@elishavet-pidyon
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Paxton
They were moving now, down the darkened hallways, lit only by torchlight.
Shadows danced along the walls, reminding Paxton all too much of the caverns leading to the depths.
Where the monster lived…
He stayed behind a bit, though not too far, as one of the young men was bringing up the re…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
woops, forgot. Here’s my really long response, again.
Hi Elishavet!
My novel is actually based on a short story I wrote which is partly based on a Sims 4 ad that creeped me out. The main character, Milo Trone, spends a lot of his time in a simulation. His outside life (real life) feeds into his addiction to the simulation. He…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
“Well! Now that that’s settled, which, by the way took forever, you guys are really bad at communication, could we get going? I, for one, would very much like to find Lynnie. Would one of you like to guide us, or shall I? How bout you canine?”
Canine? First Wolfboy, now a word neithe…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka AHHH ANNIA!! Asking if Luna is a fairy is sooo sweet!!! Luv it! @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Jocelyn
Two young women rounded the corner. One was younger then the other, with black hair, and a bright smile forming on her lips. Her eyes lit up as she spotted the threesome, and landed on Luna. She stared in awe, probably at Luna’s m…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Aannnndd I deleted my RP. Again.
*Dramatic sigh*
Cécile
She walked at a brisk step, heeled boots clicking in an even rhythm.
This place was nice. Comfortably clean, full of fresh un-sterilized air, with no messy situations to clean up. And none of the incessant rocking of the hospital sh…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
““If you’re going to be v’andering ze castle, V’ould you like to do so together?” Vulkasin addressed him, hand on his hilt.
Grimm frowned slightly, glancing at Nyx, who raised a brow with a smirk. The young man sighed slightly.
Grimm wasn’t exactly a people person…though he had gotten better wi…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka
ArabellaLuna seemed to be enjoying herself. Her steps were light as she seemed to glide from window to window, eyes sparkling in the bright sun.
The young girl looked at Ara and smiled, her skin glowing under her brightly hued hair. She giggled, pointed ears twitching. Ara smiled.
She hadn’t known h…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 They can join. =)
Thank you! I haven’t written much with either of them, so I’m figuring them out as I go.
The twins
The little fox kept verbally jabbing at the young man. This was familiar…Vulkasin laughed.
But, Wolfboy? As in, Wolf or Volk? Anyone with a name like that would have to be…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Y’all can do whatever you want!
Besides the fact I haven’t thought much about it, so I have no idea. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Alright, here’s for my girls!
Annia
A soft breeze tumbled through archer’s loops, each about nine feet tall. A burst of green ivy danced at their rims having wound it’s way over morter and rock. This room was shaped in a fifteen foot hexagon, three of the sides looking out, one set with a…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon ALSO!! Thank u so much!! I’m so glad y’all like my charries!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon 🥺😫 I understand though.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHH LUV THEM!!! @koshka POOR ZLATAN!!!! @elishavet-pidyon
Grimm
“Woke up here. That’s usually how it goes. This is Wolfboy here’s first time in the castle, so…he’s a bit lost. Poor thing,” Nyx dramatically blinked and flailed, then snickered. Grimm stuck his tongue into the side of his mouth, narrowing his eyes at the fox.The tw…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon Oof poor choice of words Wolfgang but it’s okay you didn’t know 😊
Paxton
He flinched. Hard.
The other young man was coming over; Leo.
Paxton hid half his face in his bear. Wolfgang must’ve noticed his change in behavior, because his brows creased.
Leo chuckled, but not in a cruel, sadistic way.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ooooohhh, Paxton!!!!
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Vulkasin
His brother sucked in another ragged breath and smiled slightly. Or rather the corners of his mouth turned up, hardly touching his eyes. “I’ll be fine. It’s good to see you, Nyx.”
Vulkasin almost wrapped an arm around his brother’s shoulders, but instead rested…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
does Reúven die…..?
because I can’t remember and now I’m wondering and if he does……..
im going to be heartbroken.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
November
Viktor was all smiles, the same boy he’d once been all that time ago it seemed. Beside him was another young man, near the same age.
“November! Peace to you, brother. I’m so glad to see you again.”
Brother.
November’s fingernails dug into his skin, his palms beginning to burn. His face pale…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Brothers…
Paxton tensed without thought. He winced, hating himself for it. It was silly…
These weren’t his brothers after all.
Ara had told him families weren’t supposed to be like his…
So…not all brothers were like his…right?
“I like your bear. Does it have a name?”
Paxton lo…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka oh cool they’re the same ages!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Vulkasin. Zlatan. Strong names, much like those of his own pack.
“Nice to meet you.” Grimm lowered his torch slightly. His eyes narrowed in on the dark-haired one, noticing the worn, pained look in his eyes.
He didn’t get the chance to say anything, however,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon okay okay, look, Arabella chose to get eaten/killed okay….
not that that makes it any better….XD
She takes Paxton’s place, combining their blood and making them literal Blood Siblings.
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