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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
does Reúven die…..?
because I can’t remember and now I’m wondering and if he does……..
im going to be heartbroken.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
November
Viktor was all smiles, the same boy he’d once been all that time ago it seemed. Beside him was another young man, near the same age.
“November! Peace to you, brother. I’m so glad to see you again.”
Brother.
November’s fingernails dug into his skin, his palms beginning to burn. His face pale…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Brothers…
Paxton tensed without thought. He winced, hating himself for it. It was silly…
These weren’t his brothers after all.
Ara had told him families weren’t supposed to be like his…
So…not all brothers were like his…right?
“I like your bear. Does it have a name?”
Paxton lo…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka oh cool they’re the same ages!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Vulkasin. Zlatan. Strong names, much like those of his own pack.
“Nice to meet you.” Grimm lowered his torch slightly. His eyes narrowed in on the dark-haired one, noticing the worn, pained look in his eyes.
He didn’t get the chance to say anything, however,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon okay okay, look, Arabella chose to get eaten/killed okay….
not that that makes it any better….XD
She takes Paxton’s place, combining their blood and making them literal Blood Siblings.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 yea I mainly meant if it changes in my books but I don’t think it will either because Lilith has dark brown hair that falls in curls. She is a beautiful woman truly, but not on the inside at all.
Paxton
The boys…almost men…stopped in their tracks, eyeing him with varying expressions. His heart thump…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwroter76 AHHH LOVE YOUR CHARRIES!!!!! AND YAAAY SO EXCITED THE BOYS ARE HEEEEEREEEE!!!
Also Paxton will probably be a little quiet at first just cuz he is very shy and scared, so ya XD, let’s see how this is gonna go… @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Ara wasn’t here…
Neither was Ember.
Or Grimm, or Lynnie, or Luna, or Nyx.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon YAAAY MY NOVEMBER!!! And they actually probably won’t notice the age thing because u said Viktor is like 15…that actually fits the age of November being 17, because when they were last here Viktor was supposedly like 12-13 and November was like 14 sooooo ya.
also imma start a little before u ended 😊
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka OK THX!! My bad!! Ah, gold eyes pretty!!!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Two figures appeared in the stairway, their shadows dancing. Grimm adjusted his grip on the torch, holding it a bit higher.
The first young man, they looked nearly the same age as he did, (they are around 18-19 right?) had light hair, and was tall.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Oh btw y’all…I haven’t really thought about this….but thinking on it now….I think GRIMm would have some battle scars…
He was the leader of the small rebellion in his home, and I think he’d probably have some scars on his body.
Im thinking some along his torso, back, and one that runs across his sh…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Nyx & Grimm
Grimm lifted the torch aloft, shining it’s light across the dark cavernous expanse. He grimaced at the sight of hollowed rock and and stone, giving way to a staircase.
The walls seemed slick, old. Crusted over with grime and cracked with age. Whoever kept this castle obviously didn’t kee…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
So, a quick run down of what’s changed:
This is right after Zlatan’s Solution beat, so he’s a bit emaciated and weak, and has wounds from his beating which are still healing. He’s wearing no armor besides his sword, in an effort to reduce the pain. He’s struggling a bit with redemption right…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon do u wanna make an RP??
u can meet November!! I’m gonna RP as him, but if u wanna RP first u can!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon GASP NOOOO ALWIN!! The scars and shackle mark MAKE ME 😫😖 UGH!!!
But I do that to y’all with pax and November soooo…
ALSO UR DESCRIPTION OF HIS PANTS…
do y’all mind if I make that the kind of pants Paxton wears, (except a bit thicker cuz he needs it for warmer weather) ALSO yall just th…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon AHHH I LOVE THE EAGLE!!!
and of course I ALWAYS LOVE VIKTOR!!! Totally have the eagle!!!!!!
also….I kinda have some ideas for can meet who but again it’s also up to what y’all think/want
but I was kinda thinking it would be cool if Grimm met the twins. Nyx would know them, but I just think…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
I’m fine if you add her. She’s awesome, although she might could cause problems if she ran into Nyx…
I’ll let the others decide.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon AHHH I LOVE HIM!!!! So Viktor is staying??
also I think maybe the castle belongs to no one and we can add our own antagonists and villains and such. Just whatever 😂
Also YESSS PAXTON HAS MY HEART!!!! And Luna went so easily I was so pleased!! Hopefully it keeps going that way!!
Hmm I would like to start meeting some…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka
YALL WARNING- this….wrote itself again….yall Luna is just…actually coming along and I was worrying about her!! OK I LUV HER 🤩 but it’s long XD
LunaThe sun beamed through the paneless windows, blowing in a steady stream of heat and fresh air. Luna breathed it in, feeling the breeze on her cheeks.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Sorry, I just spent two hours on a research rabbit trail.
BUT, I’ve been thinking. I’m struggling a bit with Vulkasin’s arc, so I’m thinking of proofing the twins six months back, to the solution conflicts of their plots. They’d still have been here and remember all that, I’d just rewind t…[Read more]
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