She wasn’t being rud…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Vulkasin and Zlatan
She had closed the door behind her, not exactly how someone would react to a guard. Unless she was trying to cover for them.
Why would she do that?Vulkasin frowned. He didn’t need anyone to cover for him.
November suddenly spoke. “You’re sure?” he appeared to have been addressing the fox…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@koshka it’s ok!
Jocelyn
Alyona had stepped out and appeared to be speaking to someone. Everyone seemed on edge now.
Could it be a guard? Lyn was sure that if it was, their group could quickly tie them up using…something.
Or Zlatan and Vulkasin could knock them out if need be. Though, hopefully it wouldn’t come to that.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Eeeeps! Sorry… I’ll try to get something up.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon I think its ur turn btw (:
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Zlatan and Vulkasin
They were all looking at the brothers now, curiosity fully flamed.
Zlatan sighed. A memory of heat in the halls during the day brought a deep yearning for his snow crested home, although he was positive November had been shivering. The sharp smell of spruce and larch seemed just out of…[Read more]
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